牛人总结的雅思作文评分标准 雅思作文修改：网络代替学校

雅思考试主要是通过对考生听、说、读、写四个方面英语能力的考核，综合测评考生的英语沟通运用能力，实现“沟通为本”的考试理念。对于雅思考生来说，也有很多考试难点和政策盲区需要帮助解答。今天雅思无忧网小编准备了牛人总结的雅思作文评分标准 雅思作文修改：网络代替学校，希望通过文章来解决雅思考生这方面的疑难问题，敬请关注。

牛人总结的雅思作文评分标准

为大家介绍一位牛人网友在复习IELTS剑桥系列时总结的雅思考试作文评分标准,总结的依据来自该系列中考官的评语，比较科学实用，供广大烤鸭们参考。

雅思考试作文评分标准Grades Standard:

1. The main argument are relevant and the writer's point of view need be clear.

2. The writer's point of view needs many ideas that deal with the actual issues and to be consistent.

3. The prompt could not be copied directly in the response and the words can not less than 250 (at look).

4. There are various range of language in the sentence.

5. The sentence cannot be only simple in all.

6. A range of structure need depend on good control of punctuation and grammar.

ps: Examiner is interested in visual example. if there are some appropriate examples to support your view, your marks will not be low.

雅思考试作文评分标准第一点总是观点问题，一般得4分的都是观点不清晰;第二点提到理由，理由必须要支持观点，理由写的混乱的话，分数肯定不高;第三点是字数问题，一般考官不会数的，差不多就ok了(这是我猜的)但是如果你有多次抄袭题目的原话的话，那他就会不厌其烦的数了，而且抄袭的部分不算，只算剩下的。这三点是大家必须做到的，否则5分都拿不到。

雅思考试作文评分标准第四是语言的组织，也就是连接词用的要恰当，看上去是个小问题，但是这点非常重要，要体现出逻辑表达次序，如果乱用，考官的逻辑思维也会混乱，导致看不懂或不理解你要说什么，不能正常往下阅读，这会让考官非常难受，你想想你让他难受，他会让你好受吗?但是他又不知道你在哪里，就算知道你在哪里也不能把k你一顿阿，就算能k你一顿，也不一定打得过你啊，要知道考官大多都是老头老太，但是这口气一定要出的呀，最后倒霉的还是你的分数(晕，撤远了)

雅思考试作文评分标准第五点句子不能全是简单句，当然简单句看上去容易，也比较容易理解，也不会错，但是在那些老奶奶老爷爷眼里就像是他们在上幼儿园的小孙子小孙女写出来的东西，只是些幼儿园水平的东西(在这里顺便讲件事，大家知道ielts的题目在美国和英联邦国家中是什么等级吗?ielts分听说读写4部分，其中阅读和写作是他们12年级的水平，口语的CueCard部分是他们幼儿园的游戏，他们没有听力，这些时我侄子告诉我的，他在美国，今年刚刚12年级，这次他回来，我给他做了剑桥的题目，他告诉我这些是他们现在这水平做的东西)可想而知，幼儿园水平的东西，分数也只能在幼儿园的水平。

雅思考试作文评分标准第六点就是句子的结构了，这点需要注意的是语法和标点，在我们看来标点并不重要，但是剑桥范文的评语中都有punctuation这词，而且和grammar并列，说明这和语法一样重要，而且也是评分的一个标准，不过，这些都是最后出现的，也就是说相对上面5条来说不怎么重要，在我国英语学习和考试中都是语法为重点，而恰恰人家并不看重它，这让我国许多语法很好的同学，有些英雄无用武之地吧!不过学好语法也不是件坏事。我说不重要只是和上面5条比哦，也别太轻敌哦，毕竟也是评分标准之一，特别在时态的应用上要注意，如果乱用时态让考官进入时间隧道出不来的话，那你就再准备1450把他解救出来吧!

雅思作文修改：网络代替学校

很多同学发来四段式的作文给我，但是真正能写好四段式的没有几个，下面这篇的错误比较典型，给大家参考。

题目如下：schools are no longer necessary, because children can get so much information available through Internet, and they can study just as well at home.What extent do you agree or disagree?

Scientific developments have brought us many benefits, among which the internet must be the most spectacular one. In the near future, it might take the place of schools so that it is convenient for children to obtain knowledge.

我很高兴地看到你可以把上课时讲的很多句子和单词应用在这篇四段式文章中，但是我划横线的句子表现出了你一定的倾向性，你可以把这句改为（there has long been a discussion about the opinion that whether the internet could take the place of schools.）这样可以做到客观的引入话题，而不表明观点。

With time going by, Internet has become an encyclopedia in some degree. It seems that there are an increasing number of children are fund of getting information from the Internet. Some of them are in a great need of gaining information while others just surf it as a hobby. As is known to all that encyclopedia is large enough to satisfy those little children and of course the knowledge in textbooks is included. In that case, there is no need to employ teachers to teach children. As a result children can study just as well at home and get a good grade.

However, there are certainly demerits in studying at home with the Internet. People who make the webpages can make mistakes and some knowledge is completely wrong. As a child, it is not an easy job to distinguish the information. Unlike at home, children are able to obtain knowledge in a systematic way. Besides, children who study at home are more withdrawn than those who study at schools. What is more, children don’t require teachers and that means people who now are teachers will lose their jobs. It may cause the dissipation of human resources and their families are in great trouble of making a living.

上面一段有两个问题：

1.负面的问题我觉得分析的不够，错误应该只是一个小的方面，更重要的应该是：没有人引导，孩子的学习效率会比较低下。

2.我读了划横线的句子后，感觉你的观点应该是支持网络替代学校，因为你用了，certainly这个让步词，但是你在下面一段却表明了跟我的猜测相反的观点，前后不一致，这个是致命的错误。

My view is that schools are still necessary in the future. That is the best way for children to not only get their knowledge in a systematic way but also develop their interpersonal skills. Internet is, in the long run , just a tool to widen their horizons.

如果我打分的话，Band 5

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