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Unemployment is getting increasingly serious in many countries. Some people think students only need to get primary education, while others think secondary education is necessary. What’s your opinion?

More serious unemployment across the world cannot be denied.There are probably many reasons for this, but the main reason is the limited knowledge or skills of some workers.It seems that most of employers prefer the employees who have had enough information along with skills to the people who earn a living at the cost of physical labors.

I would like to say that children should be encouraged to accept more secondary and even higher education.It is well aware that a good education can improve their quality and competitiveness . Because many students have been given high-quality education or useful training, they have had more opportunities to get in some reputable companies or Government departments.Furthermore, most of them are more likely to get promoted and development in the end.

However, other people argue that students only need to get primary education.They probably think that children cannot find a job even when they get in higher education.However,the students cannot take advantage with the people who have had a good education if they do not get more education. Knowledge and education seems to be the key to find a good job in the society that is competitive.

In conclusion, I would like to express that we should encourage children to have more education in very serious environment of unemployment rather than to allow them to drop studying any more. Besides, I think that the Government should set up more training classes free of charge to help more people who are in unemployment, for current problem is not less job opportunity but limited about qualified workers.

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A long-distance flight consumes the fuel as much as a car consumes in several years time, and causes the same amount of pollution as cars. So some people think we should abandon the non-essential fights (such as for touri*), and it is more efficient than restricting the car use. Give your opinion about it.

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