雅思复习资料9复习资料+解析-Test2写作Task1

上海写作规划师点题：

柱状图主要有两个考点要考查；一是对于数据间的比较要详细描述；二是对于横轴的趋势变化要进行归纳和总结性说明，这样才能达到总体描述的效果。

雅思写作范文：

The bar chart reveals the time spent in the UK for different types of telephone calls from 1995 to 2002
Generally, among three categories including "local一fixed line", "national and international一
fixed line" and "mobiles (all calls)", local phone calls accounted for the largest proportion of
all usage, ranging from 70 to 90 billion minutes. Next to it, national and international ones took
the second position standing at 38 to 60 million minutes. obviously, the mobiles took up the
*allest part (3 to 40 billion minutes).
The trends of the telephone usage changed during the 8 years. The local phone calls peaked at
90 billion minutes in 1999, and then started to decline to the 1995 figure in 2002 (70 billion).
However, the trends of the other two kept increasing. National and international calls rose
steadily from 38 billion to 61 billion. The most noticeable change was the trend of cellphones,
which soared from 2 billion in 1995 to about 46 billion in 2002.
In sum, people used local fixed line most in the UK, and the mobiles were becoming
increasingly popular.

结构分析：

范文由四段组成：段为引言段，主要介绍该图标展示的是什么方面的信息；二段对三个柱状结构的大小情况进行了比较；三段对横轴时间趋势进行描述；后一段对图表体现出来的总体特点进行归纳。

亮点词汇：

段： Reveal 显示，表明，透露	二段： Category 种类，类别 Account for 占 Proportion 比例，部分 Range from…to..从…到… Take up 占有，占据
三段 Peak 达到点，达到峰，达到高值 Decline 下降，降低 Steadily 稳定地 Noticeable 显著的，明显的 Soar 骤升	四段： In sum 总的来说 Increasingly 渐增地，越来越多地

亮点语句：

1.Generally, among three categories including "local一fixed line', "national and international－fixed line" and "mobiles (all calls)", local phone calls accounted for the largest proportion of all usage, ranging from 70 to 90 billion minutes
总体而言.三大种类包括:本地固定*。内和际固定*，以及移动*。其中本地通话的时间占有大比例，大概有700亿到900亿分种。
2. The most noticeable change was the trend of cellphones. which soared from 2 billion in 1995 to about 46 billion in 2002.
显著的变化是*的趋势。从1995年的20亿分钟迅速增加到2002年的460亿分钟。