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2020.10.10

Nowadays more and more tasks at home and at work are done by robots. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

A robot: a machine that can be programmed to move or accomplish tasks on its own‍

「题型」利弊类

「分析」主体段重点论证“机器人帮助人们完成任务”的利弊。

---利在于便利性：

1）省时间，省去人们做家务的麻烦，用省下来的时间人们可以做更有意义的事情

2）省钱，帮助公司节省人工成本，因为机器人可以接听客服*、递送商品、做服务员。

---弊源于过于依赖：

1）（就个人而言）过分依赖机器人可以会导致独立生活能力的丧失，比如孩子不知道如何削苹果、洗衣服

2）（从*角度来看）公司过分采纳机器人，会导致大量现有工人失业，*要花时间去重新安置失业人员

「必备话题词汇补充」

1) accomplish a wide range of tasks 完成各种任务

2) facilitate one’s life 便利某人的生活

3) do various household chores 做各种家务

4) There is no need for * to do sth 某人没必要做某事

5) put * at the risk of losing the ability to deal with personal affairs 让某人丧失处理个人事务的能力

6) the number of the unemployed will be on the rise 失业人数上涨

7) be burdened with the difficulty of relocate these people 背负着重新安置那些人员的重担

2020.10.17

Some people think that it is good for a country’s culture to show imported foreign films and TV programs. Other people think that country should develop their own films and TV programs instead. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

「题型」双边类

「分析」主体段重点论证“甲方”和“乙方”观点并给出各自的支持依据。

---甲方认为引进国外的影视节目有利于本国文化的发展。

理由（去其糟粕，取其精华）：1）引起国外的影视节目有利于我们了解国外的风土人情，拓宽文化视野；2）学习一些国外影视节目的创新玩法和新奇理念，可以启发本国影视的发展，丰富人们的文化生活。

---乙方认为各国应该多花精力开发自己的影视节目。

理由：1）本土影视反应的是本国文化，因此更利于本土文化的弘扬和传播，在娱乐大众的同时可以教育大众；2）本土影视的开发可以促进影视行业的发展，带来更多的就业机会。

「必备话题词汇补充」

1) enable people to know more about foreign customs and cultures 能让人们了解国外的风土人情

2) expand one's vision 拓宽视野

3) serve as good reference materials 是很好的参考资料

4) enrich people's culture life 丰富人们的文化生活

5) help promote one's own culture 利于本土文化的发展

6) deepen people's understanding of one's own culture while being entertaining 娱乐和教育大众

7) provide more job chances 提供更多的就业机会

2020.10.30

Whether or not people achieve their aims is the mostly of the question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?‍

「题型」同意不同意类

「分析」选定个人倾向，主体段重点论证“同意”或“不同意”的理由。

---这篇文章完全可以选择“折衷”写法，既承认“运气”之于实现目标的影响，也承认其他因素（如个人努力）对实现目标的必要性。

1）现实生活中确实有不少人凭借运气获得了成功。比如办美签的时候，就有一定的概率问题；比如考试的时候，遇到自己准备过的题目，就有一定的运气因素。

2）但是，成功是多因素共同作用的结果，除了运气，还要看个人的努力和天资。只靠运气没有实力的人是不可能每次都被眷顾的。就算靠运气拿到了机会，也没办法保住这份成功。求职市场上的例子就数不胜数。

「必备话题词汇补充」

1) plenty of instances 很多个例

2) invidviduals who are not considered talented 天资一般的人

3) achieve success 取得成功

4) the capability of exploiting lucky opportunities matters more 利用运气的能力更重要

5) Success arises from a combination of factors. 成功是多因素共同作用的结果。

6) hard work and intelligence are of great importance 努力很重要

雅思作文范文带翻译

每天使用电脑会对你的孩子产生消极的影响。你同意还是不同意?下面是我分享的雅思社会类英语作文，欢迎大家阅读!

一篇雅思作文,希望有这方面专业的老师学长评点一下...

雅思作文范文【2】

Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do.

-How far do you agree?

-What criteria should be used to decide how much people are paid?

Model Answer:

Nobody can deny that there are certain professionals like nurses, doctors and teachers who are essential to the fabric of society, and who should therefore be rewarded accordingly. However, this is seldom the case. When we look at the salaries and fees commanded by certain film stars and actresses and people who run large companies, this does not seem fair.

First of all, not all film stars earn huge sums of money. In fact, at any one time in the UK, for example, roughly 80 per cent of actors are out of work and on top of that the number who are paid so-called ‘telephone number fees’ is even *aller. One must also remember that the career of many actors is very short and that therefore the money they earn has to be spread over many years. The same applies to company bosses.

Stating a set of criteria as to how much people should be paid is not easy. The idea of performance-related pay is very much in vogue at the moment. Rewarding people according to qualifications has long been used as a yardstick for paying people, but it is not a consistently good measure. Another is years of relevant experience, but there are many cases where a younger person can perform a task better than someone with lots of experience.

Whatever criteria are used to assess salaries, an on-going cycle will develop. This will create pressure in other areas. This considered, generally I feel that certain key professionals should have their salaries assessed by independent review bodies on an on-going basis so that they do not fall behind.

参考翻译：

没有人能否认，有些专业人士如护士、医生和教师对社会的构成至关重要，因此他们应该得到相应的回报。然而，这是很少的情况下。当我们看一些电影明星和管理大公司的人所要求的薪金和费用时，这似乎不公平。

首先，并不是所有的`电影明星都能赚大钱。事实上，在英国的任何一次，例如，大约有80的演员失业，最重要的是，所谓的'*号码费'的人数甚至更小。人们还必须记住，许多演员的事业很短，因此他们赚的钱必须分散多年。同样适用于公司老板。

说明一套标准，以支付多少人是不容易的。目前有关绩效工资的想法非常流行。人们根据资历来奖励人们长期以来一直是衡量人们报酬的标准，但这并不是一贯的好办法。另一个是多年的相关经验，但有许多情况下，年轻人可以执行的任务比有经验的人。

无论用什么标准来评估工资，一个持续的周期将发展。这将在其他地区产生压力。我认为，一般来说，我觉得某些关键专业人士的薪酬应该由独立检讨机构持续评估，这样他们才不会落后。

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论据分析雅思写作真题
阅读真题和雅思写作不得不说的关系：论据篇。
Topic：TV
is an essential part of leisure activities in most families. However,
some parents decide not to have a TV set in their homes, in order that
their children will devote enough time to invention and creation. Do you
agree or disagree with this attitude?
开头段：介绍文章背景，随着科学技术的发展，电视对人们的影响越来越大。
As
science and technology accelerates, television, as a powerful
invention, is becoming incredibly popular in people's daily life. People
can be informed of the current affairs and appreciate the affluent
programs at home. It seems to me that television will not whittle
children's creativity as has been exaggerated.
主体段第一段：开始论述电视对小孩创造力的好处1，电视让小孩子们在家就能了解到世界上发生的事情，新的科技发展，这些都会激发孩子的创造力，给他们带来灵感。
To
begin with, television is an effective means to make children
acquainted with the latest news and enlightens them on the latest
scientific advancement. Television reveals the recent development of
some researches, such as the new computing technology, clone technology
and genetic breakthroughs, which can inspire the imagination of children
and motivate them to conduct relevant experiments, making new findings
and breakthroughs in their familiar fields.

主体段第二段：论述电视对小孩创造力的好处2，一些冒险片可以培养小孩子的创造力，地理历史片通常是很有启发性的，可以扩大小孩子的知识面，丰富人生的经历。

Moreover,
along with the emergence of information technology, the knowledge
presented in textbooks cannot cater for children's curiosity any longer.
Programs like adventures can cultivate children's creativity and the
ability to tackle difficulty. Some scientific, detective and documental
programs, like Discovery and National Geographic, are so enlightening
and fascinating that even little children can be absorbed in. Other
well-chosen programs can initiate teenagers' aspiration to know about
the nature and stimulate their interests in science and technology.
主体段第三段：论述看电视对孩子创造力带来的坏处，可能会让孩子习惯被动接受信息，而不是自己学会发现。而且有的电视节目要不然就是理解起来太复杂，要不然就是不够有趣，因此看电视并不是一个好的开发创造力的方法。
There
is suspicion in some parents' minds that TV might retard their
children's creative ability or restrain kids' imagination because TV
viewers tend to receive information in a passive way instead of
discovering things with their own hands. Although people in the TV
industry have made great efforts to develop various programs, the
outcome is not satisfactory: either the program is too profound to be
understood or the topic is not interesting to attract TV audiences.
Thus, watching TV is hardly a good way to inspire children's creativity.
In many cases, it can draw attention away from their studies and spoil
their school education.
主体段第四段：还有一些别的方法也可以用来*创造力，比如写作，想象和原型描述也可以激发新的想法。
There
are some other ways to stimulate children's creativity, such as
writing, visualizing and prototyping, which can boost the flow of new
ideas. Something as simple as writing deepens every individual's
engagement. This is why all those competitions on breakfast cereal
packets encourage us to write in saying good comments. The very act of
writing makes us more likely to believe it.（稍作修改，用在这里做论据）
主体段第五段：权威并不是抑制创新，但实际上却经常如此。错误的领导方式会导致团队成员倾向于选择不承担本应属于他们的责任。
Authority
does not have to inhibit innovation but it often does. The wrong kind
of parenting will lead to the regrettable tendency of children to opt
out of team responsibilities that are properly theirs.（稍作修改，用在这里做论据）
结尾段：总结上文，表达自己的观点，电视并不会对小孩的创造力有不利的影响。
In
a word, it is my strong belief that television will not impair
children's creativity as is asserted. Nevertheless, the government and
the whole society should exert to eliminate the unhealthy contents on TV
and ensure the children with a favorable growing environment.

如何快速提高雅思写作
雅思写作备考的精髓在于知己知彼，有方向有针对性提高。写作除了日积月累，还有一些简单快捷的窍门，对于一些写作弱势的人而言非常重要。只有清楚自己的不足，对症下药，持之以恒才能提升写作水平，下面小编就如何快速提高雅思写作向大家提出看法，希望对大家有所帮助。

第一、词汇的多样性
为避免重复使用词汇，应对方法有二：
1. 同义词替换：
对于同一个词汇绝对不可以在同一篇文章中反复使用，无论是在《雅思写作评分标准》还是在《OG》中都明确提到。正如剑七Test4大作文(剑七第169页)的考生例文中，考官在评语中写到，这篇作文中'knowledgeand skills' is repeated ninetimes，这意味着考官有理由认为该考生没有能力使用多样化的词汇，完成250个单词的大作文，最后这篇作文的得分仅有5分。
反观《OG》，专家给出了非常好的解决办法。例如，考生需要提前背诵一些常用词汇的同义词替换，如：think=realize=believe=beconvinced=hold theviewpoint，get=obtain=attain，necessary=indispensable=irreplaceable等。在雅思VIP课堂中，我们也会更加详细地加以分类，按照名词词汇替换、动词词汇替换和形容词词汇替换的方式，讲授给考生，让小烤(考)鸭们记得更准确、更牢固。
2. 使用代词：
代词的使用是中国考生非常欠缺的一种本领，这和我们在母语作文的写作中，极少使用代词来承接上下文有很大关系。然而，巧妙的运用代词却是英文写作中，表达逻辑顺序，并且展现语言简练性的绝佳方式。《OG》完美地攻克了这一难点，一步步引导大家学会使用this/thistype of/this kindof的表达方式，不仅使得上下文衔接得自然得体，而且可以在众多模板作文中脱颖而出，彰显一般考生不具备的、仅在地道的英文写作中才具备的实力。
第二、词汇的准确性
该特性可以通过以下三个方面努力：
1. 拼写准确
说起英文词汇，许多考生们抱着一本《词汇胜经》就开始埋头苦背，但是进了考场，却发现真正想用的词汇还是不能够准确、快速地写下来，这无疑是没有把好钢用在刀刃上，其实细心的小烤鸭可以发现，真正写作中要用到的词汇是相对集中的，远比阅读所需要的词汇少得多，而经过VIP老师们的总结和《OG》的提点，烤鸭们可以把精力集中放在高频词汇上，摒弃一直以来“普遍撒网”的战术，而在有限的备考时间内“重点捕鱼”。例如以下一些词汇，看看你能否一眼挑出错误：goverment，enviroment， persentage， diffrent， untill， coutries， betwen， dicreased，incresed.这些都是雅思写作考试中，你最可能用到的高频词汇，你的拼写准确性过关了吗?一起来看看正确拼写吧!
正确拼写：government， environment， percentage， different， until， countries，between， decreased， increased.
2. 区分词性
很多考生对于词汇的词性不太重视，认为只要认识这个单词，能说出中文意思即可，这在阅读里尚可接受，但是在写作中却是致命的缺点。我们以小作文为例，常用的表达句型一定是：Thepercentage rose dramatically from 1990 to 2000.其中，rose是动词，是rise(上升)的过去式。而此句略加转换，即可变为It experienced a dramatic rise from 1990 to2000.在这里rise是名词词性。同为“上升”，如果词性把握不好，会导致低级的语法错误，因而造成严重失分。究其原因，还是因为在中文里，我们是很少区分词性的，例如，“数据经历了一个增长”，这里的“增长”为名词，而“数据增长了”，这里“增长”又变为动词。虽然两个“增长”一个做动词，一个做名词，但是在中文里，都用“增长”这两个字来指代，词语的模样没有变化。而英文可不是这样哦!
我在课上常用“睡觉”一词举例，更为通俗易懂。比如“睡觉是幸福的事”“我要睡觉了”“我刚才睡觉呢”“我爱睡觉”，四句话中“睡觉”两个字分别担当了“主语”、“将来时态的谓语动词”“过去时态的谓语动词”和“宾语”，这两个字太强大了有没有!但是在英文里，充当主语、宾语，词性要变成名词性，即动名词sleeping，而谓语动词也要结合不同的时态，如Iwill sleep， I slept just now./I was sleeping等。看来小小的英文词性，有大智慧吧。
3. 注意搭配
《OG》中对于词语搭配也做了特别的讲解，虽然同义词可以相互替换，但是到底选用哪个词才是最贴切的，还是有不少讲究，这一点的确需要同学们苦练内功。请大家用下面三道题自测一下：
(1)I don't think it is necessary for children to learn/study about ancienthistory.
(2)I do think it is important for us to try to understand/know differentcultures.
(3)I believe today's younger generation are more attracted by flexibleworking hours than by the thought of earning money/wages.
答案为：(1)learn (2)understand (3)money
你都选对了吗?看来在准备雅思写作的过程中，不仅要关注词义本身，还要结合例句，去看看这个词汇在句子中到底如何使用，和什么样的词汇搭配，以构成短语。如此一来，我们才能在考场上轻松、准确地调动它们，让各种词汇以正确的形式，呈现在答卷上，地道非凡!不过，还是那句话，不要死学习，咱们还是要有重点、有层次、有顺序地进行学习。
以上是小编对于如何快速提高雅思写作的正式看法，请大家借鉴，根据个人情况和实际水准制定相关计划，为考试做好准备吧。