雅思作文task1经典套句整理 雅思作文修改：money

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雅思作文task1经典套句整理

1. the table shows the changes in the number of...over the period from...to...　　该表格描述了在...年至...年间...数量的变化。 　　2. the bar chart illustrates that...　　该柱状图展示了... 　　3. the graph provides some interesting data regarding...　　该图为我们提供了有关...的有趣数据。 　　4. the diagram shows (that)...　　该图向我们展示了... 　　5. the pie graph depicts (that)....　　该饼图揭示了... 　　6. this is a cure graph which describes the trend of...　　这个曲线图描述了...的趋势。 　　7. the figures/statistics show (that)...　　数据(字)表明... 　　8. the tree diagram reveals how...　　该树型图向我们揭示了如何... 　　9. the data/statistics show (that)...　　该数据(字)可以这样理解... 　　10. the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that...　　这些数据资料令我们得出结论... 　　11. as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table...　　如图所示... 　　12. according to the chart/figures...　　根据这些表(数字)... 　　13. as is shown in the table...　　如表格所示... 　　14. as can be seen from the diagram， great changes have taken place in...　　从图中可以看出，...发生了巨大变化。 　　15. from the table/chart/diagram/figure， we can see clearly that...or it is clear/apparent from the chart that...　　从图表中我们可以很清楚(明显)地看到... 　　16. this is a graph which illustrates...　　这个图表向我们展示了... 　　17. this table shows the changing proportion of a & b from...to...　　该表格描述了...年到...年间a与b的比例关系。 　　18. the graph， presented in a pie chart， shows the general trend in...　　该图以饼图形式描述了...总的趋势。 　　19. this is a column chart showing...　　这是个柱型图，描述了... 　　20. as can be seen from the graph， the two curves show the fluctuation of...　　如图所示，两条曲线描述了...的波动情况。

雅思作文修改：money spent on art or education

题目：Many countries spend a lot of money in art. Some people think investment in art is necessary, but others say money is better spent on improving health and education. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the contemporary world, art cost（costs） a large figure of money. Some people claim is necessary to invest in art. But still have some people deem that fund should spend（be spent） more on improving health and education instead of art. As far as I am concerned, the first view is overly simplistic.

Speaking myself, protecting art and diffuse it, is the precondition of advancing health and education. The first instance with respect to this is that the aggression on china in the early twenty century. Union army from eight countries used force and entry Yuan-Ming Imperial Garden where save the outstanding representation of Chinese artworks. A greatest art gold mine was destroyed at that time may due to the government of Qing Dynasty inability to strengthen their military and lock of money to maintain it exist. Before long, opium was widespread in china and contributes to negative quality of generation. Second place, education has to link to art, art is a soul of nation. There is no denying that no one country educates offspring without art. To a great extent, investment in art is a significant factor contributing to the development of person happiness and enjoyment.

这段的论据有点扯远了，而且你说的有误，圆明园不是八国联军抢的，是英法联军，总之别说，英国人干的坏事

Admittedly, advancing health and education need not only vigor but fund of government. Those facilities need to maintain and invent, medical skills is become dramatically in the modern days. But when carefully weighting in mind, we may find that improving health and education are international issues, intake from international society is advisable. By contrast, art is unique for ant other country, ignore art is an inexcusable crime because art, once gone, is difficult to restore.

Overall, my view is that spend money in art is the precondition of advancing health and education. In despite of health and education is become increasingly dramatic, but those skills and facilities can intake from international society. For art, actually can not.

整篇文章我给5.5分

论据注意要由浅入深，

第一段，可以写艺术对于完善人的性格，对于个人修养的提高都是有好处的。

第二段，上升到社会的高度，投资艺术，建博物馆啊美术馆啊等，可以传承传统文化，保持民族特色

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