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雅思作文的高端写法 雅思作文词汇和句型总结

雅思作文的高端写法 你能猜到这结尾吗?

一个漂亮而又简洁的结尾对于高分大作文来说无疑是必须的,尽管最终评分的主要依据并不是由结尾段决定的,但是结尾段的出色完成对于一篇成功的学术类大作文是不可或缺的。在本章节中,朗阁海外考试研究中心写作组的老师将带领大家领略结尾的不同高端写法。

一. 回顾全文+观点+展望:

这种结尾方式比较适合于双边结构的作文,在这种写法中,我们要注意的是结尾段由三个要素组成,其中第2个要素是必须的 ,但是句子的数量可以是3句也可以是2句甚至1个句子。首先我们来看一个例子:

I agree that we need to make sure that animals that are used for testing new products have the minimum of suffering. However, I am convinced that animal testing is necessary, and that it will continue to benefit humans in new and wonderful ways.

上面这个例句中,作者将自己的观点隐藏在了一个宾语从句之后,起到了一个欲扬先抑的效果。但是这种效果必须搭配一个展望未来才能起到渲染的效果。我们来对比另外一个例子:

In conclusion, physical punishment can be a useful method of discipline. However, it should be the last choice for parents. If we want to build a world with less violence we must begin at home, and we must teach our children to be responsible.

大家不难发现,2个句子都使用了相似的衔接方式,即首句委婉地回顾全文,将观点的对立面用"让步"的方式表达出来,同时也是对于主体段观点的回顾。然后再是用转折阐述自己的看法和观点。最后再用一个对于未来的期望来支撑自己的观点。朗阁海外考试研究中心分析认为,这种顺序安排的优点在于对于文章的主体有很好的总结,但同时观点又是非常鲜明有力的,加上对于未来的润色,使得表达更流畅。用同样的方法,我们再来看第三个例句:

To sum up, although there are undoubtedly some problems with increased levels of education, I feel strongly that the country can only progress if all its people are educated to the maximum of their ability.

和前2个结尾不同,第三个结尾尽管也是先回顾了全文,但是它将作者的观点和对未来的期望写在了一个条件状语从句里。如此就给出了我们在构造"展望未来"时的一个思路,即搭配条件状语从句或者介宾短语跟在观点句之后。此种结尾发展方式同样适用于分析解决型大作文的结尾段布局,比如:

All in all, although the problem of drugs may seem impossible to eliminate, there are concrete steps that can be taken to weaken the hold of drugs on society. The danger from drugs is too great to ignore.

雅思作文词汇和句型总结

发贴:fargo

原创词汇总结,都是我为IELTS作文看报纸收集的.
Warning:

不要以为有好词就能拿高分,我认为词汇只能排第三。
1.观点与论证力度.2文章结构,是否通顺流畅3词汇。

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不同意
I would certainly oppose changing the system [+ ing form of verb]
She's opposed to religious education in schools.--be opposed to sth to disagree -with a principle or plan:---

Are you for or against my proposal

He objects to the label 'magician' which he is often given.
Her objection to/against the plan is based on incorrect facts

同意
Have they assented to (= agreed to) the terms of the contract?--『Formal』

She advocates taking a more long-term view.[+ ing form of verb]
He advocates the return of capital punishment.

I think you were quite justified in complaining『having a good reason for something』
I generally favour travelling by night, when the roads are quiet.

But the federal Training Minister disputes crisis calls from employers,

问题出现
One of the disquieting facts stemming from this is that plastic bags can become serial killers
This has resulted in a ban on plastic bags being imposed there early in 2002.
an increasingly crowded curriculum, maths is being sidelined.
township hospitals are running at a loss or are on the verge of collapse.
The world's tropical forests continue to disappear with disheartening speed

from September through to December airborne pollen from olive blossoms is contributing to asthma and hay fever problems

But recently a new trend has been evident - one person living in a house
the rise and rise of the single person household.

问题原因
This could be due to the fact that HDPE bags can not be put out for collection with other household recyclables
The problem arises partly because charities have outposts in areas of conflict:
Another cause for concern,the use of (DU), may also be less of a problem than many fear
Another current concern about China is that 。。。。。。
The PCAU has found that even though bombs, troop movements and landmines caused awful problems in Afghanistan, the most serious long-term consequences have resulted from the uncontrolled use of resources, particularly the cutting of
t says the drain is symptomatic of a maths crisis that has its origins in the classroom.
But that had more to do with the collapse of investment in America than with the rise in China
The pact of 2000 owed more to Nelson Mandela's patient mediation than to the Burundian elite's own desire for peace

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