揭秘雅思作文高分句型：如何描述数字变化 雅思作文修改：网络代替学校

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揭秘雅思作文高分句型：如何描述数字变化

　　12个单词

趋势 描述单词 注意事项

上升 grow, climb, soar 1.其中“soar”和“sink”为极限词汇，不能添加任何修饰；

2.在句子和文章中，事实上很少用到上述动词的原型，相反使用最多的是它们的“过去式”，以及对应的名词；

3.上升和下降需要和数字建立连接，可供选择的介词to, by, of

To 配合动词和名词，表示“达到”

By/of 表示“变化了”；by跟在动词后面，而of跟在名词后面

下降 drop, fall, sink

平稳 stay unchanged at+不变的值

波动 vary between…and…(两个极值； 名词 fluctuation between…and…

程度 dramatically (significantly)剧烈的；progressively (gradually)逐渐的；slightly (slowly)缓慢的 表中所提供的单词均为“副词”，需搭配动词使用；如果需要搭配、修饰“名词”，则上述的词汇应变为“形容词”，即：dramatic, progressive, slight

3个重要的句式：

例句：在2005年到2006年间，当澳洲当地的水费usage charge增加了每千升per kiloliter 0.25元。(看看下面的三种不同表达形式)

(1) 主谓句(强调量词的变化)

The usage charge in Australia grew by $0.25 per kiloliter during 2005-2006.

(2) 主谓宾句(强调量词的变化，词性变化)

The usage charge in Australia had a growth of $0.25 per kiloliter between 2005 and 2006.

(3) 被动句(强调变化本身)

A growth of $0.25 per kiloliter was found in the usage charge in Australia over 1 year to Year 2006.

NB: 表示时间的变化，常用的手法

From…to…; between…and…; during…-…; for/over时间差to终止时间

4个连接词

第一种：一个对象在不同时期的变化(时间变化)，before /, after which

第二种：不同对象的比较 similarly (= The similar pattern is found in…) / however (In contrast,)

例题：

在过去的2年中，中国的GDP(Gross Domestic Production)增长了10%，预计在明年GDP仍可能增长8%左右。但是，日本的GDP在过去的2年中，基本呈现下降趋势，而且预计明年下降得更猛烈。

In the recent 2 years, GDP of China has grown by 10%， after which it is estimated to climb by 8% next year. In contrast, a dropping trend, in the last 2 years, has been found in that of Japan, before it is predicted to be more dramatic。

当不是特别能够确定图表的具体数值时，我们可以在数字前加上about, around, nearly, approximately, or so等一些比较模糊的副词修饰。

看一道例题：

　During 1979- 1999, visits overseas by UK residents, about 12 million in 1979, had a growth to nearly 52 million. The similar pattern was found in visits to the UK by international residents from around 10 million to 30 million. 6.5分

UK residents, about 12 million in 1979, had a growth to nearly 52 million. The similar pattern was found in visits to the UK by international residents from around 10 million to 30 million, but climbing slower than the former. 7分

In 1979, visits abroad by UK residents, 2 million more than those to the UK by overseas residents, was 12 million, after which a dramatic rise to nearly 52 million was found in 1999, when the similar pattern was seen in the visits to the UK by international residents to nearly 30 million. 8分

　　NB：高分的内容应该是信息量较大的，而且处处充斥着比较和对比的感觉。在一个句子中，充分利用“插入语-解释和补充”，以及非限制性定语从句来补充其他的内容，最后利用similarly或however进行比较。

雅思作文修改：网络代替学校

很多同学发来四段式的作文给我，但是真正能写好四段式的没有几个，下面这篇的错误比较典型，给大家参考。

题目如下：schools are no longer necessary, because children can get so much information available through Internet, and they can study just as well at home.What extent do you agree or disagree?

Scientific developments have brought us many benefits, among which the internet must be the most spectacular one. In the near future, it might take the place of schools so that it is convenient for children to obtain knowledge.

我很高兴地看到你可以把上课时讲的很多句子和单词应用在这篇四段式文章中，但是我划横线的句子表现出了你一定的倾向性，你可以把这句改为（there has long been a discussion about the opinion that whether the internet could take the place of schools.）这样可以做到客观的引入话题，而不表明观点。

With time going by, Internet has become an encyclopedia in some degree. It seems that there are an increasing number of children are fund of getting information from the Internet. Some of them are in a great need of gaining information while others just surf it as a hobby. As is known to all that encyclopedia is large enough to satisfy those little children and of course the knowledge in textbooks is included. In that case, there is no need to employ teachers to teach children. As a result children can study just as well at home and get a good grade.

However, there are certainly demerits in studying at home with the Internet. People who make the webpages can make mistakes and some knowledge is completely wrong. As a child, it is not an easy job to distinguish the information. Unlike at home, children are able to obtain knowledge in a systematic way. Besides, children who study at home are more withdrawn than those who study at schools. What is more, children don’t require teachers and that means people who now are teachers will lose their jobs. It may cause the dissipation of human resources and their families are in great trouble of making a living.

上面一段有两个问题：

1.负面的问题我觉得分析的不够，错误应该只是一个小的方面，更重要的应该是：没有人引导，孩子的学习效率会比较低下。

2.我读了划横线的句子后，感觉你的观点应该是支持网络替代学校，因为你用了，certainly这个让步词，但是你在下面一段却表明了跟我的猜测相反的观点，前后不一致，这个是致命的错误。

My view is that schools are still necessary in the future. That is the best way for children to not only get their knowledge in a systematic way but also develop their interpersonal skills. Internet is, in the long run , just a tool to widen their horizons.

如果我打分的话，Band 5

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