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雅思小作文的常见小错误,来看看自己有没有犯

雅思小作文的常见小错误,来看看自己有没有犯 !雅思小作文,有时候自己预测的分数往往和实际的分数有所偏差,原因是什么呢? 老师提醒:小作文里面有些句子很容易出现小错误,可要注意了喔!
这些句子里有什么错误?
In 2000, oil price was slightly higher than food price.
Over 6-years later, there was a dramatic increase of oil price.
The index of price rose by 36 points at the same period.
After the trough in 2009, food price indicate an abrupt increase in 2021.
The average oil price came to about $72 in the middle of 2006.
The food price index arrived at approximately 240 points.
This is the lowest figures throughout the period as a whole.
如果看不出来错,那你的小作文多5.5分。小作文是高度考验语言准确性的,同样的意思,不同的语言质量决定不同的分数。以下是改正。
In 2000, oil price was slightly higher than food price.
In 2000, THE oil price was slightly higher than THE food price.
price是可数名词,那怕前面加了修饰词food/oil也不能单出现,而要加the表示泛指。
Over 6-years later, there was a dramatic increase of oil price.
Over THE FOLLOWING 6 years, there was a dramatic increase IN THE oil price.
Over...later不能搭配,要么是Over the X years,要么是X years later。an increase in sth表示增长的方面,an increase of sth表示增长的数额或者差额。
an increase in spending 开支的增长
an increase of 2p in the pound on income tax 所得税每英镑增加 2 便士
an increase of nearly 20% 近 20% 的增长
The index of price rose by 36 points at the same period.
The FOOD PRICE index rose by 36 points DURING the same period.
index这个可数名词表示指数的时候的用法是The+修饰词+index
如果出现在the/an index of sth是,表示指标,例如:
The number of new houses being built is a good index of a country's prosperity. 新建房屋的数目是繁荣的一个有用指标。
原文错把指数当成了指标。
After the trough in 2009, food price indicate an abrupt increase in 2021.
After FALLING in 2009, food PRICES INCREASED SIGNIFICANTLY in 2021.
还是price这个单词的用法,the+可数名词单数或者可数名词复数表示泛指。其他就是style(文风)的问题,小作文有一定学术性,写作中不宜journali*。所以要用decrease significantly,而不用plunge/plummet.
The average oil price came to about $72 in the middle of 2006.
The average oil price in the middle of 2006 WAS ABOUT $72 PER BARREL.
come to不用在价格上。时间词如果是介词,好紧跟名词之后,这是严谨的表达。
The food price index arrived at approximately 240 points.
The food price index REACHED approximately 240 points.
arrive at/come to 不和数字搭配。
This is the lowest figures throughout the period as a whole.
THESE WERE the lowest figures SHOWN ON THE GRAPH.
时态问题。this+单数名词,these+复数名词。throughout the period as a whole没有语法错误,但肯定不如shown on the graph严谨,因为我们所描述的图标,图标上的数据很有可能是编造的,并不一定是当时(the period)的真实情况。

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