雅思写作教育类作文分析

更新：2022年01月10日 16:53 雅思无忧

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教育话题一直以来都是 雅思写作 常考的话题之一，包括近几年来，教育话题所占的比重越来越大。但是，教育话题所涉及的范围越来越广了，很多原先并没有出过的题目也开始慢慢的出现在近的雅思考当中。那么下面小编就来为大进行一下雅思教育类作文的分析。

无论话题是什么，在写作时候也就是问考生的观点是什么，无非就是一边倒的结构论述或者双边讨论的结构论述，那么先就让我们先来看一下这两种作文结构的写作分析。

一边倒结构：

特点：A. What’s your opinion on this issue B. What’s your opinion about..? 围绕文章或段落主题，写一句介绍性的话注意：1、完整的陈述句（前置，简介） 2、内容是单一主题 3、范围忌过于狭窄

让步反驳文章思路：

段：背景句+改写考题+观点好大与坏或坏大于好主体段1：支持观点1 主体段2：支持观点2

主体段3：让步，承认对方观点的可取之处结尾：总结（承认并存/分析主导原因）+建议

双边讨论结构：

前段：背景句+陈述不同看法+写作意图（3-4句话，40-50个词）主体段1：陈述正方观点+理由（6-8句，60-80词）主体段2：陈述反方观点（6-8句，60-80词）

尾段：重述双方观点+自己观点和理由或提出建议（4-5句，40-50词）

有了上面的介绍，下面我来分析一篇教育类作文的范文：

【topic】

Most countries spend lots of money on education as they start to recognize its importance. In your opinion which two following subjects are the most important for your people and which one is the least important？

Subject：

Literature Sports

Mathematics Economy

Physics History

Music Geography

【sample】

It has been said that investing in education is investing in one’s future： this is true for both individuals and nations. It is always somewhat subjective to say which is more important， the humanities or sciences， as both have value. However， I would like to make a case for the importance of math and economics in this day and age.

Let us begin with math. Mathematics is a foundation subject which bridges many different fields， from physics and chemistry to the Internet and modern medicine. All of our material advances in the 20th century could not have happened without advanced mathematics. To be sure， it will also play a critical role in meeting challenges like global warming and space travel， to name just a few， in the future.

Likewise， economics is a fundamental discipline that allows societies to be stable and move forward. History is full of example of kingdoms and empires that collapsed as their economies declined. Most obviously， we need look no further than the current economic meltdown to see the importance of economics. The jobs and wellbeing of individuals and nations alike depend upon a deeper understanding of this field.

While all subjects have their merit， perhaps Geography doesn’t have the same importance it once did. After all， in our modern world we have 3-D maps online that allow us to see anywhere with the click of a mouse. But to reiterate， we need a balanced approach to education where we still produce artists and thinkers and historians and so on.

To summarize， math and economics are critical subjects in the 21st century. Governments must do their part to make sure we invest in these key areas and have qualified teachers. By doing so， they will ensure our prosperity and progress.

【点评】

写作观点：数学、经济学重要，地理不重要。所以文章中间三段分别讨论三个学科。

这篇文章题型少见，题目内容对中国考生来说比较另类。说明哪个学科的重要性不难，难的是说明一个学科为什么不重要，还注意到题目中有高词汇：the most important， the least important。

我们受到的教育是行业没有三六九等，行行出状元。如果在小学课堂上讨论此类题目，有小朋友胆敢说地理不重要，老师一定会发飙：“胡说，不要有偏见，各个学科都重要，人类都需要，缺一不可。”于是大考不能偏科，长大之后都没有了“偏见”。而这篇文章就是逼着你写出偏见，让你偏科，还很端，因为题目中有高。所以，考生不必使自己的表达受到约束，只要言之有理即可。

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