如何避免写出“官腔”范儿的雅思作文 雅思作文技巧：虚拟语气

雅思考试主要是通过对考生听、说、读、写四个方面英语能力的考核，综合测评考生的英语沟通运用能力，实现“沟通为本”的考试理念。对于雅思考生来说，也有很多考试难点和政策盲区需要帮助解答。今天雅思无忧网小编准备了如何避免写出“官腔”范儿的雅思作文 雅思作文技巧：虚拟语气，希望通过文章来解决雅思考生这方面的疑难问题，敬请关注。

如何避免写出“官腔”范儿的雅思作文

　　雅思大作文考的是议论文，即考查考生是否能够在相对较短的时间内搜集论据，具体地论证自己的观点。但受国内教育体制的影响，中国考生往往缺乏对这些社会话题的深刻思考和讨论，造成思考模式的僵化与狭隘，写的太“官腔。

　　雅思大作文考的是议论文，即考查考生是否能够在相对较短的时间内搜集论据，具体地论证自己的观点。但受国内教育体制的影响，中国考生往往缺乏对这些社会话题的深刻思考和讨论，造成思考模式的僵化与狭隘，因而论证非常空洞、缺乏说服力，写的太“官腔。

　　那么，应该如何对大作文进行有力的论证呢?最常用的方式就是解释和例证，几乎在每一篇雅思大作文中，都可以看见这两种论证方法的身影。

　　下面关于“work at home or study at home”的一段例证：

　　IBM, one of the business giants, has saved nearly 70 million US dollars in its northeastern region by promoting telecommuting, which has been a driving force to other enterprises to convert their normal working staff into telecommuters. Companies in Japan are one of them and plan to launch the scheme in 2009, which, in turn, spiritually wins more supports from the existing employees, and attracts new hires. 这段话中的2个例子(商业巨头IBM和日本的企业计划)都较好地完成了“若员工选择在家上班，会对公司带来积极的作用”这一证明。

　　此外，提醒考生们需要注意的是，雅思大作文明确指出“give reasons or examples from your own experience”， 这里的“your own experience”和“your personal experience”是完全不同的概念。前者是指通过个人的学习和总结而获得的经验，后者是指个人经历或周围某个个体的故事。如谈到“working hard produces better results”， “your own experience”的例子一定是“some 3-year-high school students usually stay up late to review lessons and prepare for next day classes”， 而“your personal experience”的例子则应该是“my roommate, Tony has always been working hard on studies and staying up late every night”， 不难看出两者的区别。故雅思大作文是不能使用个人案例的论据的，这一点与新托福的写作也是不同的。

　　另外，数据论证也是一个重要的方法，同时也是国外文章中非常常见的。使用这种方式，需要注意两点：数据和数据的来源。数据的真实性不重要，但至少要看上去是“真实的”。如：A survey by the latest Ministry of Labour’s opinion poll shows that more companies would like to open their doors to disabled people, as long as they can access to modern technology, and the rate has been increasing every year by 5% since 2003.

　　使用数据论证，提醒考生们不要刻意将数据夸张，这样反而会降低数据的真实可靠性。常见的句型有“a survey by….shows that / a research by….finds out that / a study by….suggests that / Statistics by….conclude that…”省略号的部分是需要根据文章的内容来填写的数据来源出处或机构。常用的机构包括：国外大学、学院、报纸、杂志、电视台、之声、网站、研究机构、民意调查等。我们按顺序给大家做一个示范：the University of Sussex, Business College of several European countries, the USATODAY, state media CNN, BBC Talking Point, , American Institute for Research, Harris Interactive Poll等，考生可按照自己的情况，来准备几个备选方案以供使用。

雅思作文技巧：虚拟语气

　　哪些雅思作文技巧可以帮助考生有效提高雅思写作的水平呢?雅思作文技巧是非常繁多的，而虚拟语气就是其中一个非常基础，同时非常加分的细节雅思写作技巧，小编也总结了一下雅思写作技巧中虚拟语气的用法，目前正在积极备战雅思作文考试的同学们不妨加以参考。
　　在雅思写作中会经常用到的几个雅思写作虚拟语气句型。
　　1.If * had done sth(坏事), * would never have done sth(好事).
　　如果某人过去做了某事(坏事)，那么他永远不可能做某事
　　If Hugh Miller, after toiling all day in quarry (采石场), had devoted his evenings to rest and recreation, he would never have become a famous geologist.
　　2.Sb would never have done sth(好事1) , never have done sth (好事2), if * had done sth (坏事)
　　某人永远不可能做某事， 永远不可能做某事， 如果某人过去做了某件坏事
　　The celebrated mathematician, Edmund Stone, would never have published a mathematical dictionary, never have found the key to science of mathematics, if he had given his spare moments to idleness.
　　3.Had * done sth(坏事) ， * would never have done sth (好事)
　　如果某人过去做了某件坏事，而不是去做某件好事，那么他永远不可能做某事(好事)
　　Had the little Scotch lad, Ferguson, allowed the busy brain to go to sleep while he tended sheep on the hillside, instead of calculating the position of the stars by a string of beads, he would never have become a famous astronomer.
　　对以上几个虚拟语气的应用范文
　　Group discussion Google
　　If Google had ignored the importance of group discussion, this high-tech company would never have achieved today's stunning success.
　　(If * had done sth, he would never have done sth)
　　Google, a once obscure, ailing / fragile company, would never have achieved today's stunning success, never have conquered so big a market share, if it had ignored the importance of group discussion.
　　(* would never have done sth , never have done sth , if * had done sth)
　　Had Google , a once *all , obscure company , ignored the importance of group discussion ，the hi-tech tycoon would never , never have harvested today's overwhelming success . (压倒性的成功)
　　以上就是小编整理的虚拟语气的雅思作文技巧总结，考生们可以根据以上给出件建议，并通过针对性的练习来逐步掌握雅思写作技巧，从而在雅思作文考试中取得更好的成绩。

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