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The debate nowadays draws our attention to whether we should preserve the lesser-known languages. Personally ,I prefer the idea that languages,as a kind of culture, play a significant role in the society,thus the extinction of some languages cannot be overlooked.

Nevertheless,there are still some individuals have the recognition that a universal language is necessary to remove the barrier for global communication.This is partly true for we are not such convenient to take an interpreter along when we travel around.while if we choose a given language ,such as English,as a global language,it will be easier for us to communicate with others.

However,the difference of language is based on the diversity of culture.Thus,I am hard-pressed to imagine what the world would like without the variety of culture.For instance,Navajo , a race living in America for hundreds of years, have their own living habits as well as language,but now those delicate cultures have to face extinction due to the isolation of their language.According to the research, I think it is our obligation to preserve the lesser-known language for the sake of protecting the culture heritage on Earth.

Furthermore,some particular jobs in contemporary society also need a host of talents majoring in those languages.Take archaeologist as an example,they should be skilled in some ancient languages,as only in this way,can they fully understand those relics left by our ancestors,and enrich the human history.Whereas,the loss of language is also a loss of talents.

In summary,we should take action to preserve the near-extinct language rather than neglecting them.Only in this way,can we serve our decendants a world with colourful culture.

Wow, very good, there are a few grammar mistakes, oh and you said:

Furthermore,some particular jobs in contemporary society also need a host of talents majoring in those languages.Take archaeologist as an example,they should be skilled in some ancient languages,as only in this way,can they fully understand those relics left by our ancestors,and enrich the human history.Whereas,the loss of language is also a loss of talents.

I think you should choose another job, because most archaeologists knows the language they specialise in, like Egyptian archaeologists know hieroglyphs well and all that. So choose another job.

雅思是International English languageTesting System(IELTS)，是由英国文化协会（The British Council，即英国驻华大使馆/总领事馆文化教育处）、剑桥大学考试委员会（CESOL）和澳大利亚教育国际开发署（IDP Australia）共同举办的国际英语水平测试。此项考试是为申请赴英语国家（美国、英国、澳大利亚、加拿大、新西兰等）留学、移民的非英语国家学生而设，用来评定考生运用英语的能力。
托福TOEFL（The Test of English as a Foreign Language，简称TOEFL）是由美国教育测验服务社（ETS）举办的英语能力考试。TOEFL有三种，分别是： pbt―paper based test 纸考 677, cbt―computer based test 机考 300, ibt―internet based test 网考 120, 新托福满分是120分。
一般来说，去美国、加拿大留学需要考托福，不过某些美国高校也认可雅思成绩。去英联邦国家留学和移民要考雅思。