雅思培训教育作文模板 雅思作文如何提高

雅思小作文写作万能模板
1、通过第一个曲线图，我们可以知道____,也说明了结果是___

According to the first graph, it can be seen that ______________, it can also be concluded from it that ______________.

2、一张有趣、有教育意义的、(内容)的图片(这句模板在雅思小作文中的应用非常的广泛。)

There is an interesting and instructive picture which goes like this: __________.

3、当前有一张涉及______的增长曲线图，许多人______，然而其他人倾向于___

Nowadays there is a growing concern over ______________. Many people like ______________, while others are inclined to ______________.

4、目前，共同之处是_________,许多人喜欢______因为_______除此之外还由于_____

Nowadays, it is common to ______________. Many people like______________ because ______________. Besides, ______________.

5、(图表所示)_____，就像许多其他事物，被____更加喜爱，然而这一观点正被________所抨击，一些人认为_________，他们指出___________

______________, just like many other things, are preferred by ____________.

While being attacked by the idea that ______________, some people consider ______________. They point that ______________.

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17 in the 3 years spanning from 2005 through 2008.

18 the number of ``` remained steady from ```to ````.

19 the number sharply went up to ```

20 the percentage of ``` stayed the same between ``` and ```

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22 the percentage of ```is sightly large than that of.

23 there is not a great deal of differece between ```and ```

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25 ```decreased year by year while ```increased steadily.

26 there is an upward trend in the number of ```

27 a considerable increase occurred from ```to ```

28 from ```to ```the rate of decrease slow down.

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雅思学术性写作考试中Task 1 考查考生解释，说明信息的能力，这些信息通常体现在图解，表格和插图中，这一部分的模式化程度更高一些。下类50个句式是雅思留学类考生需要背诵的最最基础的句子。请同学们自己背诵。在写作小作文的时候，也可以作为参考材料。

1. the table illustrates the changes in the number of...over the period from...to...

该表格描述了在...年之...年间...数量的变化。

2. the bar chart illustrates that... 该柱状图展示了...

3. the graph provides some interesting data regarding...

该图为我们提供了有关...有趣数据。

4. the diagram shows (that)... 该图向我们展示了...

5. the pie graph depicts (that).... 该圆形图揭示了...

6.this is a cure graph which describes the trend of...

这个曲线图描述了...的趋势。

7. the figures/statistics show (that)... 数据(字)表明...

8. the tree diagram reveals how...

该树型图向我们揭示了如何...

9. the data/statistics show (that)...

该数据(字)可以这样理解...

10. the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that...

这些数据资料令我们得出结论...

11. as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table...

如图所示...

12. according to the chart/figures... 根据这些表(数字)...

13. as is shown in the table... 如表格所示...

14. as can be seen from the diagram, great changes have taken place in...

从图中可以看出，...发生了巨大变化。

15. from the table/chart/diagram/figure, we can see clearly that...or it is clear/apparent from the chart that...

从图表我们可以很清楚(明显)看到...

16. this is a graph which illustrates...

这个图表向我们展示了...

17. this table shows the changing proportion of a & b from...to...

该表格描述了...年到...年间a与b的比例关系。

18. the graph, presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in...

该图以圆形图形式描述了...总的趋势。

19. this is a column chart showing... 这是个柱型图，描述了...

20. as can be seen from the graph, the two curves show the fluctuation of...

如图所示，两条曲线描述了...的波动情况。

21. over the period from...to...the...remained level.

在...至...期间，...基本不变。

22. in the year between...and... 在...年到...期间...

23. in the 3 years spanning from 1995 through 1998...

1995年至1998三年里...

24. from then on/from this time onwards... 从那时起...

25. the number of...remained steady/stable from (month/year) to (month/year).

...月(年)至...月(年)...的数量基本不变。

26. the number sharply went up to... 数字急剧上升至...

27. the percentage of...stayed the same between...and...

...至...期间...的比率维持不变。

28. the figures peaked at...in(month/year)

...的数目在...月(年)达到顶点，为...

29. the percentage remained steady at... 比率维持在...

30. the percentage of...is slightly larger/*aller than that of...

...的比例比...的比例略高(低)。

31. there is not a great deal of difference between...and...

...与...的区别不大。

32. the graphs show a threefold increase in the number of...

该图表表明...的数目增长了三倍。

33. ..decreased year by year while...increased steadily.

...逐年减少，而...逐步上升。

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雅思考试基本内容：

一、听力（学术类 & 培训类）

听力考试时长：30分钟，并有10分钟时间将答案誊写到答题卡；听力考试题型：共包含4段独白和对话。每段听力材料只播放一次，对应10道问题，问题的排列顺序和答案在听力材料中出现的顺序一致。

二、阅读（学术类）

阅读考试题型：共包含3段文章及相应40道题目。每一篇文章所需要回答的问题数量并不相同。文章内容和题目均出现于试卷中。

文章取材于供非专业人士阅读的真实出版物（例如选自书籍、期刊和报纸），与考生未来在大学课程中将阅读到的文章极为相似。也包含非文字性内容，例如图表、曲线或插图等。所有文章总计长度约在2000-2750字。

三、写作（学术类）

写作考试题型：共两篇作文。第一篇（Task
1）为图表分析写作，如表格、曲线图、柱状图或示意图等，考生需对这些信息或数据进行描述，要求不得少于150字；

第二篇（Task
2）为议论性文章写作，考生需根据题目所给出的看法、问题或议题进行论述，要求不得少于250字。考官给以下四项分别评等级分：任务完成情况（Task
1）/任务回答情况（Task 2），连贯与衔接，词汇变换、句式多样性和语法准确性。这四方面所占权重相同。

四、写作（培训类）

写作考试题型：共两篇作文。第一篇考生需根据题目中的问题或者事件写一封私人信件，形式可为非正式、半正式或正式。

题目包括对一个问题或事件的描述，以及对考生需完成的任务的三点要求，要求不得少于150字；第二篇为议论性文章写作，考生需根据题目所给出的看法、问题或议题进行论述，要求不得少于250字。

扩展资料：

雅思考试评分标准：

雅思考试评分标准包括：语言的流利度和连贯性，词汇变换，句式丰富性和语法准确性，发音雅思考试考官按这四项评分标准分别评等级分，并且这四项是同等重要的。

对于雅思写作和口语考官的招聘和培训按照既定标准进行，确保评分人员了解雅思评分相关政策，而且切实做到按照评分标准给听力和阅读考卷评分。在每个考试中心，会进行系统化的监测，并对一定比例的答题纸实施双重阅卷。除了会持续监测考官的表现之外，还会每隔一年测评考官，以确保按照标准评分。

所有考试成绩记录在成绩单上，包括一个总分，及听力、阅读、写作和口语四个单项分，考生的考试成绩采用1-9分的评分制来测评，四个项目独立记分，总分即是四个部分所得分数经过平均后四舍五入的成绩。总分和四个单项分均允许半分。

参考资料来源： 百度百科―雅思

备考雅思写作，高分雅思写作有规律可循吗？环球教育小编为您详细分析如下：

措辞切合，句型丰富多彩

高分作文的言语应当是清楚、适当、实际。在应用言语的那时候有2个最核心的问题，雅思写作评分标准有关语汇、英语的语法方面的规定是 “a wide rang of vocabulary and structures”，要有很多的不一样的语汇使用方法和各式各样的构造。

有关句型的多元性也必须多累积，雅思作文不可以全是“主谓宾”式的简单句，环球教育小编提议大家可以写长难句，但要依据文章内容将二者结合应用。

观点独特，事实论据切合、实际且有关

在雅思写作全过程中最先要弄清楚它是一道什么的题目。审完题以后要做的第一件事儿就是说产生自身的观点。有的题型是agree/disagree，有的题型设定为多方探讨，得出2个对立面观点，让你来discuss一下，随后得出自身的观点。

这一项所相匹配的雅思写作评分标准规定是：最先你必须有a clear position，一个清晰确立的观点。依据你的观点，你也要有一个fully developed position，一个进行充足的观点。

一篇出色的雅思高分作文，要对所探讨的话题讨论有确立的观点、充裕的事实论据，而且有优良的方式将事实论据一一铺叙。文章内容应当有一条无形中的平行线围绕自始至终，一切偏移文章内容总观点和段落主题句的内容都应给与革除或改变，就算这些语句称得上经典。

分段有效

将文章内容在你的观点的前提条件下分为好多个段落，明确每一段落的核心思想和主题。分段的规定在得分实施方案里是如何反映的呢？7分左右的高分作文针对分段有那样一句评价：“skillfully manages paragraphing”，指能灵活运用分段的写作手法。这一“娴熟”指的是分段方法不那么呆板，让段与段中间的衔接与衔接变得越来越自然。

逻辑严密有条理

高分雅思写作一定离不开严谨的逻辑，在作答雅思写作过程中，要尤其注意句与句之间以及段与段之间的连接，做到表达严谨有逻辑，同时要做到表达条例清晰，有足够的论据支撑你的中心论点，使你的论证有极强的说服力。

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环球教育秉持教育成就未来的理念，专注于为中国学子提供优质的出国语言培训及配套服务。环球教育在教学中采用“九步闭环法”，帮助学生快速提升学习效能，同时提供优质的课后服务，跟进学生学习进程，为优质教学提供坚强的保障。目前，环球教育北京学校已构建了包含语言培训、出国咨询、国际课程、游学考察、在线课程等在内的一站式服务教育生态圈。相关问题可在线免费咨询，或拨打免费热线400-616-8800~~

1.设计开头和结尾

关于作文的开头和结尾，中国古人早就有“凤头豹尾”一说，也就是开头和结尾是文章的重点。特别是开头。如果你不能在故事的开始就吸引考官，那他们就很难有耐心把整篇文章读完。所以投入更多的时间去考虑怎么写好开头，考官一旦对你开头感兴趣，他们会想知道得更多。写好开头后，再设计一个精彩的结尾，这会让考官对你的文章印象深刻。

2.训练书写能力

有些同学的英语字体龙飞凤舞，根本看不清楚到底写了什么，这就大大影响了作文的分数。因为考官也是人，没有耐心去仔细阅读这些“天书”。因此，我们要求学生养成良好的书写习惯，把字写得清楚、规范、工整。另外，在考试中，也不可随便涂写，造成卷面不整洁，阅读不便，之所以考试委员会选择铅笔答卷，就是不希望大家乱涂乱改。

3.阅读优秀作品

古人云：读书破万卷，下笔如有神。从中我们可以清楚地看出读与写之间的“暧昧”关系。中国学生为什么在雅思写作上难得高分呢?很重要的一个原因就是读的原版英语太少太少了。但凡优秀的作家都是从阅读别人的佳作开始，接着开始模仿，最后超越他们，形成自己的风格。所以我们的学生也应该从阅读优秀文章开始，抱着“他山之石，可以攻玉”的态度，把有用的表达方式，观点，框架等摘记下来，一字一句一段一篇地突破，模仿消化吸收，真正形成自己的风格。

具体的范文模板
链接：/s/1BZBKqhyqr__ERTApXuTpxg

?pwd=nbrf 提取码: nbrf

有模板的都是低分的，不用模板，写出自己心里想说的，考官就会给你高分的，你看高分范文有模板吗？如果是小作文，是可以套套模板的 。
给你一点吧：
我看着书,打给你看

this is a pie chart shows the peoportion of the meat sold in a supermarket.the total meat sold in the supermarket is classified in to six types as follows: chicken,pork,beer,lamb,fish and others.

Overall,chicken has the largest proportion ,which accounts for 40%;
while others has the *allest percentage ,at 2%

As can be see in the pie chart ,chicken,which makes up 40% ,is the most popular among the total meat sold, then next is ork with 20% ,followed by beef,constituting 18%; and finally come lamb,fish and others at 15%,5% and 2% respectively . It should be noted that the sale of pork is half as much as that of chicken. And it is also interesting to note theat the sale of chicken is 20 times as much as that of others.

It can be concluded from the pie chart that chicken is the most commonly bought meat while others is the least commonly bought meat
我觉得不要一直用一样的格式，老师看了很多一样的格式会很烦的，批起来就会扣多点 。
对立式观点

1. 选择一方观点进行说明

给出两个对立的事物或者一个事物对立的两个方面，要求考生支持一方并进行说明。
具体表述如下：
TOPIC: Some people like A, others like B. Which one do you prefer―A or B? Give specific reasons t to illustrate your answer.
在这个命题形式的摸版中有些大写字母的含义如下：
A和B表示选择的两种观点；
CHOOSE A和CHOOSE B表示对A，B的选择；
DO C指题目中提及的某件事情，如：Some people prefer A in order to DO C.
请考生在实际写作中根据题目天如他们各自所代表的内容。
MODEL (1)
Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, contradict A. Personally, I would prefer①because I think A has more advantages.

There are numerous reasons why②, and I would like in here explain a few of the most important ones. The main reason is that③. It can be given a concrete example④.

Another reason why I advocate the attitude of A is that⑤. Take the case of a thing that⑥.

One very strong argument for A is that⑦. This demonstrate the undeniable fact that⑧.

Of course, choosing B also has advantages to some extent, ⑨.

But if all these factors are contemplated, the advantages of A carry more weight than hose of B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that⊙.
①表明自己的观点；赞同
②填入赞同A的句子
③赞同A的第一个原因
④举例说明原因一
⑤赞同A的第二个原因
⑥举例说明原因二
⑦说明赞叹A的第三个原因
⑧表明A的优势
⑨列出B的1-2个优势
⊙总结观点
MODEL (2)
Some people believe A. These people point out the fact that①. However, other people believe B. They point out that②. They say that③. As far as I am concerned, my preference is for A.

The main reason why I prefer A is that④. We can see that⑤.

A more personal reason why I like A is⑥. As I member, ⑦.
A is superior in another way, that is ⑧ because that⑨.

As a matter of fact, there are also some disadvantages in A, such as⊙. But these can be compensated by its advantages. So, in comparison with B, A is surely a clever choice.
①支持A的理由
②支持B的理由
③进一步阐述支持B的原因
④支持A的第一个原因
⑤举例说明原因一
⑥支持A的第二个原因
⑦举例说明原因二
⑧支持A的第三个原因
⑨举例说明原因三
⊙列举出A的劣势
MODEL (3)
It is often difficult for people to decide whether to choose A or choose B. But for us students, the advantages of A always outweigh the disadvantages. Those who object A claim that①.

Although at first glance these arguments sound reasonable and appealing, they are not borne out by a careful consideration. ②

In addition, ③. As a result, ④.

Finally, the incomparable advantages of A is that ⑤.

From the above, I think A has a lot of advantages compared with B. So⑥.
①反对A的理由
②支持A的第一个原因并举例说明
③支持A的第二个原因并举例说明
④A的优势
⑤支持A的第三个原因并举例说明
⑥重申观点

2. 比较不同观点的优劣

给出两个对立事物或一个事物对立的两个方面，要求考生说明二者为什么不同或比较它们的优缺点，并给出理由。
具体表述如下：
TOPIC: Some people believe that A while others consider B more appropriate. Give advantages and disadvantages of the two positions and explain which position you support.
MODEL (1)
A and B are two totally different ideas that have caused heated debate over a long period of time. Anyway, I agree with the idea of A. However, it is unfair to say which is better than the other if we don’t see both sides of the story in the following paragraphs.

Some people believe B because①. These people point out the fact that②. They also argue that ③.

However, other people stand on a very different ground. They believe that④. They firmly point out that⑤. An example can give the details of this argument: ⑥. In addition, ⑦.

In a word, A is too tempting not to be chosen. A, as shown above, has ⑧. ⑨.
①人们支持B的第一个原因
②进一步阐述支持B的第一个原因
③支持B的第二个原因
④支持A的第一个原因
⑤进一步阐述支持A的第一个原因
⑥举例说明支持A的第一个原因
⑦支持A的第二个原因
⑧选择A的第一个好处
⑨选择A的第二个好处
MODEL (2)
Some people believe that①. Other people take the view that②. While both methods may have their advantages and disadvantages, they can be applied under different circumstances. Afterwards, I will explain my opinion about it.

For A, ③

But this also demonstrates that④

Moreover, ⑤

B, on the other hand, ⑥. For example, ⑦.

In my opinion, the advantages of B are more than those of A because B fits me better in two ways; First⑧. Second, ⑨.
①人们的第一种观点
②人们的第二种观点
③A的一个优势
④A所隐含的劣势
⑤A的一个大缺点
⑥B的一个明显优势
⑦举例说明B的优势
⑧对我来讲，B的第一个优势
⑨对我来讲，B的第二个优势

以下是短文写作中使用率最高、覆盖面最广的基本句式，每组句式的功能相同或相似，考生可根据自己的情况选择其中的1－2个，做到能够熟练正确地仿写或套用。

1．表示原因

1）There are three reasons for this．
2）The reasons for this are as follows．
3）The reason for this is obvious．
4）The reason for this is not far to seek．
5）The reason for this is that．．．
6）We have good reason to believe that．．．
例如：
There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life．Firstly，people’s living standard has been greatly improved．Secondly，most people are well paid， and they can afford what they need or like．Last but not least，more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life．
注：如考生写第一个句子没有把握，可将其改写成两个句子。如：Great changes have taken place in our life． There are three reasons for this．这样写可以避免套用中的表达失误。

2．表示好处
1）It has the following advantages．
2）It does us a lot of good．
3）It benefits us quite a lot．
4）It is beneficial to us．
5）It is of great benefit to us．
例如：
Books are like friends．They can help us know the world better，and they can open our minds and widen our horizons．Therefore，reading extensively is of great benefit to us．

3．表示坏处
1）It has more disadvantages than advantages．
2）It does us much harm．
3）It is harmful to us．
例如：
However，everything divides into two．Television can also be harmful to us．It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching television．

4．表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能
1）It is important（necessary，difficult，convenient， possible）for *．to do sth．
2）We think it necessary to do sth．
3）It plays an important role in our life．
例如：
Computers are now being used everywhere，whether in the government，in schools or in business．Soon， computers will be found in every home，too．We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age．
一、跳槽的原因及解决办法

1.相关词汇： Fierce competition heavy pressure job-hopping is looked upon to move upward quickly, keep skill fresh and up to date acclimatize themselves to the rapidly changing society

2.原因： (1)社会压力大，人们的竞争意识增强，不断改变以适应社会的变化

(2)处于个人发展的需要，寻求升职，更新知识

(3)金钱的诱惑，不在乎在哪儿工作，做什么职业，只要挣钱多

(4)家庭原因，spouse工作地点改变或孩子去其他地方上学

3.解决方法：

(1)要理性看待，一般来说，stability equals success

(2)chronic job-hopper将被questioned integrity and loyalty ,not reliable

(3)*和mass media应该鼓励人们扎根一个地方，扎扎实实干事业，并且尽可能提高welfare,改善城市和community的环境，留住人才

(4)公司应该提高工资待遇，给employee创造一个良好的工作环境，在保证企业利润的同时要考虑员工个人发展，增加培训，扩充员工的知识

二、大学是否应该根据就业教授学生知识，大学的主要功能是什么

平衡写：

1. 认为应该提供实际知识的：

(1)大学生毕业就要找工作，因此要培养学生掌握future job的技能

(2)有人甚至声称理论没用，不是每个大学生都要做科学家

2. 反对方

(1) It will definitely be shortsighted to…目光短浅理论知识非常重要，理论指导实践，大学的职责不仅是教会学生一门技术，更重要的是教授一种方法

(2) 不学理论只学实际知识，会使学生变成utilitarian, narrow-minded, lack of imagination，如果学生要学的只是生存的技能，那就去vocational school

3. 总之，我认为大学的功能是versatile的，促进学生all-around development,培养学生具有creative mind in some special field,而不只是教授该领域的实际知识，可以通过一些part-time job来获得。

三、个人不能对环境保护做不了什么，同意不同意

This is just an excuse for the ignorance of environmental protection

1. 分析环境恶化原因是缺乏环保意识

2. 给出解决办法

四、维持博物馆是否是浪费金钱？

1. *应该spend a lot of money to enrich the collection of museums to cater for different tastes or needs of different people.有的人认为是浪费钱，我认为是很有必要的。

2.博物馆很重要(博物馆的作用)

(1)illuminate the culture, history and arts of the world. 比如，世界上最大的British Museum provide visitors with all-round knowledge about the world culture and arts , collections in it trace the development of civilization throughout the history of mankind. Definitely a heartquake!

(2)shoulder the responsibility to preserve and carry forward a country’s traditional culture.

(2)serve as a significant mean of adolescent education, benefit both the present and future generation. 教育学生什么是美，purify their heart，也可以作为第二课堂，提供教学参考

3.不是浪费金钱

(1)这种观点是shortsighted，只是从个人的利益出发，*应该站在一个更高的角度去看问题。对国家的经济和人民生活是有很大促进作用的

(2)不同于其他产业，不能让其自生自灭，否则可能很难生存

(3)花的钱多，个人没有能力支付。

五、考试

1. Used as a chief means of deciding whether a student succeeds or fail in a subject

2. 不能evaluate one’s true ability.只是测试memory or the skill of working rapidly under pressure.

高分does not mean possessing creativity in dealing various problems

3. Encourage bad study habits, emphasis on memorizing 考试内容 rather than to think。考试前非常用功，但是考试后forget all the information

4. lower the standards of teaching, deprive teachers of freedom. Teacher are judge by the examination results of students, 老师只顾教了考试技巧。

5. 考试是可以作为评判学生的一个依据，但是不能是唯一evaluation.

六、科技(*，电脑)的利与弊

1. On the positive side,

(1) make life faster, easier and safer (2) the world is becoming *aller and closer, trains cars plains make possible to travel to distant places (3)modern communication tools,使人们更好的交流，与任何地方的人交流，特别使促进了business的发展(4)longer life expectancy由于progress of medical science (5)电影电视made life enjoyable and colorful (6)计算机和Internet get information easier, make friends, business, tele-education

2. On the negative side, (1)机器的使用造成unemployment(2)*和互联网的使用alienate people from their friends 因为lack adequate face-to-face communication. (3)Children 缺乏essential interpersonal skills.Those who indulge in … often feel isolated and being cut off from the outside world, they tend to be more introverted, self-centered and with drawn.

七、彻底禁止吸烟

1. 从经济方面，contribute much to government revenue,如果baned ,则会导致unemployment

2. 从权利方面，Smoking just a hobby and amusement, 人们有权选择自己的 lifestyle

3. 从健康方面，必须承认抽闲是detrimental to health,但是the harm is exaggerated.如果控制每天的吸烟量，不会对健康造成devastating problem. 而且还有relieve stress 和 calm down.历史上有一些伟人吸烟，*，*，他们仍然enjoy long life expectancy.

八、老年人问题

1.take care by children 和in nursing homes 各有优缺点

2.在家的话，老人可以享受与家人交流的机会，这样他们不会孤独，而且还可以照顾小孩，而且他们的经验对人们的事业和家庭生活都有帮助。但是由于老人经常会出现健康问题，因此需要花很多时间照料，影响人们的工作。

3. 在nursing home的话，可以有更多机会与their peers相处，common language and interest,而且现在的条件越来越好，得到专业的照顾及医疗服务，还有proper diet 对他们的健康有利。而且让小孩有充分的时间工作，追求自己的事业。但是缺少与家人的交流，会使他们感到lonely，出现一些psychological problem而且如果将所有老人都放到rest home,将给*增加财政负担。

4. As neither the two solutions is effective enough to solve the problem of …, I favor the combination of the two.

九、如何对待罪犯

1.criminals 应该be locked up in prison(jails).

2. can ensure a safe and comfortable living environment for law-abiding citizens. Thieves ,robbers, rapists and murders are dangerous, pose potential threat to the society

3. 放到监狱教育是一个很好的方式，让他们知道侵犯其他人的权利是要付出代价的，这样就会减少他们再次犯罪的可能性

4.不但是punish criminals but also deters the potential criminals. 有些有犯罪倾向的人由于害怕被处罚，可能会放弃commit crime.

5.应该放到监狱。Just as the old saying goes, mercy to the criminal may be cruelty to the people.

十、古迹是否应该保留

1. Historic building is useful for studies. 每个阶段都有不同的建筑，反映当时的文化，研究他们可以理解evolution of society and culture. 社会发展是 continuously的，the later generation bases on and inherits from the former.因此,获取这些是非常必要的。

2.Bring advantages of touri*.很多外国人和本国人都对古代文化很感兴趣，因此保留古迹可以吸引很多游客，bring much benefit to the country. 如果都是高楼大厦的话，在自己的城市也可以看到，谁还去旅游。

3. 古代建筑中也有一些我们值得学习的技术，不是所有技术都传下来了，有些建筑的奥秘现在人们还不是完全清楚。十一、动物保护(动物实验)

1. 共同生活在一个地球上，应该保护动物，maltreatment to animals is barbaric and uncivilized practice. 但是说动物濒临灭绝是exaggerated，禁止动物实验更是irrational

2. Select the superior and eliminate the inferior, the survival of the fittest 是一个natural rule can not be violated，有些specifies缺乏生存技能，就应该被淘汰，如果人们的过渡干预反而会造成坏的作用对ecological system.当然，如果是因为人类破坏了其habitat而导致的endanger,另当别论。

3. 动物实验是indispensable for medical research, all of which 是为人类造福，没有人不希望在全球范围内消灭AIDS，而这一切需要大量的生物实验来完成。而且目前还没有有效的alternative methods,计算机还不足以仿真整个生物实验，或许以后有替代方法了，就可以取消动物实验。目前能做的只能是减小痛苦，relieve pain.

4. 有人说吃动物的肉很残忍，让大家都做vegetarian, 在我看来很可笑，动物有生命，植物就没有生命了？这么说人类就该饿死starve to death 。因此，只要不是虐待动物，将他们作为食物和衣服 is not blameworthy.

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十二、青少年犯罪与Drug abuse

1. 原因：

(1)电视中的暴力与色情

(2)家庭原因：Increasing divorce rate, Brought up in a sole-parent family, 缺少父母的关爱,psychological problem, feel disoriented.

(3)学校原因：schools and society should be responsible在学校学习压力大，就业压力大

(4)自身原因：不成熟，sequacious，lack of self-control an self-discipline, can not resist the temptation of drugs and fall victims to drug dealers.

2. 解决方法：

(1)*应该strict censorship should be imposed on 媒体中的不健康内容

(2)家长应该多关心

(3)*和学校应该多教育，不能只顾academic performance

十三、学生评价老师

1. Drawbacks:

(1)学生还不够成熟，他们往往从自身的经验和利益出发来评价老师，因此unable to evaluate teachers’ performance in a sound way。可能会出现要求严格的老师不受欢迎的情况。

(2)学生评价老师也会对老师产生不好的影响，老师为了cater for the needs of children and get a high evaluation, 从而放松对学生的要求，而且对教学内容和教学效果也会有影响

2. Advantages:

(1)对学生来说，评价老师有利于培养学生think independently. 应该鼓励学生challenge 老师，这样他们不但学到知识，而且具有innovative思维，敢于超越老师。

(2)对老师来说，获得feedback 也是提高自己教学能力和教学效果的有效途径，也有利于培养老师的竞争意识，不断学习，不断完善自己来满足学生的学习要求。

(3)学生交了学费，就是customer,老师提供教学服务，从这点上说，学生也有权评价老师。

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