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雅思作文高分例文之城市发展类详解 3个阶段踏实积累

雅思作文高分例文之城市发展类详解


有几百年历史的城镇,似乎距离我们很遥远,但是仔细一想你脚下的这片热土早已饱经风霜,只是你没有意识到而已。本次考题的难度较为有限,首先城市发展与规划方面的话题算是较为常见。同时本题的提问方式是非常简单的双提问的报告方式。因此对于有一定备考经历的考生而言,此题应该不会给大家造成什么障碍。

例题如下:重庆环球雅思

There are many towns and cities designed and

constructed in previous centuries, and they are suitable for those times. What

problems are caused by this today? And how to solve these problems?

Visiting ancient towns and cities is seemingly thought as an significant part of people’s

traveling plans, whereas talking about settling down there people surely will

begin to doubt whether living there is possible and whether comfortable or not.

开头段还是一如既往地介绍背景和点题,由于本题的提问方式和以往的辩论型问题不同, 因此本段的点题也略有变化.

这类报告文章,通常情况下在开头段不会清晰阐述笔者的立场。

Eventually, residents in old towns and cities built and planned

long time ago are confronted with quite a number of problems. To begin with, narrow streets

there were designed before modern transports’ popularity, leading to the fact

that an efficient public transport system cannot be applied. In addition, pipelines for

natural gas and heating system, two considerably important social services for

modern lifestyle, cannot be in harmony with constructions built hundreds of

years ago. Metropolis in history are usually horizontal ones without any

high-rise buildings, and thus relatively *aller population is able to be

accommodated there, which is absolutely against urbanization regarded as main

task for most of governments worldwide.

本段内容只针对问题一。用排比的形式提出了现如今居住在古城里面的居民正在面临什么问题。本段罗列了三个主要问题,在真实考试中为了篇幅的控制通常两个问题即可满足篇幅要求.

It seems easy that governments can utilize modern technology to modify old towns and

cities for providing local people with much more comfortable living conditions.

Rebuilding like this, nevertheless, definitely ruins what our ancestors left us.

Instead, governments should make every effort to preserve old towns and cities,

and strictly control the population of who are willing to accept ancient

lifestyle and settle down there. Adjacent to old towns and cities, modern cities

should be planned by governments where residents can share more social resource

and enjoy more convenience brought by usage of high-tech in our daily life. Only

by this way, can those cultural heritages be protected perfectly.

自然而然地,

本段重点回答题干的第二个问题,既解决方案。只不过在观点方面, 笔者坚持了新城市的建设才是解决问题的关键。而任何对于古城的改造都是破坏。

Reforming old towns and cities with a couple of hundred years' history is completely an

unwise decision. Meanwhile, as for who like to enjoy a modern, comfortable and

convenient lifestyle, moving out of old places seems like the only solution.

3个阶段踏实积累 雅思作文不再是鸡肋

相比较雅思阅读来说,雅思写作的分值不及那么重;往往考生倾向于复习的过程中主抓阅读能力的提高,对于雅思写作则忽视很多。南京环球雅思培训学校老师指出,虽然雅思作文相较阅读分值不高,但是考生也一定不能忽视了这部分。并且对于雅思写作能力的提高考生们要记住这绝对不是一两天的事情,一定要经过一个比较系统的复习。

为了更好地引导大家进行复习重点把握,环球雅思专家老师为大家总结了雅思写作提高所必经的三个阶段以及阶段复习目标,以供大家参考:

第一阶段:掌握写作方法。

雅思写作有大小作文之分。小作文应该分几段,每段写什么内容;大作文应该怎么布局,内容和语言何者为重?这些都是必须掌握的。In other words,这一阶段就是掌握作文怎么写的问题。

第二阶段:语言积累阶段。

这一阶段要大量看一些好的例文。请注意,就算目标只有5,6分,但例文必须看好的,不能说考5分,那就看6分的例文。因为例文是用来借鉴的,一定要保质保量的。此外,单纯地听老师说怎么写怎么写,肯定比较抽象,所以要看些好的例文并分析,这样会具体很多。

第三阶段:练习阶段。

有的人把所有的希望全都寄托在老师身上,这是绝对不可行的!不是说老师靠不住,而是写作比较特殊,必须要自己动手写一下。否则,到了考试的时候,说不定都写不完(因为时间不够)。

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