2021年2月28日雅思大作文复习资料（利弊分析）

的老师为考生分析了2021年2月28日的雅思考大作文题目，并从开头，主体和结尾三个部分给大分析了该如何应对此类雅思大作文题目
Some students take one year off between finishing school and going to university, in order to travel or to work. Do you think the advantage outweigh disadvantage?
雅思大作文题目分析：
类似的文章曾在05年5月14日及09年9月26日考过：

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Some school leavers travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

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In some countries ，some high school leavers are choosing to work or travel for a period of time before going to the university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for those school leavers’ decision. Give your own opinion and reasons using your own experience.

这种换汤不换药的情况屡见不鲜，关于gap year的利弊也是老生常谈，gap year常见的利处在于：体验世界、定位职业、放松调整、建立自信和经历、丰富简历……，常见的弊端在于：学习不连贯甚至可能造成不重返学习、毕业时间晚。可见，gap year的利处比起弊端多得太多了，所以利大于弊的立场容易着手，并且这也是外的现状和主流观点。那么下面我们就来看一篇常规范文吧：

雅思大作文 开头段Introduction:

It is not uncommon that （ 1 ） young people suspend their courses for one-year travel or work. Personally, the advantages of it prevail over its disadvantages.
开门见山表面立场——优点多于缺点
（1）双重否定表示强调，在阐述某常见现象时，考生可以用it is not uncommon that替代it is common that...

雅思大作文 主体段Main body:

Some people might argue that （ 1 ） the gap year would discourage students’ ambition on their study. After exposing （ 2 ） themselves into society or nature, senior high school graduates feel themselves no longer disciplined in their study and do not return to college. However, given a year off （ 3 ） , youngsters have the opportunity, time as well as the very ability to make future blueprints. Thus, whatever they decide is, to a large extent （ 4 ） , reasonable and countable （ 4 ） .
段内驳论，表明“人们认为gap year会导致辍学”的缺点，其实也是经过学生再有时间、机会和能力的基础上作出的理性思考。
（1）宾语从句
（2）现在分词作状语
（3）条件状语从句的过去分词简化
（4）插入语
（5）押尾韵
注意此段的语法句式多样化，考生可以仿写

For those who （ 1 ） would recontinue their academic life, taking a year off traveling （ 2 ） produce many positive outcomes on their school life. Students usually spend 12 years on exhaustive courses and examinations before they are admitted to their dream colleges and universities. Taking a year break （ 3 ） to travel would afford them the opportunity to approach the next phase of their education with a fresh start and renewed vigor while starving off academic burnout(4) .
回归学校的学生在学业上得到的好处
（1）表示类指的定语从句（也可以用单数形式he who...）
（2）（3）动名词作主语
（4）注意小词的使用让文章更生动

In terms of people’s future plan, a gap year is also beneficial to students. It could be a pilot run for your career.This kind of experience would be a valuable notch to students’ CV, which might be an entry ticket when they entering the work force after earning academic degree. Besides boosting their resume , a gap year would absorb the shock of leaving the academic environment. The concern of gearing themselves to the working environment was experienced before they went to colleges or universities.
回归学校的学生在日后工作上得到的好处
本段苗老师特地简化了语法，多用了小词，旨在告诉考生，考的时候切忌用大词显示自己的词汇量。目前就连外作都风行“PLAIN ENGLISH”的运动，即“用简单的词表达确切生动的意思”。平时考生可以想一想已知词汇如何用对用活，这比填鸭式背新词重要并且提分快。

雅思大作文 结尾段Conclusion:
To conclude, having a year traveling or working is, by all means advantageous for students.
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