雅思写作高分大作文范文：举国体育

Many countries spend a huge amount of money on supporting their compe*s to take part in some worldwide sports competitions. Others argue that it would be better if these countries can spend money on children to take part in sports. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

对比下面2021.10.20有关奥运会的雅思写作题目

Some people think that the Olympic Games is an exciting event and can enhance communications between nations. Others, however, think that it is a waste of money. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

雅思写作思路：

第一段：背景介绍。伦敦奥运会点燃对金牌排名和国家形象的热情追逐，大量的钱花在运动员的培训中，但国民健康却不容乐观。

第二段：让步段。参与国际赛事的必要性

1 培养优秀的运动员， 激励大众参与运动的热情

2 树立模范形象

3 激励国民爱国热情

但是：以失去大众基础健康为代价的巨大投机对纳税人不公平，而且有些项目的培训完全缺乏群众基础。

第三段：立论段。更多的钱应该花在少年儿童的体育健身上面。

1 少年儿童身体素质会影响整体国家发展

2 少年儿童身体素质会限制体育精英的后备选材

第四段：大众健康比体育比赛的结果更重要。只注重国家荣誉偏离国际比赛的初衷：参与，交流与理解。

乍看起来两道题有些相关，但切不可混淆为同一题。2021的雅思写作题目讨论举办奥运会的利弊。一方面促进交流，而另一方面费钱。今天的雅思写作题目虽然也牵涉到钱的问题，但是讨论的焦点转移到参与程度。一方面培训体育精英(prepare compe*s)很花钱，另一方面青少年的体育教育也需要资金支持。

雅思写作范文：

As the world has just witnessed a spectacular Olympic Games in London,which triggered a new round of ecstasy on global sports competitions, some experts, nevertheless, are once again expressing their harsh critici* against such extravagant investments of taxpayers’ money on this kind of events, especially amid a global financial crisis. Most of them propose the spending of this money in enhancing youngsters’ awareness of physical exercises on a regular basis. In my observation, such proposals are quite reasonable.

Admittedly, global sports contests not only provide audience worldwide with a perfect opportunity to enjoy the seamless performances of runners, swimmers and cyclists, but present host countries with a perfect chance to flex the economic muscle in front of global political and business leaders who are highly likely to either participate in such events as distinguished guests or watch live coverage of teams representing their countries via satellite relays. However, despite the above-mentioned benefits, money squandered in the opening ceremony, the building of infrastructures and the running cost of the whole events seems to bring little actual effect. This is even more true when young people in many countries, developed or developing, are being chronically deprived of their rights to daily exercise due to the lack of sufficient funds from the government.

Teenagers are at critical stages in life where the development of their immune systems and normal metaboli* heavily depend on proper physical education and therefore it is essential to guarantee that sufficient flows of money shall be funneled to ensure that children can take advantage of sufficient sports facilities at their schools or city centers to stretch their bodies aiming to equip themselves with better physical conditions to embrace the future challenges. Moreover, with academic achievements being relentless pursuit by teachers as the most important criterion when it comes to judging the talents of students, the budgets have been severely slashed. Such underfunding, if left unchecked, will inevitably lead to a vicious loop with the potential to not just derail the endeavors of young boys and girls who are indulged themselves extremely in sports, but compromise the capability of the younger generation to defense invasions of diseases.

Having illustrated grim consequences of the failure to facilitate the popularity of practicing sports among youngsters, I am firmly convinced that the administration shall not hesitate to increase the distribution of its fiscal capacity towards this direction. The intense focus from all over the world during the period is definitely helpful when it comes to impressing the globe with an enduring image of a nation characterized by tenacity, unwavering determination and relentless pursuit of higher goals. But these qualities shall be able to transfer to our offspring.

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