2021年6月15雅思写作复习资料解析-A类

雅思写作 Task1 柱图
比较七个医生和其他职业的工资。

解析：
静态图，没有明显的时间变化。
此类静态的柱图，主体段重点应该进行具体数据的比较，每个内部以及和之间的数据比较都要涉及到。要清晰比较数据，先要做好分类工作---先分类后比较数据。
后，不要忘了总体数据的比较。
写法可参考剑4Test3.

雅思写作 Task2
Some people think that parents have a great influence on their children. Others believe that the media is a bigger influence. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

解析：
本次属于父母对孩子的影响以及媒体对孩子的影响的结合考题。
不管是父母还是媒体，对孩子都既有积的影响也有消的影响。

参考思路：
主体段段---父母对孩子产生很大影响：言传身教，从小就是孩子的榜样，潜移默化影响孩子，可举例说明。
主体二段---但是，随着孩子长大，外出学习，加上父母工作忙，孩子和父母相处时间变短，父母对孩子的影响逐渐变小，取而代之的是如今飞速崛起的各种媒体。先，孩子受到积影响：网络方便获取信息，网上交流；媒体上的明星起到榜样作用等等。
主体三段---此外，媒体消影响：沉迷网络游戏和虚拟世界；暴力情节；电视剧广告影响孩子的价值观，人生观，变得浮躁拜金等等。


相似考题：
A family has a great influence on children’s development, but the outside of home play a bigger part in children’s life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people think parents are very important for children to be good members of the society while other believe school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

We are surrounded by all kinds of advertising, which is significantly influencing our lives. Do the positive effects of advertising outweigh its negative effects

Is watching TV harmful or beneficial for children’s creativity?

Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children. Do you agree or disagree?