如何培训雅思小作文模版 雅思小作文 怎么写

下面以剑桥模拟题第五套Test two Task one 为例，看看小作文的写作内容。
The first bar chart compares the percentage of reasons for study according to age of students, while the second one indicates the percentage of employer support by age group in terms of time off and help with fees.
As can be seen clearly, there is a gradual decrease with age in study for career, decreasing from as high as 80%, the top, under 26 to short of 20% of those over 49. In stark contrast, the percentage of students studying for interest increases steadily/ significantly from 10% for the youngest to 70%, the peak, for over 49 group, over three times of that of study for career. It is noticeable that the two motivations draw even at 40% for 40-49 year olds.
It is apparent that the youngest age group under 26 receives the most support from their employers, at approximately 60%. However, this sponsoring reduces *oothly to the bottom at roughly 30% of the middle age 30-39, before ascending remarkably to 41% again for those over 49.
In conclusion, it is likely that young people mainly study for career so they get the more support from their employers. （189 words）

从上面可以看出，第一段通常是直接点题，改写题目就可以了。主体通常分为2-3段，主要是数据的描述和比较，如果是两个图的话，一图一段就可以了；如果是单图的话，需要按照比较的层次进行分段。最后一段对图表进行总结或总的概述就可以了。

雅思写作考试时间比较有限，正常考试一共要写两篇，所以对考生们的要求比较严格，为了能帮助更多考生在写作考试中能取得好的成绩，今天新航道雅思培训小编为大家整理了雅思小作文写作技巧，供大家参考。
一，总结段可有可无，可加主观观点
结尾段建议考生为求文章结构板块的完整性起到首尾呼应的作用，用1到2句话重申图表突出特征然后总结图表反映的现象揭示其规律和本质，切忌添加主观观点!图表没有反映的信息不写，也不要随意乱猜!
二，趋势描写就是increase和decrease以及leveloff
同学们在描写趋势的上升或下降的时候常常只用到了一个increase&decrease+副词的模式。这样对上升下降的描写我们可以采取至少三种的描写方式动词+副词，形容词+名词以及把上升下降的词换做形容词来使用。这也就正好避免了评分标准四GrammaticalRangeandAccuracy(语法范围与精确)中的陷阱。
三，连接词
连接词用了、句子之间的连接也有了，文章完成没问题了。在评分标准第二点中明确提到了CoherenceandCohesion(连贯与衔接)，可见这是相当重要的得分参考点而很多中国学生的作文中充满了then、after、before等这样单调的低级连接词较后的得分自然不会上去。合理的使用一些从句、关联词会使你的句子看起来更加精炼和有创意。

你好，很高兴为你解答：
小作文我给你提供G类的信件写法：
G类作文Task 1
Letter writing基本要求：
1) You are suggested to spend about 20 minutes on Task 1 and are required to write at least 150 words.
2) You do not need to write the Address and the date unless they are required.
写作格式：
段首顶格，段间空行。
信件分类：
Formal letters:
formal impersonal letter(business letter) 正式非私人信件（商业信件）
除去签名，所有内容打印。
formal personal letter 正式私人信件 like invitations, requests, arrangements, apology, congratulations, thanks...
最大的目的，就是get things done.
而an informal letter 非正式信件
（最大的错误是混淆问题，正式信件和非正式信件不分。）
雅思考试通常是正式信件，现代的正式信件不一定要求全是正式的语言，只要求避免缩写，俚语和习语即可。
写作模式：
1) In the introduction paragraph, First you should engage in personal correspondence; then you should tell the reader the background of the letter (elicit and provide general factual information) and why you write the letter.
2) In the body, you should express needs, wants, likes and dislikes or express your views or complaints.
Attention: answer the question without straying from the topic.
3) You need appropriate ending for your letter.

最大技巧：
写作的通用技巧就是句型技巧，所有在课堂曾经出现过的句型都可以做为模板句型带入。
Let's take a sample writing as an example.
A friend of yours has written to tell you that he/she is coming to spend two weeks in your hometown. Unfortunately you will be late to meet him/her at the airport because you have something important to do.
Write a letter to your friend and explain why you will be late. Suggest something for him/her to do until you arrive.
抱歉：
Unfortunately
I am sorry for sth
I have to apologize that …
1 在要求部分画下所有重要点。
Write a letter to your friend and explain why you will be late. Suggest something for him/her to do until you arrive.
Would you like to wait in the KFC and I will call you when I arrive.
What about waiting for me in the KFC, and I will try my best to get there earlier.
2 在背景下面画下所有要点。
A friend of yours has written to tell you that he/she is coming to spend two weeks in your hometown. Unfortunately you will be late to meet him/her at the airport because you have something important to do.
3 决定称呼语写法。
Dear Peter,
Bill Gates
Jack Welch
Jennifer Aniston
Britney Spears

Dear Mr / Ms (Ms.)
Miss Mrs
Bill Gates / B. Gates / Gates (Mr. Tom)
Mr Tom Bill

Sir or Madam,

4 从下面内容中，勾去不需要的内容。
* Self-introduction (no need to introduce ourselves to a friend)
I am Rachel Green, a nurse working in GreenHill Hospital.
Pleasantries（客套）(appropriate when writing to a friend)
I am asking you to do me a favor.
We have not seen each other since last student reunion in Los Angeles.
Beijing Shanghai

Information (we will be late and why)

* Inquiry (No such need)
Would you please inform me / tell me …?
Please tell me / update me ….
Request (Suggest what to do)
I would be very much appreciated if you could …
Please do …
I am writing to do … (complain for the injury caused by a accident in your supermarket. )
* Persuasion (No such need)
5 从客套语开始
I was very happy to receive your letter and…
Thank you for the letter dated 17th Mar.
英式表达是：日月年
11th 1st 31st 21st
12th 2nd 22nd
3rd 13th 23rd
th
6 接下去是背景介绍
In this case, the background is that your friend is coming to visit you. Since our pleasantries took only one sentence, we can put pleasantries and background in the same paragraph.

… to hear that you will soon come to ChengDu. I really look forward to spending some time with you and I am sure that we well have a lot of things to say to each other.
I am really looking forward to doing / n.
7 接下来写主题
Unfortunately, though, I have an important exam just on the day of your arrival. That means that I will not be able to come to the airport on time. While I apologize for that, I will not keep you waiting for long: your flight arrives at 3:00 PM, and my exam also ends at 3:00. Of course I will come straight to the airport and it should not take me more than 45 minutes.
8 最后写要求，这里是建议
There is a bar at the airport called Sky Lounge. Would you mind waiting for me there and have a drink or two until I can come and meet you? I hope you do not mind.
9 结尾加上标准的结尾客套话
I really look forward to seeing you.
10 签名
Your friend Paul

最终产品：
Dear Peter,

I was very happy to receive your letter and to hear that you will soon come to ChengDu. I really look forward to spending some time with you and I am sure that we will have a lot of things to say to each other.

Unfortunately, though, I have an important exam just on the day of your arrival. That means that I will not be able to come to the airport on time. While I apologize for that, I will not keep you waiting for long: your flight arrives at 3:00 PM, and my exam also ends at 3:00. Of course I will come straight to the airport and it should not take me more than 45 minutes.

There is a bar at the airport called Sky Lounge. Would you mind waiting for me there and have a drink or two until I can come and meet you? I hope you do not mind.

I really look forward to seeing you.

Your friend Paul

Yours sincerely,
Paul

Dear Sir or Madam:

I am Jennifer Aniston, a nurse working in GreenHill Hospital. I am writing to complain about an injury caused by an accident happened in your supermarket in the afternoon on 17th March and I hope measures should be taken to prevent further similar accidents.

Slip on the wet floor
twist my ankle
broke my arm

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第一步：审题。很多同学在这一步和大作文犯的毛病一样，提笔就写，完全不管题的要求是什么。现在A类写作，除流程图外，基本所有题目都要求你对数据进行选择和有效的比较。换句话说就是选择有特征的数据（比如最大值最小值），然后将他们拿来比较。

第二步：找趋势，找特征。Task1的图表基本分为有时间和没有时间两种。有时间的就有趋势，是上升还是下降，要写清楚。没有时间的就是找特征数值。

第三步：确定结构。较高质量的小作文应为四段。第一段Intro， 第二段 overview， 第三段 body 1， 第四段body 2。当然第二段的内容也可以放在后面作为summary来写，不过个人不建议这样。而且铁律是overview和summary只能有一个，不能两个都写。

第四步：动笔写。

第一阶段：语言总结+熟练+自由运用

大多数考生平时自由练习的情况下，可以有比较充裕的时间进行思考选择词汇或句型结构，所以平时写的作文质量还可以，可是由于在考场当中在高度集中完成听力和阅读之后，大多人的思维已经呈现疲劳状态，加上时间的限制，平时练习的水平并没有办法完全发挥，所以绝大多数考生反馈很多词汇和句型都想不起来使用。因此，在临考前必须一定要量化自己的语言，从平时上课的笔记，看过的资料和书籍中总结：

1)词汇：形容词和副词为主，其次动词(因为大多时候形容词和副词在使用的时候不太容易受语境的限制，可是动词在掌握上必须考虑及物或不及物，和相应的具体范围)

2)短语：形容词性短语，介词短语和动词短语多总结(因为短语使用简单)

比如：cater to *意思就是满足某人

The government will do whatever it takes to cater to the demands of its citizens.

3)句型：功能性语法结构为主

So + adj + be + 名词+ that +句子(结果)

So effective are the measures taken by the government that traffic pressure has been successfully alleviated.

那么这样的词汇，短语和句型要准备多少呢?小编认为准备因人而异，可能需要几轮，但是一共加在一起应该少于50个(词+短语+句型)，最后集中选取使用范围最大和比较好的语言。

其次，就是熟练并保证可以自由支配和运用。任何语言的使用都需要熟悉，但是由于我们前期精选的语料并不多只有最多50个，所以必须要保证每个的使用精准和准确。

最后，变成自己的语言。把2021-2021年考过的大作文题目列出，然后看题目想观点或相应的有关内容，对比自己总结的语料，看能写出多少内容，这个过程非常枯燥，但是确实具体有效。

以上就是前期语言的总结阶段，其实就是找出自己的语料库，量化语言的过程，考生只有用自己熟悉和和常用的语言才不容易产生错误，这是控制语言输出的最好办法!

第二阶段：总结大作文的类型和具体题型的语篇结构

比如：如何能够有效的论证“利大于弊”，这是需要自己通过上课和复习来进行一一总结的，上课只不过是系统的听了一遍，但是要自己多归纳多总结找出便于自己掌握知识的方式。

小编建议可以列表格，比较每种不同题型，比如

类型 审题 论证 第一段 主体 结尾

1

2

3

4

在国外学习，列表格来帮助文科学习是常见的方式，它可以有效的总结抽象内容的相同和不同，对于知识的理解帮助很大。

第三阶段：就是实战演练

随意选去大作文题目，不要自己有倾向，因为大多数考生平时练习作文多选择自己比较熟悉的话题和内容训练，可是无人知道考试当天的具体题目，因此要做到练习题目的广度，如果这个过程中对于某些题目没有想法或观点，可以参考一下范文或线上的内容，但是千万别记英文，一定要记住汉语内容。用自己的语言表达。

在演练过程中把前期总结的语料，放在作文练习本的左边，先想观点和论证内容，然后观察是否可以通过总结的某些语料表达出来，也就是写每篇文章尽可能多地使用自己总结的语言。这样就有效的把自己准备的语言用在作文中。在练习过程中第1-第3篇可能花费时间最多，要差不多一个半小时左右，这是一个熟悉的过程;然后从第4-第6篇，由于方法熟悉了，所以时间会有效降低到50-60分钟;最好从第7-第10篇时间将会有效控制在30-40分钟。越写越熟悉，并且可以高效的使用好的语言，这才是雅思写作复习的王中之道!量化自身语言，高效使用好结构，大大降低语言错误的发生!