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十天突破雅思小作文-开头段

很多考生会存在一个误区,或者说有一些老师也会给学生灌输这样的想法,写作考到 6—6.5 分是非常艰难的 , 是需要一段很长时间才能提高的。其实雅思图表作文的内容可以说是一种死知识,不需要过多的新。换种说法,只要老师能把足够的固定句型或词汇给考生,考生只要进行背诵的过程就可以了。那么 6 分的水平应该是什么样的呢?

考生不防看一下下面这道考题

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002

Percentage of national consumer expenditure by category --2002

Country

Food/drinks/tobacco

Clothing/footwear

Leisure/education

Ireland

28.91%

6.43%

2.21%

Italy

16.36%

9.00%

3.20%

Spain

18.80%

6.51%

1.98%

Sweden

15.77%

5.40%

3.22%

Turkey

32.14%

6.63%

4.35%

再看一下学生的文章

Different countries’ consumer spending are quite different. The table shows the vary consumer spending on a series of items in the five countries, namely, the Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey in 2002

Food, drinks and tobacco were in the most important position on consumer spending in all of the five countries, and in a different percentage. In Ireland and Turkey, they were near 30%, while in the other three countries they are under 20%

Clothing and footwear were the second important consumer spending in these countries. In Italy, they got 9%, and in Sweden, they were 5.4%. in the other three countries, the figure were very similar, all were near 6.5%

The last consumer spending were leisure and education. In Turkey, they were 4.35% and in other four countries the figure were under 4%

In conclusion, it can be said that in 2002, food, drinks and tobacco were the most important consumer spending in the five countries, and the different countries’ consumer spending were quite different.

看完之后你会给这篇文章打多少分数呢?这篇文章的得分是 5.5, 考生读完后,肯定觉得原来 5.5 分这么容易,如果要拿个 6 分看似并不难。的确是这样的。这篇文章的词汇句型其简单,并且还有好几处语法错误,但是这篇文章的优点在于把图表的关键信息传递了出来,而且分段也使人觉得文章结构非常清晰。

基于以上的信息,对于想拿到 6-6.5 这个分数段的学生,老师给学生限制的越多越好,也就是一些地方并不需要学生放开放思维,因为短短的二十分钟,他们面对大量的信息反而会不知所措,不懂舍取。

下面就给考生详细介绍整个复习过程

一 大批量看图

考生不防把数十张或更多的图先用汉语进行文章思路的分析,就像做数学题一样,不论是图表中的哪一种(表格,饼图,柱图和线图),在考的时候方法都是一样的,其实并不存在不同的图会硬性分成不同的方法。


二 开头段

考生只需要背一种。开头只要做简单的改写就好,考官对于段也就是扫几眼就可以了。并不会做太多停留。但是如果考生改不好的话,可以之前把开头段写好,然后直接套其余信息。这样考官也不会觉得此考生是照抄考题。例如之前准备好的套句如下:

Given is/are +the table(s)/pie chart(s)/bar chart(s)/line graph(s) proving the information concerning + 文章信息。当然如果中间能添一些词会换一些词更好,如果换不了的话,也不要浪费过多的时间,开头段的用时(包括审题时间)大概控制在两分钟左右,把时间浪费在开头段是不值得的。如:

考题: The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002

改写 : Given is the table providing the information concerning expenditure on various items in (food/drinks/tobacco, clothing/footwear, and leisure/education respectively )in five different countries in the year of 2002

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