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雅思作文一大重要秘诀:结尾必须写的大气漂亮 雅思作文常用谚语

雅思作文一大重要秘诀:结尾必须写的大气漂亮


国内的孩子拼了命地准备高考,然而,出国党也并不轻松,烤鸭是他们的必经之路。每一位烤鸭人都想打遍天下无敌手,都想知道考高分的秘诀,下面我们就重点来说说,雅思考试之中,我们需要注意的一些问题。

一个漂亮而又简洁的结尾对于高分大作文来说无疑是必须的,尽管最终评分的主要依据并不是由结尾段决定的,但是结尾段的出色完成对于一篇成功的学术类大作文是不可或缺的。在本章节中,老师将带领大家领略结尾的不同高端写法。

回顾全文+观点+展望:

这种结尾方式比较适合于双边结构的作文,在这种写法中,我们要注意的是结尾段由三个要素组成,其中第2个要素是必须的 ,但是句子的数量可以是3句也可以是2句甚至1个句子。首先我们来看一个例子:

I agree that we need to make sure that animals that are used for testing new products have the minimum of suffering. However, I am convinced that animal testing is necessary, and that it will continue to benefit humans in new and wonderful ways.

上面这个例句中,作者将自己的观点隐藏在了一个宾语从句之后,起到了一个欲扬先抑的效果。但是这种效果必须搭配一个展望未来才能起到渲染的效果。我们来对比另外一个例子:

In conclusion, physical punishment can be a useful method of discipline. However, it should be the last choice for parents. If we want to build a world with less violence we must begin at home, and we must teach our children to be responsible.

大家不难发现,2个句子都使用了相似的衔接方式,即首句委婉地回顾全文,将观点的对立面用"让步"的方式表达出来,同时也是对于主体段观点的回顾。然后再是用转折阐述自己的看法和观点。最后再用一个对于未来的期望来支撑自己的观点。这种顺序安排的优点在于对于文章的主体有很好的总结,但同时观点又是非常鲜明有力的,加上对于未来的润色,使得表达更流畅。用同样的方法,我们再来看第三个例句:

To sum up, although there are undoubtedly some problems with increased levels of education, I feel strongly that the country can only progress if all its people are educated to the maximum of their ability.

和前2个结尾不同,第三个结尾尽管也是先回顾了全文,但是它将作者的观点和对未来的期望写在了一个条件状语从句里。如此就给出了我们在构造"展望未来"时的一个思路,即搭配条件状语从句或者介宾短语跟在观点句之后。此种结尾发展方式同样适用于分析解决型大作文的结尾段布局,比如:

All in all, although the problem of drugs may seem impossible to eliminate, there are concrete steps that can be taken to weaken the hold of drugs on society. The danger from drugs is too great to ignore.

对于毒品对社会的危害,作者先是承认现状的无法改变,进而乐观地阐述了自己的观点即采取了切实有效的行动后可以减弱其危害。最后用毒品的危害性来对未来作展望。换句话说,在社会类分析解决型议论文中,我们在展望未来时可以考虑用强调其长远的影响作为突破口。又如:

In short, there are several things that the government can do to allow more people to finish school. However, a number of society attitudes also have to change if the country.

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it is good to learn at another man's cost.前车之鉴
the spector sees most clearly.旁观者清
the outlook sees the games best.旁观者清
the older,the wiser.年岁增长智慧
years bring wisdom.年岁增长智慧
offence is the best defense.先下手为强
to err is human,to forgive is divine.人非圣贤,孰能无过
other times,other manners.俗随境迁
a good thing is known when it is lost.失去才知珍贵
happiness lies in having many children.多子多福
each follows his own bent.各有所好
every one has his taste.各有所好
every rose has its thorn.没有没刺的玫瑰
do not throw the baby away with the bath water.别把小孩和洗脚水一起倒掉
the voice of the people is the voice of god。人民的意见最重要
every man has his liking.
different strokes for different folks.各有所好
one good turn deserves another.善有善报
as you make your bed,you must lie on it.自作自受
tit for tat.以牙还牙
great thieves hang little ones.大鱼吃小鱼
the great put the little on the hook.弱肉强食
the survival of the fittest.适者生存
parents are the first teachers of the children.父母是孩子的第一任老师
east, west ,home is the best.金窝银窝不如自己的草窝
ill news travels fast.坏事传千里
gossip is a fearing thing.人言可畏
good things stay indoors while bed things will go far away.好事不出门,坏事传千里
no garden withour weeds.有利有弊
where there is life, there is hope.生命不息,希望存在
as busy as a bee.非常忙碌
horse for courses.不同的人适合不同的工作。
everyone is equal.人人生而平等
so many countries, so many customs.风俗习惯各有不同
no man can do two things at one.一心不能两用
bend the willow while it is still young.修树要趁早,育人要趁小
a pet lamp makes a cross ram.宠坏的羔羊会变成恶羊
the loss outweighs the gain.得不偿失
the game is not worth the candle.得不偿失
a man does not live only by bread.人不仅是考面包过日子的
health is better than wealth.健康胜于财富
prevention is better than cure.预防胜于治疗
learn from other's strong points to offset one's weakness.取长补短
forgetting history means betrayal.忘记历史意味着背叛
an ill life, an ill end.恶有恶报
every man has his hobby-hose.各有所好
early birds catch worms.早起的鸟儿有虫吃
love me, love my dog.爱屋及乌
broaden one's scope of knowledge and widen one's horizon.拓宽知识面和开拓视野
no sweet without sweat.苦尽甘来
rome wasn't built in a day.罗马不是一天造成的
nothing is impossible to a willing heart.有志者事竟成

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