你的雅思作文句子有效吗 只有句型多元化的雅思作文才能得高分

雅思考试主要是通过对考生听、说、读、写四个方面英语能力的考核，综合测评考生的英语沟通运用能力，实现“沟通为本”的考试理念。对于雅思考生来说，也有很多考试难点和政策盲区需要帮助解答。今天雅思无忧网小编准备了你的雅思作文句子有效吗 只有句型多元化的雅思作文才能得高分，希望通过文章来解决雅思考生这方面的疑难问题，敬请关注。

你的雅思作文句子有效吗？英文简洁之美

句子结构是雅思写作评分标准“语法的多样性与准确度”中一项十分重要的考量因素，但这并不意味着要求考生具备写长难句的能力。在追求输出像雅思阅读一样精到的语言之前，我们首先要确保的应当是写出来的句子是正确的。有效的句子甚而段落通常应当同时满足以下五个要素：一致、连贯、简洁、强调、多样。

1. 一致：如句内的逻辑关系，注意检查是否存在简单推论、逻辑残缺、逻辑悖论、依赖偏见等。

Born in a *all town in South Chinain the early 1950s, he grew up to be a famous musician.

→ He was born in a *all town in South China in the early 1950s. In his childhood he liked to sing songs. Later he entered a conservatory. In the 1970s he became a famous musician.

2. 连贯：这个问题在平行结构、共用主语、使用指代的情况下尤其需要注意。

We thought she was charming, intelligent, and a very capable young woman.

→ We thought she was charming, intelligent, and very capable.

Or: We thought she was a charming, intelligent, and very capable young woman.

He was knocked down by a bicycle, but it was not serious.

→ He was knocked down by a bicycle, but was not badly injured.

Looking out of the window, the grassland stretches as far as the eye can reach.

→ Looking out of the window, we can see the grassland stretching as far as the eye can reach.

Or: Outside the window, the grassland stretches as far as the eye can reach.

He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, which nobody believed.

→ He gave a reason, which nobody believed, for not attending the meeting.

Or: He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, a reason which nobody believed.

3. 简洁：英美文化推崇坦率和直接，通常不需要体现咱儒家文化的含蓄和委婉。

It was *all in size and blue in colour.

→ It was *all and blue.

He usually likes to drink all kinds of wines that are produced in France.

→ He prefers French wines.

4. 强调：正如每篇文章都要有中心思想(main idea)，每个段落都要有主题句(topic sentence)一般，每个句子都要围绕一个中心观点清晰地呈现出作者想要表现的重点。

He is modest and hardworking and is a good student.

→ He is a good student, modest and hardworking.

There is a big tree, which is said to be 300 years old, in the temple.

→ In the temple there is a big tree, which is said to be 300 years old.

At the sight of the disorderly crowd, he was aware that something bad would be possible.

→ The moment he saw the disorderly crowd, he knew that something bad would happen.

5. 多样：中文重重复，英文重替代，中英差异使然。

只有句型多元化的雅思作文才能得高分

一篇好文章的条件很多。除了内容丰富和组织紧密之外，词汇的运用和句子的处理，也起着决定性作用。句子可长可短，同一件事，可以用不同的句式表达。如果句子清一色是简单句，文章必定很单调乏味。如果全篇充满了冗长的复杂句，读起来也很费力。最好的方法是以简单句为基础，配合适当的并列句和复杂句。简单句可长可短，通常要加些附属成分，如分词短语、介词短语、副词短语、不定式动词短语，以及节缩成分。总之，作者可根据情况，使句子多样化，使文章灵活多姿。

例如下列五个句子的基本概念一样，但是句式不同，内容重点也有些差别：

（1） The goats grazed peacefully in the farm and were unaware of the approaching hunter. （并列分句（1）+2）

（2） Grazing peacefully, the goats in the farm were unaware of the approaching hunter. （现在分语短语+简单句）

（3） In the farm, the goats grazed peacefully and were unaware of the approaching hunter. （副词短语+并列分句（1）-（2） ）

（4） There were goats grazing peacefully in the farm, unaware of the approaching hunter. （简单句+形容语短语）

（5） As the goats grazed peacefully in the farm, they were unaware of the approaching hunter. （原因副词从句+主句）

（1）和（5）的句式最常见；如果加上其他三种互相交替，句子不是更多样化吗？最后，看看这两个句子要如何多样化呢？

（6） The young pilot was on his first overseas training.

（7） He felt very uneasy.

（a） The young pilot on his first overseas training felt very uneasy.（b） The young pilot felt very uneasy during his first overseas training.（c） The young pilot's first overseas training made him feel very uneasy. （d） Extreme uneasiness seized the young pilot on his first overseas training. （e） The young pilot was on his first overseas training, feeling very uneasy. （f） It being his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy. （g） Being on his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy. （h） The young pilot was on his first overseas training and felt very uneasy. （i） The young pilot, who was on his first overseas training, felt very uneasy.（j） When the young pilot was on his/first overseas trainging, he felt very uneasy. （k） As the young pilot was on his first overseas training, he felt very uneasy.（l） The young pilot was on his first overseas training, so that he felt very uneasy.

在上述12个句子中，（a）-（g）是简单句；（h）是并列句；（i）-（l）是复杂句。简单句除（b）和（g）之外，其他五样，用的人并不多。人们最喜欢采用复杂句，尤其是（j）和（k）这两款；接着便是并列句（h）。如果大多数人的句子只限于（b），（g）， （h）， （j）和（k）这五种，而其他的则弃如敝屣，不是很可惜。

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