2021年12月21日雅思写作机经

题目解释： 饼图。比较1990和2021年艺术和科学专业各学历毕业生在一广告公司所占比例。
要点分析：本次作文一包含两张饼图。两张图片以时间为分界，着重描述毕业生所占百分比的变化，以及每一年各个学历所占比例。
建议思路：以时间划分，body段共分两段。
段着重描写1990年各个学历所占比例，重点强调所占比例大及小的学历及专业，同时注重比较两个专业各个学历所占比例的对比。
二段着重描写2021年的变化，增大或缩小。开头句可先强调两个专业整体比例的变化。细节描述根据增大和缩小的专业学历分成两组描述，按照增幅和降幅的多少排序。

好词好句
动词：
• 占（份额）
• make up，constitute，
• account for，take up
• 分为……部分
• is divided into…parts
• 占大/小的份额
• consume the largest / *allest portion
常用套句
The pie graph depicts that… 该饼图揭示了…
• The biggest difference between the two groups（A+B） is in …，where A makes up  ％ while B constitutes  ％.
• 两组之间大的区别在于… …，其中A占％，B占%。
The highest percentage of A，which was approximately ％ …• A占大比例，大约％。
• The percentage of A in … is more than twice that of B. The ratio is … % to … %.
• A在… …中的比例是B的两倍多，比率是…％to … ％。
A greater percentage of A than B is found in … （the former is … % and the latter is … %）
• 在…中A所占比例比B高（前者为… ％，后者为… ％）
A，which used to be the … ，has become less important，which declined（increased）sharply from … % in 1978 to only … % in .
• A 从前是… ，现在重要性减弱，所占比例从  年的… ％急剧地降到1998年的…％。
reaching … ％，compared with …% of B.
• 与B的… ％相比，A所占比例较高，达…%。
The percentage of A is slightly larger / *aller than that of B.
• A的比例比B的比例略高（低）。
• There is not a great deal of difference between A and B.• A与B的区别不大。

Task 2（大作文）
复习资料：The science tells us that some activities tell us that some activities are good for us and some are harmful to us, despite knowing that millions of people all over the world continue with unhealthy activities. What is your understanding of this? What do you think could be done to address this?
题型类别: 原因+解决方案类
题材类别: 科技类
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题目解释：
The science tells us that some activities tell us that some activities are good for us and some are harmful to us, despite knowing that millions of people all over the world continue with unhealthy activities. What is your understanding of this? What do you think could be done to address this?

科学建议人们有健康的生活模式，但是大多数人们继续不健康的活动。 你是如何理解的？你认为如何去解决呢？
分段解析：
Report类型文章，body段可采用1+6，1+6平行结构写作。个人理解部分可理解为解释这一状况的原因。
Introduction
开头用一到两句话进行background information的铺垫，→铺垫背景，引入话题
→提出个人观点，健康问题是值得关注的，但因为以下原因，人们常常继续不健康活动。

2.Reasons
（1）成人工作繁忙，工作压力大，没有时间和精力关注个人健康。
关键词句推荐：
e.g.Overweight people whose work is sedentary will find it much harder to lose weight.
那些每天工作需要久坐的朝中人群会发现减肥真是件困难事。
e.g.More than 70 percent of computer users have experienced eye strain.
超过70%的电脑使用者有过眼睛疲劳的体验。
（2）孩子们缺乏正确的引导，同时本身缺乏*力。
e.g. Without proper self-discipline, children may end up eating too much junk food.
如果缺少一定的*力，孩子们回去吃太多的垃圾食品。
e.g. be deficient in=not have enough of something that is necessary 缺乏某种营养
Children trend to eat food that is deficient in iron.
孩子倾向吃缺乏铁元素的食物。
Solutions
注重饮食健康。
Be health-conscious=be concerned about nutrition and healthy eating habits
多吃蔬菜
Eating fresh vegetables is a natural way of boosting our immune system.
多吃新鲜蔬菜时一种增强免疫力的天然方法。
(2)确立好的健身计划。
a.Exercise regimen
b.好处：Exercise  will promote blood circulation and muscle strength, which will make people feel invigorated.
锻炼可以提高血液循环和肌肉力量，从而使人们感到精力充沛。

(3)帮助孩子提高*力。
Restrain from doing sth.

4. Conclusion
先重申观点
→再总结论据，或用虚拟语气进行反面假设

好词总结：
healthy lifestyle健康的生活方式
sedentary lifestyle久坐的,
an active lifestyle积锻炼的,
excessive intake of…吃过多的……
fast food快餐
convenience food方便食品
diabetes, diarrhea, respiratory disease,
nutrition营养
balanced diet均衡的饮食
protein蛋白质,
vitamin维生素,
fibre纤维
mineral矿物质,,
incurable disease症
depression抑郁症
obesity肥胖症
stress-related diseases和压力有关的疾病
therapy （非药物）治疗
treatment 治疗
运动好处
Relieve=ease=alleviate 减轻stress
aerobic exercises有氧运动
vigorous有活力的
energetic经历充沛的
refreshing提神的
refresh your mind and body 提神
train your muscle肌肉
improve blood circulation血液循环
increase flexibility提高灵活性
drain 排出
cultivate stamina and persistence培养耐力和毅力
develop teamwork spirit 培养团队合作精神
conduce to physical fitness身体健康
jeopardize= damage 危害