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如何写出雅思作文高端结尾段 stress

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如何写出雅思作文高端结尾段 stress

如何写出雅思作文高端结尾段


  随着雅思托福考试越来越被大家所熟知,渐渐的,大家也明白了想出国留学,雅思考试是必须要走的一条路,而对于一些学生来说雅思作文更是其中的重中之重,特别是一些对于四六级写作都束手无策的考生来说,雅思就更加困难了,时间更短,而字数要求却更多了。
  很多学员向小编反映,雅思作文结尾段最难写,所以,我们就在本文中教大家如何写出一个高端大气的雅思作文结尾段,让考官瞬间提升了对整篇文章的印象分。
  回顾全文+观点+展望:
  这种结尾方式比较适合于双边结构的作文,在这种写法中,我们要注意的是结尾段由三个要素组成,其中第2个要素是必须的 ,但是句子的数量可以是3句也可以是2句甚至1个句子。首先我们来看一个例子:
  I agree that we need to make sure that animals that are used for testing new products have the minimum of suffering. However, I am convinced that animal testing is necessary, and that it will continue to benefit humans in new and wonderful ways。
  上面这个例句中,作者将自己的观点隐藏在了一个宾语从句之后,起到了一个欲扬先抑的效果。但是这种效果必须搭配一个展望未来才能起到渲染的效果。我们来对比另外一个例子:
  In conclusion, physical punishment can be a useful method of discipline. However, it should be the last choice for parents. If we want to build a world with less violence we must begin at home, and we must teach our children to be responsible。
  大家不难发现,2个句子都使用了相似的衔接方式,即首句委婉地回顾全文,将观点的对立面用"让步"的方式表达出来,同时也是对于主体段观点的回顾。然后再是用转折阐述自己的看法和观点。最后再用一个对于未来的期望来支撑自己的观点。这种顺序安排的优点在于对于文章的主体有很好的总结,但同时观点又是非常鲜明有力的,加上对于未来的润色,使得表达更流畅。用同样的方法,我们再来看第三个例句:
  To sum up, although there are undoubtedly some problems with increased levels of education, I feel strongly that the country can only progress if all its people are educated to the maximum of their ability。
  和前2个结尾不同,第三个结尾尽管也是先回顾了全文,但是它将作者的观点和对未来的期望写在了一个条件状语从句里。如此就给出了我们在构造"展望未来"时的一个思路,即搭配条件状语从句或者介宾短语跟在观点句之后。此种结尾发展方式同样适用于分析解决型大作文的结尾段布局。
  对于毒品对社会的危害,作者先是承认现状的无法改变,进而乐观地阐述了自己的观点即采取了切实有效的行动后可以减弱其危害。最后用毒品的危害性来对未来作展望。换句话说,在社会类分析解决型议论文中,我们在展望未来时可以考虑用强调其长远的影响作为突破口。
  一个好的雅思作文结尾段不仅能给作文一个完整的结束,更能提升雅思作文的质量,获得评分老师的好感,同学们,这样高端大气的结尾,你掌握写作技巧了吗?

雅思作文写作素材(一):money & stress

They say money can make you happy. But scientists find that it can make your life a lot less stressful. A study of almost 200 *s making various amounts of money finds that the less money you make the more stress your body feels. People of the lower end of the social economic spectrum have stress hormone levels in their bodies that worth 3 times higher than those who are better off. The salary to stress link they found was independent - race, age, sex or even weight. So money alone may have more impact than previously thought. The scientists say that being poor is often associated with less healthy life styles. The poor tend to *oke more and skip breakfast, two factors which have major stress effects on the body. Rural economic classes also tend to have less education and resources for dealing with crisis when they arise, which can put undo strain on the system. As for happiness, well, previous studies have shown that it's not how much money you have but how you think about it.

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