雅思写作小作文柱状图解析

更新：2022年01月10日 13:13 雅思无忧

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雅思小作文中，柱状图是图形小作文中的一种，如何更好地写作这类题目呢，下面就由为你分享 雅思写作小作文柱状图 的范解析吧。

The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers.

Summar the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Model answer:

The first graph shows that there is a gradual decrease in study for career reasons with age. Nearly80% of students under 26 years, study for their career. This percentage gradually declines by 10-20%every decade. Only 40% of 40-49yr olds and 18% of over 49yr olds studing for career reasons in late*hood.

Conversely, the first graph also shows that study stemming from interest increases with age. There areonly 10% of under 26yr olds studing out of interest. The percentage increases slowly till the beginning of the fourth decade, and increases dramatically in late *hood. Nearly same number of 40-49yr olds study for career and interest. However 70% of over 49yr olds study for interest in comparison to18% studing for career reasons in that age group.

The second graph shows that employer support is maximum (approximately 60%) for the under 26yr students. It drops rapidly to 32% up to the third decade of life, and then increses in late *hood up to about 44%. It is unclear whether employer support is only for career-focused study, but the highest level is for those students who mainly study for career purposes.

This is an answer written by a candidate who achieved a Band 8 score. Here is the examiner'scomment:

This answer summar the key features of both charts and integrates them well. Clear trends are identified and supported with appropriately-selected figures. The answer could only be improved by adding an introduction to the general topic of the charts.

The information is well organised, with a clearly-signalled progression. Linking words are used accurately and precisely, although there is occasional omission. Paragraphing is used well initially, but lapses in the later section.

A very good range of vocabulary is used to convey the information concisely and accurately with only occasional inappropriacy. Words are used precisely and there are no errors in spelling or word form.

A wide range of structures is used and most sentences in this answer are accurate. Errors are rare and do not affect communication in this answer.

这篇范文是不是给了你写作的灵感了呢？我们相信只要努力就一定会有收获的。

当然啦，努力的同时也是需要技巧的，下面我们就来看看柱形图的审图技巧吧。

柱形图关键在于比较和对比，要找出similarity & difference .

柱形图还有单柱与多柱之分。单柱如果是以时间为轴的话就写一下趋势，如果是以组为轴的话，则直接写就好了。多柱如果数据比较多的话就选取几个大小的进行对比，当然重点在对比鲜明。其他的则可以一带而过。

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