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“烤鸭”必读:多样化句式为雅思作文加分 解读最新雅思作文评分标准

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“烤鸭”必读:多样化句式为雅思作文加分 解读最新雅思作文评分标准

“烤鸭”必读:多样化句式为雅思作文加分

雅思写作的评分标准变为:TR,CC,GRA和LR后,评分标准细化,具体化,从而对英语语言基本功的考查力度加大。 笔者现将在课堂上讲的多样化句式的一部分内容拿出来跟读者共享。

雅思写作句子开头的变化的手段:

A Begin sentence with an appositive

The forest ranger, an expert in forest fire control, talked to the campers about safety in the woods。

An expert in forest fire control, the forest ranger talked to the campers about safety in the woods。

the country’s biggest cellular operator, China Mobile is looking at tighter controls on Internet-related service providers, industry insiders say。

B Begin a sentence with an adverb

The fog was slowly settling down。

Slowly the fog was settling down。

Obviously enough, he himself can not handle the trouble by himself。

C Begin a sentence with an adjective or adjective phrase

Mr Boyd was very angry and began to defend his reputation with strong arguments。

Angry, Mr Boyd began to defend his reputation with strong argument。

Tired and frustrated, the teacher went home to have a rest。

D Begin sentences with participle phrases

I jogged very day and increased my energy level。

Jogging every day, I soon increased my energy level。

Tim was troubled by a dream and he woke up with a start。

Troubled by a dream, Tim woke up with a start。

Witnessed by Chinese Premier Wen Jiabao and leaders of the 10-mem ber ASEAN, Chinese Minister of Commerce Bo Xilai signed the agreement with 10 economic ministers of the ASEAN countries。

E Begin sentences with an infinitive phrase

You must attend every class to succeed in a course。

To succeed in a course, you must attend every class。

F Begin sentences with a prepositional phrase

Madame Curie was an industrious worker in the scientific laboratory。

In the scientific laboratory, Madame Curie was an industrious worker。

Under a new scheme, established SPs can become pure content providers and China Mobile may seek a bigger portion of the shared revenues。

In the short term, operators will not abandon SPs。

For China Mobile, a dramatic change in its partnership scheme may be harmful。

G Begin sentences with clause modifiers

He did not want to rewrite the paper because he was tired and hungry and discouraged。

Because he was tired and hungry and discouraged, he did not want to rewrite the paper。

You may regret in leisure what you impulsively do in haste。

What you impulsively do in haste you may regret in leisure。

以上就是小编为大家整理的雅思写作中的几种多样化句式。最后,祝大家在雅思考试中取得理想的成绩!

解读最新雅思作文评分标准

  1、well-organized:文章采用的论述结构,分几个部分论述,每部分有几段,各部分、各段间的关系是什么。

  2、sentence variety:最好长短句结合,ets藐视总用短句的人:Since most of the sentences are short and choppy,the ideas they try to com municate are also choppy。

  3、complexity:事物的两面性(同一事物有优点就有缺点,相比较的事物有各自的优缺点),从多角度分析事物(分析不同领域中,不同情况下)。论点一边倒的文章论述得再好也只能得5分。

  4、connecting ideas logically:using transitional phrases起承转合词,过渡句,或有此种作用的句子,总之起到help organize the ideas and move the argument forward。

  5、conveys meaning skillfully:可用于论证的一切技巧(估计老美自己用起来也得费点心思)。比如文章的行文方向,起承转合不用明显的标志词(first,second,however,on the otherhand,the second example illustrating my point),而是依靠论述的内在脉络(只可意会不可言传)自然而然的引到下一块内容。

  6、compelling reasons:reason就已经够令人头疼的了,有加了个compelling,这是最重要的一个得分点。

  7、well-focused:简单说就是不跑题。中心论点明确,全文不跑题;各段主题句明确,围绕主题句论述。

  8、persuasive examples:用来支持reason的,使抽象的reason更具体,更易被读者理解,从而产生共鸣,或使其更可信,更有说服力。可用的例子有自己的经历,引言。

  9、insightful position:在有全面深刻理解的基础上,观点最好新颖独到(对ets来说),但必须保证能自圆其说。

  10、没有十分地把握,不要乱下定义,严重的损害议论文严谨的文风。不论是内容上还是形式上,总结也要做到避免重复有层次,先表面后深刻,先分段后整体。

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