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如何写出一篇不低于6分的雅思作文,掌握四大技巧 英文简洁之美

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如何写出一篇不低于6分的雅思作文,掌握四大技巧 英文简洁之美

如何写出一篇不低于6分的雅思作文,掌握四大技巧


写作是中国雅思考生最头疼的一个考试项目。此次将解开写作之小作文的迷惑。那么怎样才能在20分钟不到的时间里,写出一篇不低于6分的考试作文呢?

对此,笔者认为小作文的实战考试中时间分配可以如下:

步骤一:审题,找出题目的要求,从而完成评分描述“TaskAchievement” 第 一 条 therequirements of the task (<2分钟)

具体来看:阅读文字部分shows后面信息,找出题目的topic, time,place。阅读图表的标题、横轴与纵轴的文字信息,尤其注意纵轴单位、图标内的对象所包含的文字信息。

步骤二:观察数据,找出主要特征和能证明这些特征的关键点。 (<3分钟)表格题和柱状图这些多数据的图表出现频率相当高,怎样根据数据的异同来对繁多的数据进行有效分类,并归纳出每一类别的共性,成了当前评判作文能否在“TaskAchievement”进入6分的标准。

步骤三:文章撰写 (15分钟左右)当前小作文的写作常用大纲:题目改写(引出topic),对象分类(表明写作思路);重申主要特征:或指出某个未提及的特点。

步骤四:检查(1分钟)

此时,不宜做大的修改,把笔误的部分改掉即可。一般语言水平在大学四级左右的考生,根据本文的步骤,重点关注第一第二步,必能在考试中取得至少6分的佳绩。

你的雅思作文句子有效吗?英文简洁之美

句子结构是雅思写作评分标准“语法的多样性与准确度”中一项十分重要的考量因素,但这并不意味着要求考生具备写长难句的能力。在追求输出像雅思阅读一样精到的语言之前,我们首先要确保的应当是写出来的句子是正确的。有效的句子甚而段落通常应当同时满足以下五个要素:一致、连贯、简洁、强调、多样。

1. 一致:如句内的逻辑关系,注意检查是否存在简单推论、逻辑残缺、逻辑悖论、依赖偏见等。

Born in a *all town in South Chinain the early 1950s, he grew up to be a famous musician.

→ He was born in a *all town in South China in the early 1950s. In his childhood he liked to sing songs. Later he entered a conservatory. In the 1970s he became a famous musician.

2. 连贯:这个问题在平行结构、共用主语、使用指代的情况下尤其需要注意。

We thought she was charming, intelligent, and a very capable young woman.

→ We thought she was charming, intelligent, and very capable.

Or: We thought she was a charming, intelligent, and very capable young woman.

He was knocked down by a bicycle, but it was not serious.

→ He was knocked down by a bicycle, but was not badly injured.

Looking out of the window, the grassland stretches as far as the eye can reach.

→ Looking out of the window, we can see the grassland stretching as far as the eye can reach.

Or: Outside the window, the grassland stretches as far as the eye can reach.

He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, which nobody believed.

→ He gave a reason, which nobody believed, for not attending the meeting.

Or: He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, a reason which nobody believed.

3. 简洁:英美文化推崇坦率和直接,通常不需要体现咱儒家文化的含蓄和委婉。

It was *all in size and blue in colour.

→ It was *all and blue.

He usually likes to drink all kinds of wines that are produced in France.

→ He prefers French wines.

4. 强调:正如每篇文章都要有中心思想(main idea),每个段落都要有主题句(topic sentence)一般,每个句子都要围绕一个中心观点清晰地呈现出作者想要表现的重点。

He is modest and hardworking and is a good student.

→ He is a good student, modest and hardworking.

There is a big tree, which is said to be 300 years old, in the temple.

→ In the temple there is a big tree, which is said to be 300 years old.

At the sight of the disorderly crowd, he was aware that something bad would be possible.

→ The moment he saw the disorderly crowd, he knew that something bad would happen.

5. 多样:中文重重复,英文重替代,中英差异使然。

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