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雅思作文越复杂越好 雅思作文找观点的几点常用原则(下)

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雅思作文越复杂越好 雅思作文找观点的几点常用原则(下)

雅思作文越复杂越好?中国学生常见的四大误区

1. 误解一:句子结构越复杂,得分越高

许多考生在考雅思写作的时候,拼了命的把准备的各种句型拐弯抹角地套在一起,窃以为考官在阅卷的时候必会为自己强大的语法功底所折服,进而给个六分。可是,雅思作文考试毕竟不是语法考试。一篇好雅思文章应该流畅自然,而不是生搬硬套,无中生有。这种费尽心机写下的“高分”句子往往会弄巧成拙,影响文章整体的自然性和流畅性。

2. 误解二:使用的单词越生僻,得分越高

有些考生在学到雅思写作要换词后,每次练习写作都不惜花大把时间把简洁的词汇Google成百年难得一遇的生僻词,然后死死记下,当作替换词用到考试中,以博考官注意,达到画龙点睛之效,然而结果却往往事与愿违。其实,单词不求复杂,要的是贴切。像是经济学人上的学术性文章上,也常会用到cut来描述价格、经费上的消减。这不但不会让人觉的低俗幼稚,反而能让人觉得干脆利落,毫不留情。而且,用复杂的单词极易拼写错,更让考官对之反感。同时,Google来的甚至是字典上的单词往往会翻译得不准确,一旦使用就会闹出笑话。例如褒词贬用,贬词褒用,让考官完全抓不准考生的观点和立场,影响得分。单词的恰当使用时一个学习积累的过程,如果没有足够的把握,务必慎用。

3. 误解三:写作文要加标题

英国考试有一个惯例,写作文时不需要加标题,直接写正文就行。加标题纯属画蛇添足,而且这个标题有时可能涵盖太大,整篇文章都不能很好的驾驭这个标题;有的时候又可能包含太少,一个标题只覆盖文中一两段的内容;有时甚至标题的意思与文章主题南辕北辙,各奔东西误导考官。所以写雅思作文时,切忌加标题。

4. 误解四:小作文每条数据都要描写

雅思官方有明确指出,大作文占的分量要比小作文大,而且考官在评分改卷时也以大作文为主。但有时考生在写作文时,把握不住时间,小作文写得过于详细,最后留给大作文的时间还不足半小时,这样就基本over了。而小作文写得久,就是因为很多考生都在千方百计地把图中出现的所有数据写入小作文中。最后,不但小作文的流畅自然被破坏,留给大作文的写作时间也所剩无几,进退维谷。其实,小作文的数据并不需要全数描写,这不单是为了节约时间给大作文,更是为了保障小作文的浑然天成,避免出现流水账的情况,以给小作文加分。

雅思作文找观点的几点常用原则(下)

4.权利自由原则
动物:
It is a breach of their natural rights to take them by force into captivity for our own purposes.
Animals have the right to be treated as beings of value in themselves, not as the means to human ends.
死刑:
The right to life is inviolable and protected by law.
One human right is the right to life and taking a life away by execution is cruel, inhumane and degrading.
极限运动:
People should be free to participate in activities with others as long as it does not affect the safety of non-participants.
摄像机:
They feel that being watched constantly is like being in a jail, and that ordinary people are losing their freedom because of these devices.
强迫老年人退休:
Compulsorily retiring old employees can affect the older individual’s freedom - and right - to work and can deprive society of valuable experience and insights.
禁酒:
Banning alcohol infringes people’s civil liberties to an unacceptable degree.
禁烟:
While a government has a responsibility to protect its population, it also has a responsibility to defend their freedom of choice.
新闻审查:
Banning advertisements is a severe restriction upon freedom of speech.
We have accepted that freedom of expression should have limits.
The risks of stifling free expression far outweigh the potential for unacceptable material.
An individual's rights end when they impinge on the safety and rights of others.
媒体报道名人:
Famous people deserve privacy and respect.
Although, generally speaking, the media should not interfere in people’s private lives, there are times when it is correct to do so.
母亲在家带孩子:
Mothers should have as much freedom as anyone else in society to decide what is best for them and their children.
家庭教育:
If they feel that the child would be best educated at home, by them or by another, that is their right.
控制人口:
They feel that this is one area of life where they have the right to make decisions for themselves.
分开教育:
Among these opponents are “equal education” advocates, who argue that every student has the same right to enjoying high quality education regardless of gender, race, wealth, and most importantly, regardless of their minor differences in intellectual abilities.
资助艺术:
So-called "elite culture" should be available for all to enjoy, and not just confined to the rich.

5.文化原则
1)文化重要性
捕鲸:
Whale hunting is an important aspect of some people’s cultural heritage.
建筑:
Architecture is part of a country’s cultural heritage.
语言:
Language is a type of cultural heritage.
Language is often seen as a badge of identity and more conflict may be created if the global community is seen to prefer one language to another.
电视:
Television is mostly directed to films and shows that have commercial purposes but little cultural value.

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