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雅思写作高手锦囊之首句改写

今天小编应各位“烤鸭”的要求,带来关于雅思写作句改写的介绍,希望能为大提供帮助。
先看看剑7 TEST3的题目:
The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.
再来看给出的6.5分范文
This chart gives information about the percentage change in average house prices in five different cities located in five different countries over 12 year period between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average houses in 1989.
出路倒是有一条,那就是“句型变化+词汇改变”,措辞改变大很好理解,句型变化是大以前很少想到去做的,其实句型变化很简单,一般题目The table shows后面给出的通常是一个名词性的词组,我们把它改成句子即可,句型和词汇双变化,改写就容易充分了:
The given diagram indicates that how the real estate market in five major cities around the world changed from 1989 to the period between 1990 and 2002.
句型变化:名词性词组changes变为how…changed…
词汇变化:this chart变为the given diagram
average house prices变为the real estate market
in five different cities后面添加around the world
between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989变为from 1989 to the period between 1990 and 2000
同时我们也可以作另外一种改写:
一般的题目是The graph shows…,改为The information given by the graph is about…则很轻易的改换了句型表达。
再看几个示例
示例 1
题目
The table below shows the proportion of different categories of family living in poverty in Australia in 1999.
改写一
The table illustrates what percentage of Australian families among various kinds lived in poverty in 1999.
改写二
The information given by the table is about the percentage of poor families in Australia coming from various backgrounds in 1990.
示例 2
题目
The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualification in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.
改写一
The bar chart demonstrates how many males and females in Australia in 1999 held various post-school diplomas.
改写二
The information provided by this bar chart is about the percentage of Australian males and females holding the various post-school diplomas.
示例 3
题目
The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.
改写
The line graph above demonstrates how much water used in three areas changed from 1990 to 2000 while the data coming from the below table is about consumption in two different countries - Brazil and Congo.
两个图表的题目好写了,可以一个写成从句,一个以The information given by the table is about…来改写。
这就是小编环球小编为大准备的雅思写作的句改写介绍了,希望能解答你们的疑惑,在此小编预祝大考取得好成绩。

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