2021-09-28 : Task 2The number of older people is increasing. Some people think it will cause problem to their countries, others believe this group is important to the society. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.
It is considered by some that old people are being increased by leaps and bounds-which can create a problematic situation in health treatment arrangements; however, others who think that this has some social benefits. In my opinion, I believe that services to the aged community could cost higher while availing valuable information from them may assist in the building of a prosperous nation.
On the one hand, after reaching a certain level of maturity, the human body started to decay and deteriorate, which need intensive care without any delay. In order to fulfill these requirements, there is a need for cutting-edge technology in hospitals to combat chronicle diseases. In addition to it, providing financial benefits-pension- to middle-aged members is another point to consider in our budget by cutting shorter other social schemes: education, road safety, and scholarship grants. America, take, for example, spends 25 million dollars each year, out of his budget, for the well-being of veterans.
On the other hand, these veterans have a wide range of information along with experience-which can be proved helpful in solving bewildering situations. Firstly, the elder’s immense treasure of knowledge could be utilized to guide youth for the development of a cooperative atmosphere in our surroundings so that all kinds of delinquencies- juvenile delinquency and drug trafficking- can be vanished to a great extent from our societal structure. For instance, Japan has appointed senior citizens to guide children in order to develop their skill-sets as well as removing some cognitive ailments: isolation, alienation, and depression.
In conclusion, admittedly expenses are at a higher rate to keep up the health of older persons; but, these can provide us valuable guidance for the *ooth functioning of a system which is a real success of humankind for the growth of humanity.


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