雅思作文中最好避免的句子 雅思作文找观点的几条原则(上)

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雅思作文中最好避免的句子

发帖：wendyyin

大概说下自己的情况.我IELTS也是考了N次,虽然最终过了,但是过得很勉强.所以决定在正式的MASTER上课前先读2个月的语言.目前已经上了2个星期的课,总体来说还是颇有些收获的.这2周内已经写了2篇IELTS作文,语言课程的老师从我们的ESSAY中挑出了一堆毛病.把错误之处一一讲解给我们.个人觉得很有用,编辑出来给大家,希望大家能够从中受益.

1. a lot of/lots of
这对词组一般不要出现在academic essay中,考官已经看烦了.可以用A considerable number of代替

2. Everything has two sides/every coin has tow sides
说了跟没说一样,明显的事实,以后也不要用了

3. Recently
这个词不好.按照他们的说法就是too imprecise,没有一个具体的时间.可以用 In the last 5 years…/since….代替

4. There is survey……
老师是这么说的:has there been?/only say this if you actually know of one 也就是说考官知道这些都是你编的,最好不要用了

5. And, because, but
这三个词我们还是经常会用到.其实最好用in addition, therefore, however等代替

6. 不能用vivid 来形容world vivid可以用来说memories或者是dream之类的

7. No one can deny that…/Undoubtedly
这2个词组太绝对了,用来开头并不合适. 其实每个人都能持与你意见相反的态度

8. in a word
很多人会用它来做conclusion. 鬼佬的意见是:如果你准备用这个词组来引出你的观点,那你最好用一个词来概括,谁让你是这么写的呢

9. Meanwhile don’t use in general academic writing or for task 2—but it is ok for describing a process in task 1

10. Nowadays
理由和3差不多, 这个词用在文章里显得太普通了, 老师的原话是it does not mean very much

11. It is a well known fact… 最好不要用, 有的考官会扣分

12. advantages and disadvantages 换成merits and drawback 和pros and cons

13. In my opinion, I dis/agree with this
这是多余的表达. When stating your opinion you follow with a fact 相信大家都能看懂,就不翻译了

14. IELTS文章中千万不能用缩写, 例如I’m 在考场上别犯懒,平时最好也别写缩写,多多注意,养成习惯

15. very不能用来形容delicious, lovely, fantastic, wonderful, amazing, gorgeous and huge.

16. human being MS这个词指的是动物+植物, 以后可以用man kind代替

阅读理解里做题，做到只要出现极端词汇的题，99。************************9％都是错的——相信无论是应试还是别个老师一定说过这句话。

如果这条成立，为什么在自己的作文里还会出现什么
as we all know?
it can not be denied?

雅思作文找观点的几条原则(上)

发贴：grant

1.经济原则
1)钱
女人就业：
Women find they must work to earn enough money to provide for their family.
Once they get married, the majority of women continue working since the financial pressures of setting up a house and establishing a reasonable standard of living often require two incomes.
Those professional childcare facilities come at a cost and often require two salaries coming into a family to be afforded.
Indeed it could be argued that by giving mothers the opportunity to work and earn extra money children can be better provided for than previously. There is more money for luxuries and holidays and a more secure family life is possible.
艺术：
The arts can be an important attraction for tourists, bringing considerable revenue into the country.
Government subsidy of the arts is unnecessary as if art is good enough, then people will pay for it. If art is not good enough to be popular, then government should not reward it for its failure.
Art is not a commodity.
死刑：
It is cheaper to kill them than to imprison for life.
Prisons in many countries are over-crowded and under-funded, and this problem is made worse by life sentences or delayed death sentences for murderers.
全球化：
Globalisation has increased world prosperity.
血腥运动（Blood sports）:
Many rural communities would be devastated by a ban on hunting.
英语国际语言：
If everyone spoke the same language it would be much easier for people to move and work in different countries or to conduct trade with each other.
穿校服：
Parents often find some uniform items, e.g. jackets, very expensive compared to the rest of their child’s wardrobe, and complain they can never be worn outside the school environment.
控制人口：
They identify population control as a means to raising living standards.
If education does not succeed within a time scale, it may be necessary to consider other measures, such as tax incentives or child-benefit payments for *all families only.
童工：
However, in many countries children work because their families need the additional income, no matter how *all.
It is an unfortunate fact that many employers prefer to use the services of children simply to save money by paying them less than *s and it is this type of exploitation that should be discouraged.
教育还是治疗：
There is also an economic argument for doing so. Statistics demonstrate the cost-effectiveness of treating a condition in the early stages, rather than delaying until more expensive and prolonged treatment is necessary.
旅游：
Touri* is the largest industry in the world. It surpasses trade in oil, steel, and armaments in total dollar value and in employment created.
Often large sums of money are needed to attract tourists, so significant capital investment may be wasted.
太空：
Space exploration is a waste of resources.
Our dreams of exploring space are a luxury we cannot afford.

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