雅思考官教你解决写作构架问题

雅思写作中，如何写主题句？如何写观点？如何展开一个段落？这些恐怕是很多烤鸭们比较想要知道答案的问题，因此我们来看看雅思写作考官的解答吧。

Today I'm going to write a paragraph about gun control. I'll start with some vocabulary ideas, then I'll make them into full sentences.
我们将以*管制为例，从一些思路和具体句子来进行说明。

先我们要回答“为什么要*管制？”这个问题。我们可以从反面进行论证，使用*会带来什么问题。Brainstorm一下，我们会得到以下这些答案。
risk of accidents, danger to children 提高枪杀事件的发生率，对孩子带来危险
more violent crimes, criminals will use guns, police will need guns会出现更多的暴力犯罪，罪犯可能会使用*，而警察也就需要更多的*
higher * rates自杀率提高
guns create violent societies*可能会形成暴力社会

Here's my paragraph using the ideas above. I've divided the paragraph into separate sentences so that you can see what I have done more clearly.
然后就是把这些ideas写到具体的段落中了。以下是考生可以参考的主题句，可以用做分论点，考生可以结合具体例子，进行阐述说明，这样一篇文章的结构就显而易见了。针对于这篇题目，建议使用“五段单边式”结构。
1. In many countries, gun ownership is strictly controlled.
这部分就是段的主旨，考生需要介绍背景信息以及自己的观点看法。
2. Supporters of this policy point out the risk of accidents with guns, especially when children can gain access to them.
3. They also argue that the number of violent crimes increases when guns are available, and that police are forced to use guns to combat armed criminals.
4. Furthermore, * rates have been shown to rise in places where guns are legal.
2~4点则是对于*管制带来的好处，分条论述，简明扼要。
5. All in all, gun control advocates believe that guns create violent societies with high murder rates.
后总结全文，重申观点。

当然这只是一个思路，雅思写作考允许学生给出自己认为的合理答案，只要阐述有理即可。