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题目意思： 许多人认为国家之间的文化和经济交流是一个很好的发展趋势。 另外一些人认为这样将导致失去国家的文化和象征。 讨论一下这个时间的2面并且给出你的意见。

这是一篇典型的议论文。属于议论文里面的极端议论。最简单的方法就是忽略题目所给出的立场。自己讨论两边围绕的中心点是 increasing trade and cultural contracts

那么所谓的2边也就是。同意（2个好处）和不同意（2个坏处）

1段 intro
不重复的来描述背景
表达一下2方面观点（有些人同意有些人不同意）
表达一下文章目的 This essay attempts to exam the issue from the two perspectives and furthermore shed some personal light.

2段 正方
Advocates of this issue embrace the idea that there are indisputable advantages of cultural exchange and economic communication.
-supporting idea 1
可以说文化的交流。给世界人民带来更加多的理解。避免了一些不必要的misunderstanding and conflict
-supporting idea 2
可以说 经济上的交流使得现在全球化市场化国际化（globalization,marketization, internationalization)..更进一步的促进世界经济发展

3段 反面
On the other hand, opponents assert their point cogently that the drawbacks of such action should not be underestimated.
supporting idea1
必须提到的一点就是题目中所给出的 loss of identity
也就是说因为文化的交流日益平凡。导致了许多国家开始丢失自己的文化。比如中国现在圣诞节的意义要到过于一些传统节日（当做例子来用）
supporting idea2
越多的经济交流导致了。一些国家把经济的利益放在首位put the financial benefit in a dominant place, 甚至不顾走上战争的道路去争取更加多的资源和地区优势

最后结尾第四段
第一句话总结 In conclusion, the two viewpoints mentioned above seem to have solid arguement behind them.
第二句话总结一下正反2面 一到二句话
第三句话才是give your opinion. 自己给一个平衡的观点就好

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2020.10.10

Nowadays more and more tasks at home and at work are done by robots. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

A robot: a machine that can be programmed to move or accomplish tasks on its own‍

「题型」利弊类

「分析」主体段重点论证“机器人帮助人们完成任务”的利弊。

---利在于便利性：

1）省时间，省去人们做家务的麻烦，用省下来的时间人们可以做更有意义的事情

2）省钱，帮助公司节省人工成本，因为机器人可以接听客服*、递送商品、做服务员。

---弊源于过于依赖：

1）（就个人而言）过分依赖机器人可以会导致独立生活能力的丧失，比如孩子不知道如何削苹果、洗衣服

2）（从*角度来看）公司过分采纳机器人，会导致大量现有工人失业，*要花时间去重新安置失业人员

「必备话题词汇补充」

1) accomplish a wide range of tasks 完成各种任务

2) facilitate one’s life 便利某人的生活

3) do various household chores 做各种家务

4) There is no need for * to do sth 某人没必要做某事

5) put * at the risk of losing the ability to deal with personal affairs 让某人丧失处理个人事务的能力

6) the number of the unemployed will be on the rise 失业人数上涨

7) be burdened with the difficulty of relocate these people 背负着重新安置那些人员的重担

2020.10.17

Some people think that it is good for a country’s culture to show imported foreign films and TV programs. Other people think that country should develop their own films and TV programs instead. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

「题型」双边类

「分析」主体段重点论证“甲方”和“乙方”观点并给出各自的支持依据。

---甲方认为引进国外的影视节目有利于本国文化的发展。

理由（去其糟粕，取其精华）：1）引起国外的影视节目有利于我们了解国外的风土人情，拓宽文化视野；2）学习一些国外影视节目的创新玩法和新奇理念，可以启发本国影视的发展，丰富人们的文化生活。

---乙方认为各国应该多花精力开发自己的影视节目。

理由：1）本土影视反应的是本国文化，因此更利于本土文化的弘扬和传播，在娱乐大众的同时可以教育大众；2）本土影视的开发可以促进影视行业的发展，带来更多的就业机会。

「必备话题词汇补充」

1) enable people to know more about foreign customs and cultures 能让人们了解国外的风土人情

2) expand one's vision 拓宽视野

3) serve as good reference materials 是很好的参考资料

4) enrich people's culture life 丰富人们的文化生活

5) help promote one's own culture 利于本土文化的发展

6) deepen people's understanding of one's own culture while being entertaining 娱乐和教育大众

7) provide more job chances 提供更多的就业机会

2020.10.30

Whether or not people achieve their aims is the mostly of the question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?‍

「题型」同意不同意类

「分析」选定个人倾向，主体段重点论证“同意”或“不同意”的理由。

---这篇文章完全可以选择“折衷”写法，既承认“运气”之于实现目标的影响，也承认其他因素（如个人努力）对实现目标的必要性。

1）现实生活中确实有不少人凭借运气获得了成功。比如办美签的时候，就有一定的概率问题；比如考试的时候，遇到自己准备过的题目，就有一定的运气因素。

2）但是，成功是多因素共同作用的结果，除了运气，还要看个人的努力和天资。只靠运气没有实力的人是不可能每次都被眷顾的。就算靠运气拿到了机会，也没办法保住这份成功。求职市场上的例子就数不胜数。

「必备话题词汇补充」

1) plenty of instances 很多个例

2) invidviduals who are not considered talented 天资一般的人

3) achieve success 取得成功

4) the capability of exploiting lucky opportunities matters more 利用运气的能力更重要

5) Success arises from a combination of factors. 成功是多因素共同作用的结果。

6) hard work and intelligence are of great importance 努力很重要

1.设计开头和结尾

关于作文的开头和结尾，中国古人早就有“凤头豹尾”一说，也就是开头和结尾是文章的重点。特别是开头。如果你不能在故事的开始就吸引考官，那他们就很难有耐心把整篇文章读完。所以投入更多的时间去考虑怎么写好开头，考官一旦对你开头感兴趣，他们会想知道得更多。写好开头后，再设计一个精彩的结尾，这会让考官对你的文章印象深刻。

2.训练书写能力

有些同学的英语字体龙飞凤舞，根本看不清楚到底写了什么，这就大大影响了作文的分数。因为考官也是人，没有耐心去仔细阅读这些“天书”。因此，我们要求学生养成良好的书写习惯，把字写得清楚、规范、工整。另外，在考试中，也不可随便涂写，造成卷面不整洁，阅读不便，之所以考试委员会选择铅笔答卷，就是不希望大家乱涂乱改。

3.阅读优秀作品

古人云：读书破万卷，下笔如有神。从中我们可以清楚地看出读与写之间的“暧昧”关系。中国学生为什么在雅思写作上难得高分呢?很重要的一个原因就是读的原版英语太少太少了。但凡优秀的作家都是从阅读别人的佳作开始，接着开始模仿，最后超越他们，形成自己的风格。所以我们的学生也应该从阅读优秀文章开始，抱着“他山之石，可以攻玉”的态度，把有用的表达方式，观点，框架等摘记下来，一字一句一段一篇地突破，模仿消化吸收，真正形成自己的风格。

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因为我并非教育界人士，所以无法给你评分，但可以替你更正文章的错漏，希望会对你有所帮助。

Some people think that increasing business and
cultural contacts have a positive influence, and others think that it has a negative
effect to national identities. What is your opinion?

正文:
I would admit (要加that) the contact between different
countries have risen rapidly, and whether it (加is) a good news for our(是us) human beings is
under discussion for it is really a complicated and significant problem in the coming
wave of globalization.

With the trend of frequently connect to each
other, the world exposed (a quiet应该是: quite a) new atmosphere for business or cultural development.
In this condition, countries show their own advantages and endeavor to make more
profits. As a result, (去掉a) work can be separate into *all pieces(改为lots会更好, for example, we
will found a computer which (the) keyboard is是(was) made in China,
screen is(是was) made in Japan and with it's Germany battery.

Without doubt, globalization seems play(是playing) a remarkable
role in the culture evolution, although we recognize that different nations possess
its(是their) particular culture(s), which anthropologists indicated “local knowledge”, we could
not deny (加that) it gives the harsh impacts to those developing countries.

The acculturation among countries and nations
may lead the (develop of cultural 应该是: development of culture 或 cultural development) into a new degree which (加would) board(是boarden) the understanding
of human, society and nature, and those views in special aspects other than domestic
scholars or even totally opposite theories make great controversies in scholars
is better to enrich the knowledge.

One big point we should not neglect is that
the unequal position between developed countries and developing counties, as I have
concerned, globalization definitely a harsh impact, which meant they should make
a proper balance in learning from others and inherent (加their) own traditions. Therefore
the national identities seem less referred, and what’s more, people are willing
to accept modern civilization and feel shame about our(改为their own) culture. Such as today's
China, a lot of teenagers abandoned those 5,000 years' history and culture carelessly.

We are not living in a(an) isolated island and
there's no chance go(going) back into(要改为: to) thousand years ago when people just live in one
place (all 要改为: their entire) lifespan. After all, when facing (加with) the positive (changes benefits 要改为: benefit of changes) from the
intimate(intimately) associated with other communities worldwide, we won't forget our nationality and heritage from the(our) ancestors.