雅思OG写作Test3 Task2解析

为考生做了雅思OG写作Test3 Task2的解析。

雅思 OG 写作审题要 (Task focus)
这道题属于大作文中的*类话题。题目阐述了一个观点,即近三十年来有车一族急速增加,导致全球很
多城市交通拥堵。要求考生讨论这个观点是否正确,并针对如何解决这个问题,给*提出建议。也就是
说文章的必须涵盖两个方面的内容,一是要表明自己的观点,二是给出解决方法。

雅思 OG 写作写作思路 (Think before writing)
先从观点上来讲,既然题目中已经问到 ”What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars“,那么很显然这道题目是有倾向性的,我们好不要说 the statement is not true,不然后面就不好写了。一般开头会对这个话题背景进行讨论,给出自己的看法,结合这个题目 就是某种程度的同意题目中的观点。接下来我们就 brainstorm 一些方法,例如:*可以鼓励大坐公 共交通工具、把一些设施建在郊区、鼓励大假期高峰不要开车出行等等。每给出一个解决办法就是主体 部分中的一段。后结论段,把方法总结概括一下。

雅思 OG 写作范文演示 (Sample *ysis)

Model Response

Most people would agree that car ownership has increased in recent years and is causing a range of problems, particularly in built-up areas. I think there are a number of ways that governments can aim to deal with this. Many big cities in the world have traffic problems but these problems vary. For example, it is reasonably easy to drive around my city after 10 am and before 5 pm. However, outside these hours, you have to allow double the usual time to reach your destination. In some other cities, traffic is congested at all times, and there is the continue sound of car horns as people try to

get wherever they want to go. One of the best approaches governments can take in busy cities is to encourage the use of public transport. This means the transport facilities have to be well run and people must be able to afford them. Buses, trams and trains are good ways of getting around, and if they are cheap and reliable, people will use them. Another approach is to discourage people from actually entering the city by building car parks and shopping centres on the outskirts. Many cities around the world do this quite successfully and offer passengers bus transport into the centre, if they need it. At peak travel periods, governments can also run campaigns to encourage people to be less dependent on their cars. Apparently, a lot of car trips involve very short journeys to, say, the supermarket or local school. These are often unnecessary, but we automatically get in our cars without thinking. Clearly we all have a responsibility to look after our cities. Governments can do a lot to improve the situation and part of what they do should involve encouraging individuals to consider alternatives to driving. (299 words)

雅思 OG 写作范文亮点 (Sample highlights)
1 段:改写原题
范文开头段先对题目的观点进行了肯定,指出大部分的人都认为近年来有车的人在不断增多并且带来了 很多问题,特别是在楼宇密集区(particularly in built-up areas)。然后提出*有很多方法可以处理这 个问题,进而可以引出下文。
2 段:过渡让步段
文章接着用一个过渡段对话题进行了让步讨论,说交通问题在不同城市也是不一样的(but this problems vary),同时举例论证有些城市是早晚高峰期交通堵塞,而有些城市是一直都很拥挤(be congested at all times)。这样写的好处是避免观点过于偏激、对,使文章立意更全面。
3 段:主体段一
从这一段开始写解决问题的方法了,用 one of the best approaches 引出个方法,即*可以鼓励大 使用公共交通工具。这就要求公共交通设施运行完好(be well run),而且价格也需要是大可以接受 的(be able to afford)。
4段:主体段二
二个主体段提出另一种方法,是建议*把停车场和购物中心等等建在郊区(on the outskirts)。事实 上很多城市已经这么做了,并提供(offer)通往市区的公共交通工具。这段开头用 discourage *. from doing sth. 的结构给出主题句,很好的避免了用词的重复。

5段:主体段三
三个主体段给出了后一个方法,也就是*可以宣传(run campaigns)鼓励大在旅行高峰期不要 驾车出行,有些短途出行是根本没有必要开车的,但人们还是习惯性的开车外出(automatically get in cars without thinking)。这里 be less dependent on their cars 的表达用的很好,考生可以借鉴。
6段:结论段
结尾段并不是单单的把上文总结了一下,而是在强化说*可以做很多事情的同时,个人也是有责任参与 进来的(part of what they do should involve encouraging individuals to...),这算是后做了一点升 华。
结语
这篇范文分段较多,出现了六段,但是每段的内容和作用非常明确,所以这也是一篇结构清晰的作文。观
点的展开和论证使用了大量的实例和假设,很好的支撑了每个分论点。遣词造句可以说是这篇范文的大
亮点,考生可以摘录其中的词汇和短语,进行模仿和练习。
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