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雅思考试主要是通过对考生听、说、读、写四个方面英语能力的考核,综合测评考生的英语沟通运用能力,实现“沟通为本”的考试理念。对于雅思考生来说,也有很多考试难点和政策盲区需要帮助解答。今天雅思无忧网小编准备了巧用“八角法”审好雅思作文题 be,希望通过文章来解决雅思考生这方面的疑难问题,敬请关注。
巧用“八角法”审好雅思作文题 be

巧用“八角法”审好雅思作文题 赢在起跑线

审题是话题作文的第一关。雅思作文跟国内写作一样都是话题作文,在紧张的时间里抓住题目思想进行立意是关键。专家表示,从审题入手,才能赢在雅思作文“起跑线”上。下面是专家的一些新颖的方法和建议。

对比分析不难发现,雅思写作题目和国内写作题目有两大差异:

一、考题范围广并多涉及负面问题。

雅思考试的作文涉及教育、科技、犯罪、媒体、*等各个方面。这是由英国的教育方式决定的。国外多是小班教学,以讨论课为主。学生围绕一个topic,进行辩论、相互驳斥,以此锻炼学生的语言和思维能力。

例如:关于交通警察是否可以配枪的话题。这个问题反映了现实意义:当时的伦敦和柏林等地区有多处骚乱,而这个问题英国议会真的有辩论过。这就要求我们考生要关注国际环境,培养自己的国际视野。

二、重辩论能力。

雅思考试是国际性的考试,主要考察考生独立思考的能力,提倡提出质疑,只要能自圆其说就可以。这与中国传统的中庸之道完全不同。但是考生在提出自己的观点时要在理性判断的基础上,也不需要政治腔。

如02年考题——是否应该废除死刑。不管哪种都要以站得住脚的论证和角度来分析。陈老师建议:就这个题,最好应和国际走势选择反对死刑,这也是所谓的国际视野。

在审题后,如何揣测立意呢?

有专家老师推出了“八角法”,即:

eights—

E是economy environment经济和环境角度。

I是individual intelligence个人和智力角度。

G是government *角度。

H是human rights health人权和健康角度。

T分别是tradition time传统和时间角度。

S是society社会角度。

考生不妨在雅思写作时,运用这种快速好记的方法,迅速找到适当的角度为你的观点做阐释。

例如,死刑的问题,同意不废除的可以从人权、社会、个人(受害者家庭、罪犯)等角度来论证,这样就能全面、系统的列出证词,自圆其说。

此外,专家特别指出:文章观点的选择一定要有清晰的界定,只能二选一。但是并不一定要尖锐而生硬。

还以“死刑”为例,如果支持废除,文章最后也可以指出从长远看应该废除死刑,但是目前一些发展中国家的现状还不能废除。在观点解释清楚后,这是“有条件”的支持论点,反而更显圆满。

雅思作文修改:new language should be invented

题目:Some people think that a new language should be invented for people from different countries to use for the international communication. To what extent do you think its advantages far outweigh its disadvantages?

其实这篇并不怪啊,就相当于我发的讲义的重点题目第一题,一种全球化的语言。

In the contemporary world, globalization is making a large incidence around the world. The issue of invented a fresh language is an emotional one, with some people talking the attitude that is necessary to contrive a new language for people from different countries to use for the international communication.

The reason for this trend may involve the recognition that different language may cause dispensable trouble, even lead to a war and also restricted people who can only use their mother tongue to communicate with external people. By contrast, those who can use foreign language to get a high-paid career and immigrate to other countries have a high quality life. They tend to be more enlighten may to they broader view. Admittedly, having ability to communicate with people who has different culture background is increasingly remarkable. So, invented a new language may bring numerous benefits to not only a person, but countries from all over the world.

第一个立论段落的问题:主题句涵盖太多内容,太宽泛,变成几乎没有主题句

However, a great language frequently link to a variety of culture. Furthermore, originate a new language is a long-term evolution like Chinese. Classical Chinese is the beginning of Chinese which is throughout 5000 years of history and gradually evolve to modern language called Modern Vernacular Chinese. During that time, Chinese shaped a colorful culture which is magnificent at present. But, current science and technology is become increasing advancing. Scientist may totally create a new language which is combine diversity of culture.

这段的论述有点离题了

Overall, despite of creating a language may during a long-term period. But, modern technology can reduce that period and eventually contrive a new language. Speaking myself, its benefits are significant contributing factors to the development of world.

给你一点论据:

支持:

1. 个人生活,学习,工作带来方便

2. 促进世界的经济发展,国与国的沟通,社会进步

不支持:

1. 造成很多小语种和少数民族文化的消失

2. 造成世界的uniformity,使人们的生活变的dull或monotonous

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