揭晓谜底|雅思写作小作文数据如何表达有新意

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我们在写作的时候，通常会想一些新鲜的词汇或者表达方式来让考官眼前一亮，为我们的成绩做铺垫，那么在使用数据的时候应该如何描述呢？今天雅思培训老师就来为大揭晓雅思写作小作文数据如何表达有新意，下面我们一起来看看！

静态数据描写句型

句型变化的核心：变化主语

锦上添花：动词的替换

再添花：复杂句的使用

表达大小：

例： in 2021, the youth unemployment in UK:20%; in Germany: 10%

More than/ higher than (基础)

用名词选项作主语：

In 2021, the youth unemployment rate in the

更精确：

In 2021, the youth unemployment rate in the

用作主语：

TheUKshared a higher proportion of youth unemployment thanGermany,with 20% and 10%, respectively.

更精确：

TheUKshared a two times higher proportion of youth unemployment thanGermany,with 20% and 10%, respectively.

用数据作主语：

In 2021, 20% young people in theUKgot unemployed, which was higher thanGermanywhere only 10% of them in the same situation.

用特殊词汇：Overtake/exceed/outnumber（表达超过，主语常用名词选项表达的数量，请注意outnumber的用法）

The number of unemployed youngster in theUKovertook/exceeded that inGermany,with 20% and 10%, respectively.

Youngsters getting unemployed in theUKoutnumbered that inGermany,with 20% and 10%, respectively.

用特殊句型（句型）：

The number of unemployed youngsters in theUKconstituted 20%, which *aller proportion of young *s getting in the same situation inGermany, at 10%.

用表达倍数的词汇：

Double/triple/quadruple

Bexxx times

The proportion of youth unemployment in theUKdoubled that inGermanyin 2021, with 20% and 10% respectively.

句型变化：In 2021, the proportion of youth unemployment in the UK was 20%, which doubled the percentage in Germany(10%).

The proportion of youth unemployment in theUK was two times that inGermanyin2021, with 20% and 10%, respectively.

句型变化： In 2021, the proportion of youth unemployment in the UK was 20%, which was two times the percentage in Germany(10%).

如何表达一组差距大的静态数据：

例句：The biggest difference was at the skilled vocational diploma, where 90% of men held this qualification, compared with only 10% of women.

转化（换动词+复杂句型）：Men with a skilled vocational diploma largely outnumbered their female counterparts, which formed the biggest difference in the proportion of qualifications between men and women.

转化（换动词+复杂句型）：The number of men with a skilled vocational diploma largely overtook that of their female counterparts, which formed the biggest difference between the proportions of men and women in their qualifications.

如何做组内的两个数据对比？ 请参考C4T1表格，数据被分为老年组，夫妇组，单身组。分好组之后先做组与组的对比，然后在对比组内的数据。如果组内的数据只有两个，那么请参考如下句型。

两种句型：

Couples tended to be better off, with higher poverty level for couple with children(12%) than that for couples without children(7%). 注意，with引导的立主格结构不是完整的句子，往往没有谓语，请注意！

Couples tended to be better off, while couples with children(12%) had a higher poverty level than couples without children(7%). 注意：while后面可以加完整的句子，所以用法不同。请注意！

动态数据表述（词汇请参考前一份讲义）

如何表达某个量的上升下降？

句型：见证结构（量，时间，地点都可以用来做主语）

替换主语+替换动词

The GDP in China experienced a dramatic growth, rising from 20% in 2008 to 50% in 2021.

China witnessed a dramatic rise in its GDP levels, growing from 20% in 2005 to 50% in 2021.

The period between 2008 and 2021 saw a significant increase in Chinese GDP, rising from 20% to 50%.

请注意，不管是用哪一个主语，它的量都是说清楚的，请看横线部分，如果少了这些就不对。

此外，还可以用以下两种句式：

主动：

The GDP in China increased spectacularly from 20% in 2008 to 50% in 2021.

被动：

A dramatic increase was indicated in Chinese GDP between 2008 and 2021, rising from 20% to 50%.

对比动态幅度，注意，只有两个趋势相同才能对比幅度，否则无意义。对比的范文清参照C7T3小作文

两句话：

The consumption of beef and chicken fell dramatically to around 100 and 60 grams respectively in 2004. The amount of fish consumed also declined, but much less significantly to only about 50 grams in the end of the period.

一句话：

The consumption of beef and chicken fell dramatically to around 100 and 60 grams respectively in2004,while a less significant downfall was indicated in the amount of fish consumed, declining to 50 grams in the end of the period.

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