雅思小作文表格类的医疗状况对比图

话题是欧洲国家3个不同年份的医疗状况对比表格，原题为：The table below shows the medical care in 3 European countries in the year between 1982 to 2000.a Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features，and make comparisons where relevant.

题目：The table below shows the improvements in medical care in three different European countries between 1980 to 2000.

类型：表格题/动态图

考点/写作要点：

1. 时态：过去时;

2. 该题数据很多，可以先看总体趋势，基本上病人的数量和医院床位都呈上升趋势，住院时间呈下降趋势;

3. 其次可以进行各项之间数据的趋势比较(max/min/倍数/分数)，英国的病人数量是三个国家中最多的，在2000年刚好是奥地利的三倍;

4. 三个国家住院时间下降的趋势相似，值得注意的是在1990-2000年期间，美国的医院病床数量增加的趋势最快，其次是奥地利。

范文：

The table provides information about changes in the number of patients, average stays and beds in England, the US and Australia, as a result of improvements in medical system over two decades (1980-2000),

该表提供了由于20年(1980-2000年)医疗系统的改进，英国、美国和奥地利的病人数量、平均住院时间和床位的变化情况。

It is noticeable that because of the improvements in medical care, all three countries had shown a decrease in the number of patients over the 20 years. The same trend could be found in the days of staying in hospitals. Meanwhile, there was an increase in the number of hospitals beds in the three countries mentioned above.

值得注意的是，由于医疗保健的改善，这三个国家的病人人数在过去20年中都有所减少。同样的趋势也出现在住院的日子里。与此同时，上述三个国家的医院病床数量也有所增加。

When comparing the number of patients, it is clear that the UK held the highest figure, while the number was the lowest in Australia. By the end of 2000, there were around 260,000 of patients staying in the hospitals in England. However, in Australia, the figure was just one third that of England in the same year. Though the number of patients in the US was *aller than that of UK, the two figures both showed an upward trend from 1980 to 2000.

在比较患者数量时，很明显，英国的比例最高，而奥地利的比例最低。到2000年底，英国大约有26万病人住在医院里。然而，在奥地利，这一数字仅为同年英国的三分之一。虽然美国的患者人数比英国少，但从1980年到2000年，这两个数字都呈现上升趋势。

Another noticeable change is that in both the US and Australia, the number of beds increased dramatically by 5000 and 3000 respectively from 1990 to 2000, comparing to the change in England, with only a growth of 1000 in the same decade.

另一个值得注意的变化是，在美国和奥地利，从1990年到2000年，床的数量分别急剧增加了5000和3000张，相比之下，在英国的变化，在同一十年只增加了1000张。

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