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检查雅思作文的十个步骤 雅思作文找观点的几点常用原则(下)

检查雅思作文的十个步骤

  雅思作文写好了后,你检查了吗? 只要坚持注意以下几点,相信你的写作会有意想不到的收获。

  1.是否使用了正确的语法结构,比方说,动词时态一致、主谓一致、用词准确、词性(尤其是名词、动词、形容词)、名词单复数、冠词错误和介词错误。

  2.句式是否有变化 (如各种从句的使用、分词结构等 )

  3.使用了一定的词汇量 ( 如用同义词或词组来避免过多的重复)

  4.标点、拼写没有错误。

  5.在每段的主题句中都表明了这个段落的中心思想,所有扩展句都紧扣主题。

  6.使用了过渡性词语,因而句子之间和段落之间都有逻辑性和条理性。

  7.每一段话都得到充分的展开。

  8.提供了足够的细节、例子或论据。

  9.明确的观点。

  10.每一段话都紧扣文章的主题。

  1、3、4、6为考试时检查的重点,最先检查首段。

雅思作文找观点的几点常用原则(下)

4.权利自由原则
动物:
It is a breach of their natural rights to take them by force into captivity for our own purposes.
Animals have the right to be treated as beings of value in themselves, not as the means to human ends.
死刑:
The right to life is inviolable and protected by law.
One human right is the right to life and taking a life away by execution is cruel, inhumane and degrading.
极限运动:
People should be free to participate in activities with others as long as it does not affect the safety of non-participants.
摄像机:
They feel that being watched constantly is like being in a jail, and that ordinary people are losing their freedom because of these devices.
强迫老年人退休:
Compulsorily retiring old employees can affect the older individual’s freedom - and right - to work and can deprive society of valuable experience and insights.
禁酒:
Banning alcohol infringes people’s civil liberties to an unacceptable degree.
禁烟:
While a government has a responsibility to protect its population, it also has a responsibility to defend their freedom of choice.
新闻审查:
Banning advertisements is a severe restriction upon freedom of speech.
We have accepted that freedom of expression should have limits.
The risks of stifling free expression far outweigh the potential for unacceptable material.
An individual's rights end when they impinge on the safety and rights of others.
媒体报道名人:
Famous people deserve privacy and respect.
Although, generally speaking, the media should not interfere in people’s private lives, there are times when it is correct to do so.
母亲在家带孩子:
Mothers should have as much freedom as anyone else in society to decide what is best for them and their children.
家庭教育:
If they feel that the child would be best educated at home, by them or by another, that is their right.
控制人口:
They feel that this is one area of life where they have the right to make decisions for themselves.
分开教育:
Among these opponents are “equal education” advocates, who argue that every student has the same right to enjoying high quality education regardless of gender, race, wealth, and most importantly, regardless of their minor differences in intellectual abilities.
资助艺术:
So-called "elite culture" should be available for all to enjoy, and not just confined to the rich.

5.文化原则
1)文化重要性
捕鲸:
Whale hunting is an important aspect of some people’s cultural heritage.
建筑:
Architecture is part of a country’s cultural heritage.
语言:
Language is a type of cultural heritage.
Language is often seen as a badge of identity and more conflict may be created if the global community is seen to prefer one language to another.
电视:
Television is mostly directed to films and shows that have commercial purposes but little cultural value.

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