怎样写才能让雅思作文句子多样化

句子可以是长或短，同样的事情可以用不同的句子表达。如果句子是一个简单的句子，文章必须非常繁琐。如果整篇文章都是冗长复杂的句子，那么阅读起来会非常困难。一种好的方法是基于简单的句子，具有适当的平行和复杂的句子。简单的句子可以是长的或短的，通常有附加的组成部分，如分词短语，介词短语，副词短语，不定式动词短语和收缩组件。

总之，作者可以根据情况使句子多样化，使文章更加灵活。例如，以下五个句子的基本概念是相同的，但句子不同，内容有所不同：

(1) The goats grazed peacefully in the farm and were unaware of the approaching hunter. (并列分句(1)+2)

(2) Grazing peacefully, the goats in the farm were unaware of the approaching hunter. (现在分语短语+简单句)

(3) In the farm, the goats grazed peacefully and were unaware of the approaching hunter. (副词短语+并列分句(1)-(2) )

(4) There were goats grazing peacefully in the farm, unaware of the approaching hunter. (简单句+形容语短语)

(5) As the goats grazed peacefully in the farm, they were unaware of the approaching hunter. (原因副词从句+主句)

(1)和(5)的句子是常见的;如果其他三个是交替的，那句话不是更多样化?

看看这两句话是如何分散的?

(6) The young pilot was on his first overseas training.

(7) He felt very uneasy.

(a) The young pilot on his first overseas training felt very uneasy.

(b) The young pilot felt very uneasy during his first overseas training.

(c) The young pilot''''''''s first overseas training made him feel very uneasy.

(d) Extreme uneasiness seized the young pilot on his first overseas training.

(e) The young pilot was on his first overseas training, feeling very uneasy.

(f) It being his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy.

(g) Being on his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy.

(h) The young pilot was on his first overseas training and felt very uneasy.

(i) The young pilot, who was on his first overseas training, felt very uneasy.

(j) When the young pilot was on his/first overseas trainging, he felt very uneasy.

(k) As the young pilot was on his first overseas training, he felt very uneasy.

(l) The young pilot was on his first overseas training, so that he felt very uneasy.

在上述12个句子中，(a) - (g)是简单的句子; (h)是平行句; (i) - (l)是复杂的句子。除了(b)和(g)之外，没有太多其他简单的句子。人们喜欢使用复杂的句子，特别是(j)和(k);然后是平行句(h)。如果大多数人的句子被限制为(b)，(g)，(h)，(j)和(k)中的五种，而其他人正在放弃，那不是很可惜吗?