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三招助你写出完美雅思作文 雅思作文主体段写作技巧

三招助你写出完美雅思作文

  备考雅思写作很多考生青睐于模板,这无可厚非。模板可以更有效帮助大家备考,但是在运用模板的时候大家要学会灵活,不能生搬硬套。同时,考生们还必须注意避免一些错误,这样才能从两方面提高考生的写作水平。

  招数一: 避免重复

  1. 尽量避免重复使用同样的词汇。或者有的时候虽然词汇没有重复,但意思却有重复。这时候可以做一些简化的工作。例如下面这个例子: :

  The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.

  large 对一个 farm 来说就是 size 方面的 large ,所以 in size 可以去掉,改为:

  The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.

  更简洁的表达方式为:

  My grandfather grew up on a large farm.

  2. 有时一个词组可以用一个更简单的单词来替换,例如:

  My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents' farm.

  这里的 over and over again 就可以改为 repeatedly ,显得更为简洁:

  My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents' farm.

  招数二: 避免空洞的单词和词组

  1. 一些空洞的单词或词组根本不能为句子带来任何相关的或重要的信息,完全可以被删掉。比如下面的句子:

  When all things are considered , young *s of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion.

  这句话当中的“ when all things are considered ”和“ in my opinion “都显得多余。完全可以去掉。改为:

  Young *s of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.

  2. 有些空洞和繁琐的表达方式可以进行替换,例如:

  Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.

  “ due to the fact that ”就是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的例子,可以替换,简化为下面的表达方式:

  Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have now.

  招数三:选择最恰当的语法结构

  选择合适的语法结构可以使句子意思的表达更为精确和简练。虽然语法的多样性也很重要,但选择最恰当的语法结构仍然是更为重要的考虑因素。以下原则是在考虑选择何种语法结构时可以参考的原则:

  1. 一个句子的主语和谓语动词应该能够反映句子中的最重要的意思。例如: .

  The situation that resulted in my grandfather's not being able to study engineering was that his father needed help on the farm.

  从意思上来分析,上面这句话需要表达的重要的概念是“ grandfather's not being able to study ”,而在表达这个概念时,原句用的主语是 situation ,谓语动词是 was ,不能强调需要表达的重点概念,可以改为下面这句话:

雅思作文主体段写作技巧

 雅思作文主体段写作技巧。主体段落一般由主题句和扩展句构成。主题句一般放在第一句,是段落核心,用来概括全段内容。主题句分为笼统主题句和具体主题句。笼统主体句的作用是引出下文,点明方向,具体主题句则概况下面内容的核心主题。仅有主题观点是不够的,还要对其进行论证,也就是围绕主题进行论证,对其进行说明、叙述、举例及论述。
  一、举实例论证。
  有些考生在开头提出观点之后,就不知道该如何继续下去。这种情况下,考生可以举实例论证,举例是我们解释论证一个观点最好的方式,也是最有说服力的。
  Although sticking to one’s goal is key to success, sometimes one should be ready to give up. Napoleon’s story is a case in point. After Napoleon succeeded in seizing the crown of France, he should have been satisfied with his achievement. But he did not. He went on to conquer the whole Europe. Then after he succeeded in ruling almost the whole Europe, he should have given up this ambition to expanding his empire. But he did not. He went on to invade Russia and there he suffered a total defeat. Later he was sent into exile and died in a lonely island.
  本段引用了拿破仑的事迹来加以论证。拿破仑是家喻户晓的人物,而且最后决定拿破仑及其帝国命运的滑铁卢战役也是大家都知晓的。通过这个例子来说明在适当的时候学会放弃是很有说服力的。在举例时,最好选择一些大家都知晓的,这样才能更有说服力。当然考生也可以用自己的亲身经历来加以论证。
  The second reason for my propensity for outdoor activities is that they can build my mind greatly. In sports, one must learn to struggle for the victory, learn to fight with no matter what is left in his body. And one must learn to stick to one’s own confidence and hope, no matter how little the hope may be. And one must learn to accept failure, learn to start again after failure. Long-running and mountain climbing contribute much to this kind of spirits. I will never forget the feeling when I raced to the final line first in a 300-meter running. I could hardly breathe in the last 100 meters. My lungs ached and my legs weighed tons, but there was still one runner in front of me. I gave all my strength to move one foot ahead of the other. When I surpassed him, he gave a cry of surprise, I won at last and I learned much from the race.
  文章在提出主题句后,先是加以论述,然后用长跑和爬山作为例子。最后又用自己的亲身经历和感受来论证室外活动可以增强一个人的毅力。
  二、用一些研究、调查、发现、科学家及权威人士的观点或组织机构的研究结果加以论证,并引用数据作为支撑。此论证方法的好处就是比较权威客观,更有说服力。

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