雅思OG写作Test1 Task2解析

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写作审题要(Task focus)
这是一道关于个人(individual)类的话题，是关于老题change的变形。这道题讨论的是在工作中的change，应该一直在一公司工作还是应该换工作。题干中给出了两个观点，并要求考生 discuss both views and give your own opinion。考生应该通过各种论证方式，分别讨论在一公司工作和换工作的优点，后给出自己的观点。

写作写作思路(Think before writing)
面对 discuss 讨论类文章，一般在文章开头交代一下背景信息，然后分段讨论两种观点的各自的优点或缺点，后再结尾段总结上文提到的观点，并明确提出自己的观点。在这篇文章中，开头段可以用自己的话重新陈述这两种观点。然后用一个主体段讨论一直在一公司工作的好处，再用另一个主体段讨论换工作的好处。在两个主体段中都可以列分观点，并且用符合逻辑的论证方式来支撑观点。后的结尾段，明确的提出自己的观点，要对两种方式的优点进行比较，而不是泛泛而谈。

写作范文演示(Sample *ysis)
Model Response
For most people, when they get their first job they have little idea whether or not they will
remain in the same organisation throughout their working life. If they decide to change, they need to consider how this will impact on their career overall.
People who stay with the same organisation have the advantage of thoroughly understanding how it works and also becoming familiar with the staff and processes. If they work hard, their promotion prospects are good and there is likely to be greater job security, with the promise of a good pension when they retire. Employers value loyalty and may offer additional incentives to long-term employees, including bonuses and reward schemes.
However, one of the drawbacks of staying with the same organisation is that the person may get stuck doing the same job year after year. In some cases, this can lead to boredom and
to have variety and acquire a range of skills and experience. A friend of my father started out as a sociology teacher, he then joined the Social Services and is currently managing a care home in Western Australia. This has made him incredibly knowledgeable in a range of related fields and, in my view, has provided him with a much more interesting working life.
Although there are benefits to working for one organisation, I feel that it is also valuable for an employee to be able to offer a wide range of experience having worked for different companies. As long as it is planned carefully, I feel that change is good and will ultimately benefit the employee and the employer.
disillusionment. Moving from one organisation to another can be a strategic decision in order

写作词汇句型(Vocabulary and patterns)
与工作相关的单词
• organisation • career
• job
• employee
• employer • staff
• loyalty
• retire
• bonus
• incentive
• knowledgeable • pension
与工作相关的词组
• working life
• job security
• reward schemes
• promotion prospects • long-term employees • skill and experience
句型
• ...have the advantage of...
• As long as...
• There is likely to be... • ..., with...
• ...in order to...
• In my view, ...
• Provide...with...
• One of the drawbacks of...is...
• If...
• ...may...
• ..., including...
• ...lead to...
• I feel that...
• It is valuable for...to...

写作范文亮点(Sample highlights)
1 段：改写原题
范文开头段先改述题目，提出一般人在刚刚找工作的时候并不知道他们是否会一直待在一公司，如果要改变的话就要衡量后果。这里用到了how this will impact on their career overall 来巧妙地引出下面 的主题讨论段。这避免了在主体段提出自己的观点，并且说明了接下来的主体段是讨论每一种方式会对职业有什么影响。这比直接说...will be discussed in the following passage要更为精妙。
2 段：主体段一
个主体段讨论的是不换工作的优点。范文中一共列出了 2 点。个优点是一直待在一公司可以彻 底了解公司是怎么运作的并且和公司的每一个流程和员工都很熟悉。二点优点是,如果工作努力，就会有晋升的可能和更好的公司福利。这个观点通过下一句话的例子来论证，说雇主会给长期工作的员工提供附加的福利，包括奖金和奖励机制。
3 段：主体段二
在说完了不换工作的优点之后，通过转折词 however 来引出二个主体段。先运用反证来说明一直待在一公司会导致思维僵化，并且进一步说明在有些情况下还会感到非常无聊又幻灭。接下来正面论证换工 作的好处。先提出分观点，换工作能使人更多变，掌握各种技能经验。然后论证分观点，用个人换工作 的事迹来证明确实可以通过不同的工作来增加自己的只是并且生活更有趣。
4 段：总结全文
后的结尾段总结上文的观点，先用although引导让步句总结个主体段，说明一直在一公司确 实有好处，接着提出个人观点认为，换工作更好，并用不同的语言总结主体段二段的观点来支持自己的观点。后为了使文章层次更深，使用递进法论证，只要合理规划，换工作对员工和雇主都有好处。
结语
整片文章观点明确，分段清晰，运用了不同的逻辑论证方法，语言运用不重复，,词汇使用得当，是非常清晰的discuss类范文，值得考生学习。

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