2021年雅思写作难题分析：produce a happier society

的老师从1-5月的雅思考中总结了雅思写作难题，下面来看下这篇produce a happier society
Some people believe that the best way to produce a happier society is to ensure that there are only *all differences between the richest and the poorest members . To what extent do you agree or disagree?

先，看清题目的类型，辩论形问题，针对一个话题，写是同意agree，还是不同意disagree。看到best, always, all这样的对词，这可能是个故意留给同学们的陷阱，(或看作是个提示)，一般写反对方，不同意会更符合外人的思维习惯。

解题：thinking，and then writing
Step 1 ： 先认真审题，找出题目的关键词happier society, the ‘best’ way to，*all differences between the richest and the poorest members。然后用它们想观点，可以通过回答以下3个问题回答：

1. 先，什么是happier society？（当然这里不要思考得过多，小心偏题。）
可能是更公平，平等，安全的社会。
2. 是不是只有一种方法to make happier society？如果不是，还有其他什么重要因素？
3. 但是，缩小贫富差距的确是一个可能比较好的方法，可能在某些问题方面。

Step 2: 结构 一般推荐大 5段 ：
段: Introduction （先直接给出倾向，写不同意，to some extent I disagree this opinion.）
二段: the 1 ^st reason why I disagree
三段: the 2 ^nd reason why I disagree
四段: the reason why I agree (-must have a balanced idea)
五段: conclusion (总结一下，然后再次给出不同意的倾向。)

Step 3 ：Writing:

Paragraph 1: Introduction
先交代一下背景：‘社会顺速发展，人们开始关心要怎么造一个更好的社会。一些人提出，好的方法是缩小贫富差距。’with the development of economy in most countries, people start considering how to create the society they are living happier. Some indicate，to narrow the gap between the richest and the poorest. 然后直接给出不同意的倾向。Although it can be a good way to solve some social problems, I disagree with this view to some extent. I will present my reasons to support my argument.

Paragraph 2: the 1 ^st reason why I disagree
可能会有更好的方法 to make a happier society, 确计划公民们都有人权，有平等的接受教育的机会，就业的机会，或者看病的等等. Preserve human rights, equality of chance, fair chance of education, employment and health services. 如果*能确计划这些人们的权利，人们会感到满足，从而变得更加开心。Government should raise the infrastructure of health system, make the education compulsory as well as feasible to access, more job opportunities.

Paragraph 3: the 2 ^nd reason why I disagree
另外的方法，应注重对我们的下一代在道德方面的培养。让他们学会互相尊重，爱戴老人，为人正直等。build up a generation，be fortified by moral values like, loving, helping, respecting, avoid cheating, lying among community。

Paragraph 4: the reason why I agree (-must have a balanced idea)
但是，缩小贫富差距的确是一个解决问题的方法。造美好社会的一个方式可以是减少犯罪率，而很多研究表明，很多犯罪问题可能是因为没有工作机会或者没有接受过良好教育造成的。在这种情况下，缩小贫富差距，的确是一个好方法。crime rates have rocketed, caused by the wealth gap，undermines equality of opportunity of education and employment, lack of job opportunities in their areas, turn to crime，reduce wealthy gap，to control crime and start building a perfect society.

Paragraph 5: conclusion
总结一下，不是只有缩小贫富差距可以造一个美好的社会，除此之外，让人们享有公平的权力更加重要，然后再次给出不同意的倾向。