雅思写作复习资料及分段方式解析

上一节课，写作规划师刘伟楠老师为雅思班学生带来了 ， 接下来我们通过看一篇雅思考官写的文章来了解一下 雅思写作复习资料及分段方式解析 。

It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.（剑7，test 1.）

这是一篇关于先天与后天的问题。我们看一下雅思写作考官的中心段的前两段。

Obviously, education systems are based on the belief that all children can effectively be taught to acquire different skills, including those associated with sport, art or music. So from our own school experience, we can find plenty of evidence to support the view that a child can acquire these skills with continued teaching and guided practice.

However, some people believe that innate talent is what differentiates a person who has been trained to play a sport or an instrument, from those who become good players. In other words, there is more to the skill than a learned technique, and this extra talent cannot be taught, no matter how good the teacher or how frequently a child practices.

我们发现在这两段中作者并没有急于给出自己的想法，而是通过别人的观点（based on the belief；some people believe）来浅显的对先天和后天进行解释。然后作者的重点放在了中心段三段上，即自己的观点。

I personally think that some people do have talents that are probably inherited via their genes. Such talents can give individuals a facility（天赋）for certain skills that allow them to excel, while more hard-working students never manage to reach a comparable level. But, as with all questions of nature versus nurture, they are not mutually exclusive. Good musicians or artists and exceptional sports stars have probably succeeded because of both good training and natural talent. Without the natural talent, continuous training would be neither attractive nor productive, and without the training, the child would not learn how to exploit and develop their talent.

考官后选择了折中的写法，即二者缺一不可。好，我们来总结一下这种写作方法。先在前两段对正反方的观点进行必要的观念解释，但不必深入。后在三段中给出自己的观点，辩证的分析。

接下来看一个实例。

Some people think that the main purpose of school is to turn children as a good citizens and workers, rather to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

这是2021年8月13号的雅思大作文复习资料。问的是学校应该培养孩子成为好市民还是让他们个人受益。我们着用考官的方式来做这个题目。

中心段一：教育是用来造福的。→*拿钱办教育，目的是为了的强大。→教育学生今后成为好的市民和工作者是每个教育机构的责任。

中心段二：教育应该服务于个人。→*的职责就是造福市民。→只有人民幸福了才会被成为好的。

中心段三：我觉得二者并不矛盾（此时需要辩证的看问题）。→好的市民意味着的安宁。→只有在好的大环境下个人的利益才能得以实现。→相反的，个人的利益是人们努力的动力。→他们在寻求自己利益的同时自然地在为和集体造价值。→因此，利益是大方向，个人利益是根本。

其实这种 方法让大着眼于问题的本身，对它进行分析和解释。而我们不必绞尽脑汁的想要给出论点一、二、三。希望大在以后的写作时能够记住并掌握这种方法，真正达到文章不拘一格。好了，先到这里，下次再见。雅思考生们如想了解刘伟楠老师分享的 ，尽情期待写作频道。如需了解更多 的相关信息，欢迎拨打 的免费咨询热线400-820-0601进行咨询，或者点击 页面的“在线咨询”与规划师直接对话。