分析雅思满分作文7大语言特点突破雅思难点

更新：2021年12月31日 22:57 雅思无忧

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分析雅思满分作文7大语言特点突破雅思难点

每当雅思考过后都会出现满分作文，这个人或许不是你，但是却是考场中的一员，说明满分作文是有可能的，那么满分作文都具有什么特点呢？如果你也想得满分，就一定要掌握。今天老师就为大分析一下雅思高水平的文字的特点。大要积模仿。所采取的资料全部是来自剑桥9-11的范文。

1 平行结构多

Although I do not support an outright ban on such activities, I do feel that government should restrict or regulate these pursuits.

这句话考官用两个动词调节语气，词汇准确，而且修辞上头韵的效果，大多收集意思相近的动词，动词的排列是很体现语言水平的。

Advocates of this believe that today’s sedentary lifestyle and stressful working conditions mean that physical activity is no longer part of either our work or our leisure time

形容词+名词的排列，意思上表达全面，语感上佳。

The variety of sports that could be offered would cater for all ages, levels of fitness and interests

名词的排列特别注意下意思的递进。逻辑全面性的体现。

2 围绕中心词写出长修饰

In fact it would be fair to maintain that if extreme sports were banned, then why not ban any activity which could be interpreted as harmful such as *oking, drinking or even eating junk food?

上海雅思培训 老师表示，大一定要培养宾语的扩展能力，写出中心名词后，用定语从句进行修饰。这是英汉之间语言的大区别。英语是先给中心词，后面加上修饰。中文习惯定语放在名词的前面。文中中心词是activity，后面是拓展部分。

3 谓语动词多样化处理

Rather than banning these sports， governments should ensure that companies who provide facilities for dangerous sports meet the required legal safety standards.

多个谓语动词处理有两种方式，一个是连接词衔接，动词原形排列，一个非谓语表达（to do/doing/done）体现多样性。但是，大一定要注意非谓语的排列顺序会有逻辑效果，所以要格外严谨。

we would be more likely to make exercise a regular part of our lives, rather than just collapsing in front of the screen every evening.

非谓语表达强调结果的逻辑。

4 插入语多见

If, for example, an individual decided to go parachute jumping, then the authorities should insist that he or she undergo sufficient training and supervision and, if necessary, obtain the legally required license

插入语是有难度的手艺，需要有积累，位置摆的要有讲究。既要考虑语法，又要兼顾意思。需要长期练习。

5 状语处理

介词是英语的灵魂，介词引导状语是考官的惯用手段。介词的搭配和位置是英语写作的重点难点，一个人对于介词的驾驭直接体现语言水平。状语可以丰富句意，意思上更加全面。这是语言严谨性，逻辑性的直接体现。主要是时间，地点，方式，条件，目的等等。

One problem of modern societies is the declining level of health in general population, with conflicting views on how to tackle this worrying trend.（伴随状语）

If there were easy-to

reach local sports centers, we would be more likely to make exercise a regular part of our lives, rather than just collapsing in front of the screen every evening.（地点状语）

This has the added benefit the parents and children often use them together just for fun which develops a positive attitude to exercise at an early age.（at时间状语细节展示）

As well as physical activity, high tax penalties could be imposed on high-fat food products, tobacco and alcohol, as excessive consumption of any of these contributes to poor health.（as引导原因状语）

6概念到具体的过程

The variety of spors that could be offered would cater for all ages, levels of fitness and interests: those with painful memories of PE at school might be happier in the swimming pool than on the football pitch.

细节化的展示是雅思作文的特点。从抽象到具体，从概括到细节。大要学会这种演绎法的思路。

Physical activity could be encouraged relatively cheaply, for example by installing exercise equipment in parks, as my local counsel has done.

7不写简单句

考官的范文中，简单句出现的次数屈指可数，非常罕见。几乎一篇只有一两句。

Interest in sports is not universal and additional facilities my simply attract the already fit, not those who most need them.

这句话，本来是两个简单句，但是考官用连词搭配，变成复合句。所以，当大简单句太多时，一定注意下连接词把这些简单句整合起来。但是，一定要注意逻辑关系，表达严谨性。

以上介绍的雅思满分作文的7大语言特点， 上海雅思培训 老师建议同学们一定要掌握，平时备考好好练习，从写句子开始，到段落，再到整篇，逐步冲向，让雅思写作不再难。还有更多雅思写作方面的疑问，可直接咨询在线老师。

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