雅思写作思路：是否该禁止不必要的航空旅行

Topic：

A long-distance flight consumes the fuel as much as a car consumes in several years time, and causes the same amount of pollution as cars. So some people think we should abandon the non-essential fights (such as for touri*), and it is more efficient than restricting the car use. Give your opinion about it.

接下来分析一下这道题目，应该说上过我的作文课的学生会发现这次的题目不难写，因为我在课上重点分析过类似的题目。从结构上来说，这个题目毫无疑问适合用“三对一”结构来进行写作。以下为参考结构：

第一段：开头段

Introduce the topic (改写题目)

Statement (表明自己观点-Abandon non-essential flight这种做法弊大于利)

第二段：让步段 (承认这种做法有一定的合理性-节省燃料消耗，减少环境污染)

第三段：重点段 (论证这种做法会带来更多问题)

第一句：过渡句

第二句：分论点一

The practice potentially hinders the economic development in most countries. (需论证)

第三句: Theoretical Evidence (理论论证分论点1)

Abandonning non-essential flight-Employees in related fileds such as international tourist guides are likelty to become unemployed-Soaring unemployement rate-Economic development suffers

第四句: 分论点二

The practice is likely to bring about great financial disaster to some countries whose economy relies on touri* to a large extent. (需论证)

第五句：Case Evidence (举例论证分论点二)

可以以马尔代夫这样的国家为例。

第六句： 分论点三

The practice is also likely to cost people much more time on traveling, especially to some business people who need constantly travel from place to place. (Self-evident，无需论证)

第四段：结尾段

Summarize the nature of the practice-The problems outnumber the benefits

Restate the opinion-The practice is not a wise decision.

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