雅思大作文：the education system for today's world

雅思大作文题目：in some countries, secondary schools aim to provide a general education across a range of subjects. In others, children focus on a narrow range of subjects related to a particular career. For today's world, which system is appropriate?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

作文范文：

Resource input and immediate goals on education vary according to governmental policies within nations. In regard to secondary schools, some set up the whole range of subjects whereas others provide less for more specific future rewards for teenagers. Nowadays, from my point, I would stand for the latter due to its higher efficiency, more clarified direction and better experience.

Curriculum of all sorts have pros and cons for individuals. One major advantage lies in a wider perception of the world as each course represents a particular field that human beings have been developing and can offer a new perspective. Moreover, the students, through these courses, are prone to foster their initial but real interests and thus can make more rational choice on majors when entering universities. However, secondary schooling becomes more frustrating and shallow because students ought to prepare more subjects for inevitable asses*ents and less focus is dedicated in each one, which mounts burden and may be less competitive comparing to overseas freshmen in colleges for being too general.

In contrast, a narrower benefits students in different conditions in more persuasive ways. Poor families, especially in counties with less fiscal support on this industry, may drop out their young offsprings if immediate or short-term rewards are not realized from educative investment whereas a certain career out of specialized training guarantees the youth's rights of education. When it comes to the brilliant minds, this pattern ensures these potential specialists a good start as the habit of concentration can be developed. Last but not least, this curriculum setup allows students a *ooth fit-in of their first jobs and, if necessary and motivated, they can develop themselves generalists by the time they earn a stable income.

In conclusion, the second system seems more reasonable with the significant superiority but each can be more feasible in different regions and under various circumstances.

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