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让你的雅思作文吸引人的名人警句

　　雅思频道小编为大家整理了一篇让你的雅思作文吸引人的名人警句的文章，供大家参考，以下是详细内容。

　　合适的名言警句会给你的文章增色许多。引用的位置可以在开头、结尾或正文段落中，常见的引用形式如下：

　　One　of　the　greatest　early　writers　said　"Knowledge　is　power",　such　is　the　reward　of...

　　"……".　That　is　how　SB　comments　(criticizes/praises...).

　　"……".　How　often　we　hear　such　words　like　these.

　　下面这些名言收集，希望对大家有所帮助。

　　啃骨头原理——John　F.　Kennedy

　　We　choose　to　go　to　the　moon　and　other　things.　　Not　because　they　are　easy,　but　because　they　are　hard.

　　化整为零——Henry　Ford

　　Nothing　is　particularly　hard　if　you　divide　it　into　*all　jobs.

　　聚宝真经——Robert　Collier

　　Success　is　the　sum　of　*all　efforts,　repeated　day　in　and　day　out.

　　一句话，一辈子——Winston　Churchill

　　Never,　never,　never,　never　give　up.

　　打遍天下无敌手——Napoleon

　　Victory　belongs　to　the　most　persevering.

　　另解：巧妇难为无米之炊——Mother　Teresa

　　To　keep　a　lamp　burning　we　have　to　keep　putting　oil　in　it.

　　一语惊醒梦中人——谚语

　　Where　there's　a　will　there's　a　way.

　　天冰两吃——William　Penn

　　No　pains,　no　palm;　no　thorns,　no　throne;　no　gall,　no　glory;　no　cross,　no　crown.

　　付出与收获的正比逻辑——Crassus

　　Those　who　aim　at　great　deeds　must　suffer　greatly.

　　最廉价却又最昂贵的资本——Thomas　Edison

　　There　is　no　substitute　for　hard　work.

　　你在睡梦中押韵，我在耕耘中押注——Benjamin　Franklin

　　Plough　deep　while　sluggards　sleep.

　　独孤新解——Henry　David　Thoreau

　　In　the　long　run　men　hit　only　what　they　aim　at.

　　黑客?!——Samuel　Johnson

　　Few　things　are　impossible　to　diligence　and　skill.

　　年底大分红——Ray　A.　Croc

　　Luck　is　a　dividend　of　sweat.　The　more　you　sweat,　the　luckier　you　get.

　　没得花肥，哪有扑鼻香——Emily　Dickinson

　　Luck　is　not　chance...　It's　toil...　Fortune's　expensive　*ile　is　earned.

雅思作文修改：网络代替学校

很多同学发来四段式的作文给我，但是真正能写好四段式的没有几个，下面这篇的错误比较典型，给大家参考。

题目如下：schools are no longer necessary, because children can get so much information available through Internet, and they can study just as well at home.What extent do you agree or disagree?

Scientific developments have brought us many benefits, among which the internet must be the most spectacular one. In the near future, it might take the place of schools so that it is convenient for children to obtain knowledge.

我很高兴地看到你可以把上课时讲的很多句子和单词应用在这篇四段式文章中，但是我划横线的句子表现出了你一定的倾向性，你可以把这句改为（there has long been a discussion about the opinion that whether the internet could take the place of schools.）这样可以做到客观的引入话题，而不表明观点。

With time going by, Internet has become an encyclopedia in some degree. It seems that there are an increasing number of children are fund of getting information from the Internet. Some of them are in a great need of gaining information while others just surf it as a hobby. As is known to all that encyclopedia is large enough to satisfy those little children and of course the knowledge in textbooks is included. In that case, there is no need to employ teachers to teach children. As a result children can study just as well at home and get a good grade.

However, there are certainly demerits in studying at home with the Internet. People who make the webpages can make mistakes and some knowledge is completely wrong. As a child, it is not an easy job to distinguish the information. Unlike at home, children are able to obtain knowledge in a systematic way. Besides, children who study at home are more withdrawn than those who study at schools. What is more, children don’t require teachers and that means people who now are teachers will lose their jobs. It may cause the dissipation of human resources and their families are in great trouble of making a living.

上面一段有两个问题：

1.负面的问题我觉得分析的不够，错误应该只是一个小的方面，更重要的应该是：没有人引导，孩子的学习效率会比较低下。

2.我读了划横线的句子后，感觉你的观点应该是支持网络替代学校，因为你用了，certainly这个让步词，但是你在下面一段却表明了跟我的猜测相反的观点，前后不一致，这个是致命的错误。

My view is that schools are still necessary in the future. That is the best way for children to not only get their knowledge in a systematic way but also develop their interpersonal skills. Internet is, in the long run , just a tool to widen their horizons.

如果我打分的话，Band 5

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