雅思6分写作如何备考/雅思6分写作范文解析

如何备考/雅思6分写作范文解析的内容是今天要分析的，雅思写作6分算是一个很好的分数，那么大要怎么准备呢?其实可以去阅读一些6分写作的范文。

一、雅思6分写作怎么提高之：语法概念

大部分考生在关于单复数与冠词类型的问题上还未有意识。在写作过程中，常会出现teacher ask me working alone 这样的句子，此为目前存在普遍的语法错误。经过稍微的思考分析，我们会发现，中学生在the的概念上也十分薄弱，他们觉得中文意思中没有的单词根本不需要进行翻译，但是按照英语的习惯，在单词可数名词上，不加冠词的情况是不允许的，只有个别的情况下表示总类或者个别特殊名词才会出现这种情况。

二、雅思6分写作怎么提高之：正确的英语表达习惯

事实上此为大平时表示的中式英语。一般学生在写作的时候，脑海中浮现出的是中文，此点相当于是对中学生而言是相当常见的，也是正常的，但是他们在进行中译英的时候，由于语法词汇和语言习惯的差异，没办法完整正确的翻译成英语，经常是把意思知道了，却将语法忘记了，亦或是只是记住了语法词汇，却将习惯用法忘记了，实际上，中文中的许多表达，属于省略的形式，在翻译的时候，必须考虑到英语的句型的要求和习惯，不能也像中文一样省略。比如: 要取得事业成功，必须坚持不懈。

三、 怎么提高之：把握词性

词性对于任何语言来说都是相当重要的，尤其是体现在写作方面，在听力和口语中，也许偶尔忽略下词性，还是可以理解意思，但关于雅思写作上，尤其是当考时，因为书写下来的文字都相当的清晰，再加上学术类文章对于格式的要求，单词的词性表达显得尤为重要。但针对考生而言，因为没有足够的单词作为基础，对于词性的掌握经常是个很大的问题。

雅思6分写作范文解析：

Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful *s. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, purpose of education being changed in Korea. There are some people who think that competition in children should be made, also others believe that children who are taught to co-operate as well as become more useful *s. There are advantages and disadvantages for both of the arguments.

To begin with, what is good if a sense of competition in children is made? They could develop themselves more and more as they learn and study a lot to win from the competition. To prove this, in Korea, it is popular- even common now- to have a tutor who come to student’s house to teach extra pieces of study with paying a lot of money. They learn faster than what they learn at school. Furthermore, during the vocations, students study abroad to learn English for a month instead of revise school work. If they have experiments such as study abroad, it is one of the greatest plus point to go to the famous well-known high school. Moreover, there are four big school exam and two national examinations to test students’ level of studies. Generally, only the highest 40% can go to the good quality highschools and colleges children learn as much as they can, to win the competition to obtain good quality schools.

On the other hand, as they are busy to enter the schools and study individually with their own tutors, there are problems. They become selfish. They become careless and don’t help others a lot if it is about studies. There will be no co-operations for them. Then, why are there companies for many people to work in? each of them are clever, however, there are weak parts and strong parts for each person. To co-operate is to improve this part. People talk and listen to what others thinking of and learn. That could also be a great opportunity to learn instead of learning alone with one teacher.

In conclusion, I strongly agree with that children should be taught to co-operate rather than compete. Nobody is perfect. People learn together, work together to develop each other. therefore, I want parents and teachers to educate children concentrating on co-operation, not compete and ranking them.

问题分析：

从论证大主题的角度而言，此篇文章的收尾是co-operation 更重要的成立的，但是这位考生在文字数量分配上却没有规划，分配给competition的文字明显多于给co-operation的，这样给了考官一个非常合情合理的借口扣分，实在是遗憾啊!

写作建议NO.5：If it is your preference, give it more reference.

若大认同那个观点，那么便在这个观点上多写点吧。

若大进一步看下Body段里的细节内容，事实上这位考生的语法功力以及逻辑论证能力比上面那位5分同学还有一定的距离，但是这篇文章将题目里的2个方面都提到，没有犯我的NO.3建议中的错误。除此之外，文字总量上这一篇文章称之为2篇都有对的优势，所以再强调下数量真的也很重要。