雅思写作|这些逻辑错误9成考生都会犯

近上海雅思培训老师发现，在雅思写作时，很多烤鸭的文章得分都不高。主要是因为犯了逻辑错误，要知道逻辑错误在雅思写作中是非常严重的失误，会导致你的得分很低。因此，今天特地整理出了在雅思写作中，比较常见的逻辑错误，希望大可以避免犯这些错误，取得心仪的成绩。

逻辑错误1、审题未抓准题眼

关于题目Some people think reading books is more useful in developing young people’s languages skills and imagination than watching TV and surfing the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree？常见的跑题观点有：“reading books可以增加知识”、“看书可以开拓视野”、“TV和Internet上有的知识更多”。

为什么这些观点是跑题的呢？因为这些观点丝毫没有提及“language skills and imagination”这个“目标关键词(goal keywords)”。目标关键词是主题关键词在题中执行的动作或者产生的效果，所以目标关键词是一个题目的“题眼”。一旦偏离“题眼”，必定下笔千言，离题万里。

再来对比下面这道题目：

T2: Some people think reading stories in books is better than watching television or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

在这个题目中，并未出现“language skills and imagination”这个明显的关键词，只出现了一个“better than”，限定条件更少，所以可以写更多的观点。但是这个题目对主题关键词有限定，因为这个题目讲到的是“reading stories”。

逻辑错误2、单词误事

关键词汇的悟错误，会导致整个题目的崩塌。那么由于词汇量的限制导致跑题的场景也很多。例如，Nowadays, it is widely accepted that social skills are as important as good qualifications for success in a job. Do you agree or disagree?很多同学将qualification理解为“品质quality”，于是就导致了跑题。

那么没有逻辑错误的文章是怎样的呢？我们来看一下范文

雅思大作文范文赏析

Despite the undeniable importance of the general public services mentioned, it would be unreasonable and undesirable for the state to allot its financial budgets disproportionately, with one sector overwhelmingly outweighing another. (此句承接上文) From my perspective, the fiscal appropriation in art and recreation is by no means a waste of money; on the contrary, it is equally crucial to meet the public need as well as boost the local economy.(此句为“启下”的过渡句，并作为下一段的主题句)

Art and culture, including music, theatre and opera, can be a historical tradition in various countries. The West End theatre of London, comparable with the Broadway theatre in New York City, is a good case in point. Not only does the West End theatre reflect the history and culture of the United Kingdom, it also serves as a landmark of Central London, therefore becoming the national treasure of the proud British. (使用了美百老汇和英伦敦西区剧院的例子，去论证“艺术是一个的文化传统”的论点。)More importantly, both the West End theatre and the Broadway theatre are major tourists attractions, offering entertainments for local Londoners and New Yorkers and earning remarkable revenue from oversea visitors. Hence, governmental funding in art and theatre would be paid off.(通过后一句照应题目“*应该重视art”收束全文，同时与本段主题句遥相呼应，乃本文画龙点睛之笔。)

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