雅思小作文曲线图写作技巧

雅思写作的小作文其实是有套路的，只要掌握了写作的结构和思路，并把数据描述清楚，自然就可以轻松的，下面看一下的杨凡老师做的小作文技巧总结
先来看一下小作文的要求
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

1. 数据的总趋势辟邪
2. 提炼数据的主要特征

宏观特征：“封”和“垫底”的线
微观特征：曲线内部的值、交叉点、明显的上升、下降、不变和波动

3. 对数据进行比较

下面来举个栗子
The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer.

雅思小作文结构

段：引入主题
主体：描述数据
尾段：简单总结

段套句：The data given by the … (+图表名称) is about … (+描述对象、地点、时间).
The data given by the line graph is about the demand for electricity in England during a typical day in winter and summer.
主体段（1+n句）
句：描述数据总趋势
句型一: (描述对象) see a …(+趋势) trend during these …(+时间差).
上升的趋势：an upward trend
下降的趋势：a downward trend
波动的趋势：a fluctuating trend
The electricity demands in winter and summer see a fluctuating trend during these 24 hours.

二句~N句：
用电量从0点的35,000个单位上升到3点的40,000个单位。
句型二： (描述对象) increase from… (+起始点+时间) to …(+终止点+时间).
The daily demand for electricity increases from 35,000 units at 0.00 to 40,000 units at 3.00.
句型三：There is an increase in … (+描述对象) from… (+起始点+时间) to… (+终止点+时间).
There is an increase in daily demand for electricity from 35,000 units at 0.00 to 40,000 units at 3.00.

紧随其后的是一个平稳的下降。在8点的时候，用电量达到小值，30,000个单位。
句型四：紧随其后的是：It is closely followed by …+名词.
达到小值：drop to its lowest point at 【数值】& bottom out at【数值】
It is closely followed by a steady decrease. At about 8.00, the electricity demand bottoms out at 30,000 units.

后来，用电量在22点达到大值，45,000个单位。
后来：Then,  Furthermore,  After that,  Next,  From this time onwards,
达到大值：reach the highest point at【数值】peak at【数值】
After that, it peaks at 45,000 units at 22.00.

然而，用电量开始从高值下降到24点的35,000个单位。
However, there is a drop from the highest point to 35,000 units at 24.00.

至于夏天, ……
As for …,  In terms of … ,  As far as … is concerned,
As for summer days, …

它的用电量一直低于冬天的用电量。
句型五：A is constantly lower than B.
… , the demand for electricity is constantly lower than that in winter.

夏天用电量在大约15点达到高值，20,000个单位，比冬天的高值少25,000单位。
句型六： A is …(+数据差) less (lower) than B
The electricity demand peaks at 20,000 units at about 15.00. It is 25,000 units less than that in winter.

尾段：得出结论
句型七：All in all, it is clear to see that there is an obvious difference in …