2021年4月5日雅思大作文思路分析

的慎浩老师为考生带来了关于“人们在一生中多次更换工作和搬带来的影响是好是坏？”这一雅思大作文题目的思路分析

Task: People change jobs and places of residence several times during life. Do you think it is positive or negative? (words=280 )

雅思大作文思段：题目改写仿写+正向/反向观点+自己的观点
社会背景：很多人往往会更换不同的职业岗位以及居住环境。
反向观点：一些人认为改换工作居住地会产生很多不利的影响。
自己观点：我认为人们这种做法有利于人们自身的发展以及居住地经济的发展。
Numerous people in current days tend to change occupations and dwelling environment. Some people consider that altering jobs can exert various unfavorable impacts. After serious consideration, I am convinced that such practice contributes to the development of people themselves and economic development of the local area. =46

雅思大作文思二段：论点+论据+例证+结论
论点：做出改变的选择——有利于——人们更好的发展。
论据：更适合的工作以居住环境———有利于——人们更好的实现自身价值以及改善生活状况。
例证：在大城市工作的很多人，在工作一段时间后，往往会寻找更好的发展机会，更好的薪资条件，以及更好的改善目前的生活状况，而做出改变的选择。因此，人们的这种做法使明智的选择。
结论：因此，人们的这种做法是明智的选择。
First and foremost, making choices conduces to people’s better development. In other words, befitting employment and residential environment can help people realize their own values and improve living conditions. For instance, a large number of people in metropolises, after working for a period, tend to seek better jobs with favorable compensation packages for a change in their life. From this point, people’s such practice is a wise selection. =68

雅思大作文思三段：论点+论据+例证
论点：人们的这种做法——有助于—加速经济的发展。
论据：人才的流动——提供动力——当地经济。
例证：人们工作以及生活的改变——使得该区域实现资源的优化配置——人们更好的发展，可以造更多的经济效益。居住环境等的改变——有助于促进房地产业，服务业及相关产业的发展。
结论：人们做出改变的选择是经济繁荣的必要计划障。
Secondly, such a phenomenon contributes to accelerating economic progresses. Undeniably, talent flow furnishes local economy with unremitting momentum. For example, people’s change of work and residential surroundings makes it possible for local areas to optimize the distribution of resources. Furthermore，people with preferable progresses can create more economic profits. Finally, people’s constant moving helps facilitate the prosperity and development of the real estate industry, service industry and correlated fields. Thus, such an option is an essential guarantee for economic prosperity. =81

雅思大作文思四段：让步段：一种观点合理性+however+对此观点反驳
另一种观点：
论点：人们更换工作与居住地产生一系列的问题
例证: 社会次序混乱+人们长期稳定的发展 不稳定
结论：对于人们的职业发展以及居住环境产生不利的影响。
对此观点反驳：
论点：人们这种选择 已经成为一种必然，
原因：自身的职业规划以及更好的发展机会与空
Admittedly, a series of issues can arise out of changing jobs and places of residence, such as social disorders and instability of people’s development, which can pose negative impact on people’s own development and dwelling environment. However, making such an option has turned out to be an essential trend, in view of people’s career plan and better developmental space. =59

雅思大作文思路五段：总结段： 概括总的观点
观点：人们的选择是明智而符合社会发展
鉴于：促进经济的发展以及人们自身发展的考虑
To sum up, facilitating economic development and contributing to people’s self-consideration present the preponderance that people make a sensible decision which coincides with the social trend. =26