2021.10.19亚太雅思大作文7分范文及解析：花更多的时间去工作和学校

2021.10.19亚太 及解析：花更多的时间去工作和学校，以下是解析内容：

题目大意

人们花越来越多的时间去往工作地点和学校。有人认为该现象是积极的，另一些人看到它的消极影响。

写作思路

纵然反映了一定的积极性，但整体依然是消极的。

积极性：

增加通勤时间意味着可利用的碎片化时间增多。这种在通勤道路上的时间更容易被充分利用于一些习惯活动的养成，如阅读，或听音乐或其他媒体，或是使用移动设备。而相比之下，通勤时间较短的时候，这些时间往往会被浪费在诸如睡懒觉等事情上。

然而缺点更加明显：

碎片化时间并不真正能够培养习惯，因为在高峰时段拥挤的公共交通并不见得让人有机会来阅读或是听歌，而私人交通的使用者也会将全部精力关注到路面安全上而不是一些其他时间利用上。而这样的时间增加会让人总在奔波过后尤其疲惫，并且不得不睡得更早而起床更早，个人可支配时间比率明显下降

关键词

The best way：见到这个词，支持或反驳时必须要提出其他选择进行对比

提纲

高分范文

It is somewhat reasonable for those to argue that the lengthened time spent on commuting to school and work place manifests a positive development, but I would argue for its more outweighing drawbacks.

For those voting for the positive way of this trend, they may think that the longer time spending on the way to work place or educational locations means more time to be fully utilized. The fragmented hours on the road are always made better use of—commuters would find they may have to do some thing to enrich this period, and they may foster habits like reading newspapers or other publications, or listening to music or other stream media, and killing their time on mobile devices for online film or television watching, and internet purchasing. This time may otherwise be wasted relatively if it is not have to be spent on their way to offices and schools: once the time is shortened, people are more likely to use the time in the morning to be lazy in bed, or to waste their evening hours on meaningless activities like gathering with others or playing games. It is the feeling of the somehow increased usable time that makes people to support this type of longer time usage.

Whereas the thinking exhibited is relatively simple-minded because of its unrealistic advantages and more severe foreseeable limitations. The so-called better use of time mentioned in the paragraph doesn’t include the practical situations into consideration: no matter how ideal, the true scenario is always either a crowding subway and tram, in which people are too congesting to share any space to raise up their books and to *oothly read anything, or a noisy environment where music and other sound from earphones are outvoiced by the throng in peak hours. Things can also never go better even if people are driving and having more private space, since they mostly cannot be distracted by anything else but focus on the congested roads to avoid potential accidents. That is not only the case until one would find that the time efficiency throughout the entire day is extremely low, since workers or students have to get up earlier, to go to bed earlier and to spend at least longer time in vain. That may directly lead the feeling that time is always limited for one busy transporting between destinations.

In conclusion, even if positive may somewhat be persuasive, it still lacks full thinking about the reality, and the negative development are much more obvious.

相关词汇

Commute 通勤

Manifest 印证了

Fragment 碎片化

Foreseeable 可见的

Scenario 情境

Outvoice 声音盖过

Throng 人群